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Posted: 4 years ago

Hilarious

Like geet me Too Wondering is maan acting or Is he meaning. Taking her To a room seriously maan You know whimYou are Playing with right

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi how are you and your family?


thanks for the pm and continuous updates...... as well as the award


Part 14

Marvelous update..... terrifically written

well so Maan is confused whether it was a good idea to invite her for coffee

MSK and usergirl meet.....

of cos they are shocked seeing each other

can just imagine their faces.

Maan did have a point as his DP was her car

at least she stayed for coffee

as expected she refuses the hookup

Maan likes to rile her

enjoyed their banter....

Geet knows how to turn the tables on Maan

loved his response....

he is certainly not phased by her actions

wow Maan knows how she likes her coffee to be made

is he really drunk?

why does he insist on going to his room


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

14

both maan n geet shock to see other as blind date

geet try to embrace maan but fail as he over power

enjoy reading their conversation

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Posted: 4 years ago

part 13

What are the chances they install the same app and pick each other? But it happened.

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Posted: 4 years ago

part 14

Both have to pull each other's legs. He knows exactly how she likes her coffee, so he paying attention.

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Awesome

Maan Geet coincidentally again met

Waiting fr next what going to happen Maan is not that much drunk

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Star Commentor Award (Part 14)

Winner: Creampuff, khwaishfan,

Runner-ups: UmaDevi.97, Alamelu

Special Mention: sanum23, coderlady

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Creampuff, akkub.92, maangeet.gmmg

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Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game&song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 15

G - You know I was kidding right... I really need to get back ... I am on duty tomorrow 5 am...

M- Don't worry we can finish few rounds by that time

She fake laughs

G-Hahaha…very funny!... Maan... Tum kab se yahan baith kar pi rahe ho... you are drunk talking a lot!!!

M-Around 1-2 hrs….Don't know. Maybe I am drunk why don't you escort me to my room and put me into bed?

Geet looks hard at Maan ki how drunk is he? How much is he still playing around? How much is he drunk talking

G – Maan, I don’t do casual hook ups. My friend’s setup a dare for me to talk to a stranger on this app. So, let's stop joking now and let me drop you home. Don't stay casually in hotel rooms they don't have clean beds.

M- I don’t wanna go home

He says with a dead pan expression

Geet is looking at him with a confusion ki kya kare

Maan gets back to his table and orders another drink

She knows she doesn’t have to stay but still she is unable to leave Maan and go

Geet is in dilemma ki kya kare? Whether to dump his drunk ass here and leave or drop him home

Fir Geet ne socha ki Maan ki mom agar sees this drunk Maan toh?

Maybe that's why he doesn't wanna go home

Maybe she should drop him to his hotel room

But Geet just didn't like hotel rooms, call it a glitch in her personality

Khud ke ghar le jaana is seeming to be the only option lekin yeh to extreme baat ho gai

Maan takes a sip of his drink while gesturing to Geet ki go...not looking towards her

Toh ab Geet sochti hai thik hai...mujhe kya

She takes a step closer to Maan

G-I am leaving

M-Yeah...go ...I can take care of myself

She notices his speech slurring

G-ok

She walks out and goes to the parking

Geet ko lag raha hai ki yeh aaj itna kis baat pe pi raha hai? Kaunsa gam galat kar raha?

But pata bhi nahi naa ki yeh normally aise hi piita hai ki nahi

Whether she should be worried or not

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Maan soch raha hai ki agar Geet kisi aur se chat kar rahi hoti dare ki wajah se would she have met with him and hooked up with this stranger?

Agar this would have been the first time he meets Geet then would they have really hooked up?

What ifs ki duniya, drunk mind plus loneliness deadly combo

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Geet parking lot tak pohonch jaati hai

Geet car mein baithne jaa hi rahi hoti h ki...something stops her

G-Idiot! (pata nahi Maan ko keh rahi hai ki khud ko)

She retrieves her steps and goes back to the bar (it’s a good walk both sides)

Bar bilkul khaali hai

She looks towards Maan ka table

She wonders that how did the bottles on his table doubled up

She walks closer

He looks much drunker

She rolls her eyes

G-Idiot! Idiot!

The manager seems to be haggling with Maan ki sir bar is closing and all

Maan's drunk mind is struggling to make out head & tail of the convo

She runs to the table

G-Stop harassing him! We are leaving

She firmly says to the manager

Maan ko lagta hai ki usko daant padi

He tries telling Geet that I am not harassing... but mostly gibberish comes out of his mouth

M-i...i...von...vas...n...arras-in

G- Of course you were not, Maan. He was harassing his customer

She glares at the manager

Manager- Mam please understand. We are closing. You &your boyfriend have to leave. We can arrange a hotel room

G-Thanks but we will leave now. Just give us few moments

Manager leaves

Geet removes the drink from Maan's hand

G-Enough Maan. We have to leave


Maan protests with his gibberish ki ghar nahi jaana ye wo...nahi jaana...dont wanna be alone

G-You won’t be alone. I will be with you.

She says sincerely looking into his eyes

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi how are you and your family? We are fine yaar. How are you and your family?


thanks for the pm and continuous updates...... as well as the award Thanks & super deserving


Part 14

Marvelous update..... terrifically written

well so Maan is confused whether it was a good idea to invite her for coffee

MSK and usergirl meet.....

of cos they are shocked seeing each other

can just imagine their faces.

Maan did have a point as his DP was her car heheheh Geet ko clean bowled kar dia answer se

at least she stayed for coffee

as expected she refuses the hookup

Maan likes to rile her

enjoyed their banter....

Geet knows how to turn the tables on Maan

loved his response....

he is certainly not phased by her actions he is used to the now

wow Maan knows how she likes her coffee to be made

is he really drunk?

why does he insist on going to his room We will see that


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

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geet leaves drunk maan in hotel saying its dare given by her friends to set up with stranger.

but after reaching parking geet is worried for maan n come back to take him with her n drop him home

maan refuse to come a he dint want to be alone in his heavily drunken state

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you ❤️ for pm.nice part

Why maan drunk so much Geet really care for him.

Waiting for next part

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