Star Commentor Award (Part 16)
Winner: Creampuff⭐️
Runner-ups: Umadevi97, Almelu
SpecialMention: ferdouz, Khwaishfan
EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): Creampuff,Swapna.p, akkup.92
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game& song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 17
His drunk mind thinks Geet is openly groping me in public. Reason- I have a nice ass… She wanted to grope it... she finds the chance and did it... she is super attracted to me
M-Geez...you...(he gives her a huge smile)...i like...you like..?
She is flabbergasted how can Maan reach this conclusion
G-F*ck you! idiot!
She takes out the key
She thinks, isko baaki kisi ka sense nahi hai, bakwaas ka sense hai
She gives some money to bar people ki take him to this room please
M-Geezzzzzzz!!!! be viz me..u said...
G-Yes, I am with you...they will help lift you...coz you are so great at balancing yourself
She comments sarcastically
Bar walon ne bola ki bass madam lift tak chod sakte hain
She says fine
Ab lift tak chod diya Maan ko
Geet & Maan are in the lift
Maan lift ki deewar pe tek lagake khada ho gaya...apne mann mein hi kuch gibberish bak bak
Geet is staring at him
G-Don't sit! keep standing...I can’t make you stand
Lift khuli dusre floor pe....ek group of people aaye...pata chala wedding ho rahi thi and this group was one of her colleague from hospital
'Hi Geet!'
Geet is like deer caught in headlight
She afraid ki ab toh gossip poore hospital mein phail jayegi
G-Hi Reema
Ab jagah dene ke liye Geet Maan ki side pe khisak gai
Maan drunkly keeps his arms around her
M-Geezzzz
Reema looks at Maan & then at Geet...with judgy eyes full of brewing gossip
Reema-Let me know if I need to cover for you in the morning
G-No...I will be fine
Ab Geet Maan ko pakadke room tak le jaati hai
Opens the room and drags him inside
She grabs some water after making him sit on the bed
G- Maan. Drink this or you will be dehydrated
She makes him drink the water
G- Swallow Swallow Swallow!
She keeps the water on the side
G- No shoes on bed!
She removes his shoes
G- Seriously! Wife or girlfriend does all this!
She mutters
G-Phew! We are done. Goodbye I am going
Geet ka plan tha Maan passes out toh nikal lo
She starts to leave when she feels her hand being pulled and she lands up sitting on the bed
G- Maan...wha...?
Maan keeps his head on her lap
Geet is blank
Ab Geet kare toh kya kare
Maan is saying something in drunk gibberish
She is bound to move her fingers between his hair
G- Maan...what's wrong...why are you so drunk?
She feels herself melting in the moment
M- I am a happy...vrunk...
G- I don’t see you are happy
M- Geezzzz...u zon know..u von unzerstand
G- Maybe...but what you are doing is irresponsible. You should have gone home
M- whaz home...i zon have one
G- Your mom will be worried...she isn't well...don’t get this drunk ever...imagine if you would have been alone
M- she dznt care...shez wiz tht man...she only carez abt him
Geet ko samajh nhi aa raha kya bol raha hai
But she didn't expect the Maan she knew to be acting so weak, the man who was threatening her father
G- Everything will be ok. Just take care of yourself
She was surprised herself with her caring words
M- You are zweet , Geezu
She repeats in her mind: Geetu????Did he call me Geetu?
He pulls her cheek
She is more surprised
G- Shhhhhh sleep now
She watches him passing out
G- Good night.
She plants a light kiss on his cheek
Geet looks at him intently for few minutes while he was sleeping
She leans forward and kisses him lightly on the lip
CID
Ishaani
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