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maan is getting flashes of his first birth after seeing sketches of geet

but are the real or impose by jyoti in his mind

maan admire geet's dedication n sincerity for her work

so jyoti was his life n geet was his love

Part 18

captivating update, well written

Maan gets flashes of past say previous life

so Chirag was married to Jyoti but loved Geet

well Geet was pregnant and gave Maan an ulitimatum

update soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 18

captivating update, well written

Maan gets flashes of past say previous life

so Chirag was married to Jyoti but loved Geet

well Geet was pregnant and gave Maan an ulitimatum

update soon

thanks for the pm

Welcome and thank

Nice update dear

Maan remember his previous birth memories

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

jUST HAVE TO READ ALL STORY!!!

FABULOUS PARTS BOTH!!

SO JYOTI WAS MAAN' WIFE AND HE AND GEET LOVED EACH OTHER!!

I HOPING MAAN FIND OUT ALL THE PAST

AND HELP GEET!!

CANT WAIT FOR READ MORE!!

PRIYA.. ITS SO GOOD TO SEE U BACK !!

KEEP WRITING AND WAITING FOR ANOTHER STORIES TO UNFOLD/

THNX FOR PM <3 :)

TAKE CARE !!

Originally posted by: tammana.m

jUST HAVE TO READ ALL STORY!!!

FABULOUS PARTS BOTH!!

SO JYOTI WAS MAAN' WIFE AND HE AND GEET LOVED EACH OTHER!!

I HOPING MAAN FIND OUT ALL THE PAST

AND HELP GEET!!

CANT WAIT FOR READ MORE!!

PRIYA.. ITS SO GOOD TO SEE U BACK !!

KEEP WRITING AND WAITING FOR ANOTHER STORIES TO UNFOLD/

THNX FOR PM <3 :)

TAKE CARE !!

thank u so much

mujhe yaad rakhne ke liye

Part 19 (10.04.2021)

He feeling mix emotions one side he is happy to get geet back in own life another side he is in pain to get remembrance of those memories where he lost everything.and jyoti name make him sad, anger…

His old room is another corner of that haweli… which is untouched from many years… no idea how much. but look from out is same… but from inner he knows now nothing is same…

Now he standing in front of that door where he makes aashiana for his love… he pushes the door little, and door is jammed now but he can go inside from mid… he removed the veil of dust. and coughed little…

He picks some torn and burned cloth from side table and sweep out the cloth then clean the painting which is half burnt…

This is first painting which he made by him of her… she looking so beautiful grey blue dress that day….

“bhaisaa kaisa laga aapko yaha aake

Chirag: ye kaha le aap hume

Yaha aana hum jaise logo ko sobha nhi deta hai

Samar: bhaisaa aap firse whi sb leke shuru ho gye

Chirag: aap ghar chaliye

.

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai

Jb aaye hai toh humara didaar kiye bina hi jaa rhe hai aap

.

He turns and sees her and just lost…

Samar: bhaisaa ab aaye hai toh nach dekhke hi jaaye

He nodded…

Her simple moves, her smile, her eyes, bangles all are dancing in her tunes… he smiled but next moment he realized it’s not good to feel like this… he breaks eye contact and try to see another side… her soft hand touch his hand and her eyes looking him so lovely… lovely… what am thinking… he stands and said samar chalo yaha se aur kbhi hum yaha wapas nhi aayenge

.

Humse koi narazgi hai aapko

Chirag: humapne bhai se baat kr rhe hai

Aur koi bich me bole hume pasand nhi

Samari nke paise dedo

Both left…

*********

One week passed out but he can’t forget her face… so he makes her painting…

.

Hum kyun aapke baare me soche jaa rhe hai

Hai toh bs aap ek nachne wali

.

Hume khi aur dhyan lagana honga

.

He closes the door and take jeep keys and left….

*********

He driving towards jungle for camping but someone suddenly come in front of his car…. He apply break but hit that lady …

Ye kya ho gya humse

He come out from car and look her….

Aap

.

Hume bacha lijiye unse

.

Sahab aap jaaiye

Ye ladki humari hai

.

Chirag make her stand and said aap log ho kaun

Aur ye tumhari kaisi huyi

.

One man said ye MEERA bhai ke kothe pe nachti hai

Aaj isne waha se bhagne ki koshish ki hai

.

Chirag look towards her, she said humne nachne ke liye HA ki thi

Na kiapna jism bechane ke liye

Hum ye sb nhi karenge

.

Aap hume bacha lijiye

.

Ye hota kaun hai humare mamle me bolne wala

One man held her hand, but she holds his shirt lightly…

Hum ye sb nhi pasand…

.

Tu chal humare sath

.

Her leg is bleeding, chirag can’t see her in pain… he held her hand then push that man and said ye khi nhi jaayengi

Another man tries to hit him but he punches on his face and said tum jeep me baitho…

After getting punch from him both men ran out….

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Chirag: tum thik ho

She nodded

Chirag: tumhara naam

.

GEETA BHAI

Chirag: ab tum azaad ho

Toh khudko is naam se kbhi mt pukarna

Aaj se tum sirf GEET ho

He no idea why he said all this…

.

Wo

Koi hai tumhara aapna

Geet: nhi

Bs meera MAA thi

Chirag: whi aurat jo tum bech rhi hai kissi ko

She nodded sadly

Geet: par unhone hum anath ko pala hai

Ab tak hume sbse mehfoos rakha hai

Kbhi kissi admi ki parchayi nhi pdni di humpe

Par aaj

Chirag:aaj kya

Geet: aaj wo majbur thi

Wo mujhe aange nhi krti

Toh Naina ko ye sb krna pdta

Aur wo toh nabalig hai abhi

.

Wo admi bhut hi takatvaar log hai

Us din unhone humara naach dekha

Aur humare sath raat bitane ki baat ki

Meera maa ne mna kr diya tha

Ye ladkiye sb nhi krti

.

Wo admi ussi neta ke log the

Unhone mere saamne Naina ko utha liya

Usse kamre me le jaa rhe the

Toh maine HA kr di

.

Usse phle wo neta humare kamre me aata

Meera maa ne hume bhaga diya waha se

.

Aur hume bhagte neta ke admi ne hume dekh liya

Chirag: naina ka kya honga ab

Geet: meera maa ne usse aur nabalig aur ladkiyo ko apne admiyo ke sath khi dusri jagah bej diya hai

Chirag: aur meera bhai ke sath wo neta

Geet: meera maa ne kaha wo smbhal lengi

Asi mushkile kyi baar aati hai

Kuch din mujhe dusre sehr jaane ko kaha tha

Chirag: wo kaise jaayongi tum

Geet: wo nadi ki dusre kinare pe mera koi intzaar kr rha honga

Wo mujhe le jaayenga

Chirag: wo bhi ydi us neta ki tarah nikla toh

Geet: aap meera maa pe shq kr rhe hai

Chirag what you doing …

Chirag: tum jaanti ho usse

Geet: nhi

Chirag: fir ase khi mt jaayo

Geet: toh mein asi rahungi toh neta ke log mujhe pakad lenge

Chirag: tum mere sath chalo

Geet: kya mein aapko jaanti hu

Chirag: toh jaan lo

He playfully said… no idea what he doing… he just don’t want she go

.

Geet: aap

Chirag: tum mujhpe vishwaas kr sakti ho

.

Ek ajeeb sa ehsaas tha

Dono chup ho gye

Geet ne NA kaha aur na HA

Chirag na jaane kyun usse jaane nhi dena chahta tha

Kuch dino se jo bechani thi

Na jaane ek pal me wo kaha kho gyi

His heart now in peace…. He stopped the car after half an hour in front of some home…

.

This is small house with one bedroom , kitchen and bathroom and little space out for siting and all around surrounded with trees and small plants and boundary with grill…

Ye kiska ghar hai

Chirag: mera hai

Mein yaha kbhi kbhi aata hu

Geet: bhut shant jagah hai

Chirag: hmm

Geet: aap yaha akele rhte hai

Chirag: kyun akele mein tumhe darr lagta hai

.

Mein bs ase hi kh rha tha

Tum yaha raho aaram se

Mein chirag Khurana hu

Khurana haweli ka naam toh suna honga tumne

Geet: sarpanch ke bete

He nodded

Ye jagah tumhare liye surakshit hai

Tum aaramse yaha raho

Yaha ghar ke piche ek cycle hai

Ek gali cross krte hi

Bazaar aa jaayenga

Jo chahiye mil jaayenga tumhe

She nodded….

Ab andher chale

.

Mera matlab hai ghar dekhlo tum

Geet: hmm

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One week passed like this, maan daily come to meet with her. Both start open up witht ime..

One day he come and sees she is not here, he check cycle also standing here…

Khi wo log yaha toh nhi puch gye

He run out from home and bang with her

Kaha gyi thi tum

Bazaar

C :cycle leke nhi gyi

Geet: wo bs padal jaane ka mann tha

C :mujhe kyun nhi kaha

Koi samaan chaiye tha toh

G :mera mann tha

He held her shoulder tightly and said tumhe koi andaza hai mein kitna darr gya tha

Tum mujhe nhi dikhi

Khi pe bhi

.

Geet: mujhe kuch nhi huya hai

C :khi nhi jaayongi tum

G :par ek din toh jaana honga na

Chirag pulled her closer, his lip touches her softly…

C :mein jaane dunga tb na

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teri meri kahani (bhoot aaya series 3)

part 17 on page 53

part 18 on page 54