Teri Meri Kahani/pt 32/pg71- 11 june - Page 34

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Part 17

Fascinating update..... well written

can understand Maan's concern

so he viewed the sketches

so Jyoti wants Maan

at least Jyoti did not enter Geet's body again

now Maan is aware of Jyoti's behavior

Part 17

Fantastic Update

Maan now is slowly realizing facts

though he still has to confirm many things

but one thing is clear that now he can speak

with Jyoti and she does not have to use Geet's body

Maan wants that Jyoti leave him and Geet alone

so is he remembering the time of Chirag

is that why Maan says then he was not hers and even now he is not hers

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maan is trying find jyoti n past life

is it true what jyoti is saying about three of them

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thank you very much for update

very nice

maan is trying find jyoti n past life

is it true what jyoti is saying about three of them

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Part18 (09.04.2021)

he seen the pictures of some statues and some corner of haweli… he living here from many years but never seen own house like that… really geet did great work.he smiled to see her hard work… in this haweli many rooms available… he also not rome in full haweli… first his uncles are so much possessive, I lost some where in this big haweli… many rooms not opened from so many years…

when he getting big from age, he gets busy in own life with friends and another activity…but now he wants to see those corners which geet portrayed or take out picture from here… one picture caught his attention… he looks carefully…

he takes her name JYOTI… she is in bridal attire…

ek baar humari taraf dekhiye toh chirag…

kya hum usse km khubsurat hai

.

She held his hand and said aaj hum firse ussi rang me saje hai jo humne shaadi me pehna tha

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Chirag: dur raho mujhse

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file slipped from his hand and he hold the head tightly and sit on couch…

jyoti: kyun dur rahe hum apne pati se

kyun wo aurat aapke karib aati hai

chirag: tumhe kuch bhi bolne ka haq nhi hai

jyoti: toh fir kisse hai

aapki us rakhel ko

chirag raised the hand but stopped in mid…

jyoti: maariye hume

ruk kyun gye

aaj tak aapne hume kbhi thik se dekha tk nhi chirag

kya kmi hai humme

chirag: koi kmi nhi hongi

par mein kissi aur ka hu

jyoti aap sirf humare hai

chirag: is janam me toh nhi

jyoti: aap humare nhi toh hum aapko ab aur kissi ka bhi nhi rehne denge

chirag left without hear anything from her…

.

Maan: jyoti meri patni thi

Toh fir geet kaun thi meri

.

He turns another page ….

In this some painting picture clicked by her… this is none another than ... she is geet…

Her tearful eyes, her unsaid words…

He looks picture carefully, in last CK engraved on picture…

Its mean ye picture chirag Khurana ne banayi thi

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Maine

.

Par kb

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He seen her another sketch …

.

He rubbed the eyes and no idea how he said GEETA BHAI

Chirag: kya huya geet

Tum thik ho

Geet: humse shaadi kr lijiye

Chirag: tum ache se jaanti hu

Meri shaadi jyoti se ho gyi hai

Geet: toh aap kya chahte hai

Hum puri umar aapki rakhel banke bitade

Chirag: tum asi baatein kyun krti ho

Tum jaanti ho na

Mein tumse kitna pyaar krta hu

Geet: us pyaar ka hum kya kare chirag

Jo duniya ke nazro me paap ho

.

Hum nhi chahte

Jo mere sath huya

Wo humare bache ke sath bhi ho

Chirag: tum ache se jaanti ho

Mere baba ki tabiyat thik nhi hai

Maa ki kasam

Jyoti ab baatein smjhne lagi hai

Geet: isme hum kya kare

Ye bataye aap hume

Chirag:waqt do mujhe

Mein baat karunga

Geet: kb aur kitna de waqt aapko

Waqt hi toh nhi hai na ab

.

Hum

Chirag: sshhh

Geet

Sb thik ho jaayenga

He try to hold her.. but she is so angry and hurt today… she don’t want her child also suffer like her…

Geet : Aap hume apni patni hone ka darza nhi de sakte

Toh hum is bache ko is duniya me nhi laa sakte hai

Chirag : geet

Geet : chirag

Aaj nhi

Galati humari hi hai

Aapki shaadi ke baad bhi

Humne aapko roka nhi yaha aane se

Ab hum uski saza is bache ko nhi de sakte hai

Ye is duniya me nhi aa sakta hai

Isse bhi meri tarah baap ka naam nhi mila toh

Ye bhi kissi kothe pe hongi

Chirag slapped her

Chirag : khabardaar mere bache ko

Kuch kiya toh tumne

Geet : aap jaaiye yaha se

Aapki patni intzaar kr rhi hongi

Chirag : mein khi nhi jaa rha hu

Geet : darbaan

Inhe bahar ka rasta dikha do

Chirag : geett

Geet : agli baar ye aaye toh

Inhe andher na aane diya jaaye

Ye GEETA bhai ka adesh hai

Chirag : geet shant ho jaayo

Geet meri baat toh suno

.

Mein baat karunga na sbse

Geet : aapke pass bs kuch hi din ka samay hai

Aap soch lijiye

Aapko hum aur ye bacha chaiye

Ya nhi

Nhi toh humne jo kaha

Wo hum kr denge

Drabaan inhe bahar tk chod aayo

Darbar : ji

Chaliye

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Chirag ji kya huya

Seeing his angry eyes, she takes step back

Aap hum ease mt dekhiye

Chriag : meri nazro se dur ho jaayo tum

Jyoti : hum toh

Chirag : jaayooooo

She jumped back hear his loud voice….

She come out from room; he closed the door on her face… her eyes met with mother-in-law….

Maa : hume laga tha

Ab tum dono ke beech sb thik chl rha hai

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Sb thik toh hai na

Jyoti just nodded and silently left…

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That day he paints her sad face….

Kitni khubsurat thi aap geet

Phli baar jb aapse mile the

Tbhi kho gye the hum toh aap me

.

Maan sadly smiles remember those previous memories… he stands and left to open that room which he makes painting of his geet… now he gets previous birth memory back…

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Part 18

Fascinating Update

Maan realizes that he has not even seen his entire mansion

while Geet has drawn them and he admires her for that fact

but the moment he sees a sketch of Geet he realizes that it was sketched

by Chirag when Geet had a sad face

Chirag was in love with Geeta Bhai and he affectionately called her Geet

Jyoti was his wife whom he did not love

now I'm waiting to see what Maan further does