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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

The last conversation of theirs was the end of maan's limit of bear. This was getting overboard now, till now he had hoped that she would change , no mother can hurt her child unknowingly , lest here she was giving his daughter a time that was making him distant from her. Every time khushi looks at geet , her little heart breaks into several pieces and he know that no one will be able to mend what was the result of geet's indifference , her adamance.

Maan looked at his wife , sleep was deprived from his eyes , he looked at her ,sleeping beside him and know that things would never get same even if he tries everything. There was a fear that has been always in his heart and now it was becoming big all thanks to his own wife. He couldn't forget what had transpired years back when she was as emotionless when they were married like she was now. The only love she is capable is to show to her son aarav. Geet's love for aarav and her hatred for khushi was so opposite that sometimes he has difficulty to believe that she was the one who birthed both of them. When she was a protective and loving mother to their son , she was not even a known stranger to khushi , this kills every time MAAN when geet pretends that she doesn't care , she doesn't want to do anything with her , he still couldn't stomach the fact that she could be the same person he knew from years yet she was no where recognizable now to him

It was like living with a stranger now , they were somewhere divided for their love for their children.

Maan's eyes dropped the tear that he didn't knew why even bothered to drop from his eyes , his wife was not even bothered about anyone's feelings but herself.

" did I become selfish that day geet , you wanted to kill that innocent soul. Those were the same words you said that day also. She smells betrayal to me .. Maan khurana , don't you dare to bring her near me .."
Maan still couldn't forget the day when he was so close to loose that baby who made him all hers. Blood doesn't define relations that he had understood in all these years.

Still he could feel the nervousness when he held baby khushi in his hands , he was the one who named her khushi , his happiness in the hollow relationship of lies and betrayal.

No geet , its been thirteen years and he couldn't see the apathy in geet's eyes for khushi.

The night was long for both maan and geet.

Geet was lost in the vicious cycle of the love and betrayal. She was the only daughter of handa's and carefree all that she asked was given to her but she couldn't get that one thing that she wanted. The person she loved with all her Heart she couldn't get him. She still feels the comfort that she felt in his arms , the love that used to be real for her. The day he left her she felt she had lost the trust , the feelings that she always felt for him.
She had given up on her life when she knew that there was someone breathing in her . she didn't felt hatred for her child at first but the more she thought about it , she found herself hating the mere reason of child's existence. She hated that the baby belonged to him. She didn't know why she felt that but when everything seemed to be blurred she developed a loathing for her child.

She didn't know why she hated khushi at first even she didn't even know what she feel , thirteen long years she had lived trying to forget the reason of khushi's existence but it didn't happen.

She closed her eyes as she saw that maan laid on the other side of bed. She never felt love for the man beside her. Their relationship was sometimes a comprise that she didn't know how he was bearing. Her heart couldn't love maan like she wanted , she had turned her heart so hard , created so many walls that even maan's kindness couldn't break those. She hated him sometimes but deep inside she knew that he will provide everything to khushi that she deserved he will keep her away from the shadows of her destroyed life. She had came a long way that even if she wants she couldn't change the past.

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That's all.

there is hardly any response on my stories on GF so i may not be updating anything now
rest depends on my mood too
Edited by suhaaana - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Damn sad update
There's so much of hatred in geet for khushi. Still m not getting why is she hating her???
Did something happen very strange to her??
And she hates maan too
Why soo??
Waiting for your nxt update
Pls do not stop and pls update sn
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good. Geet's hatred is deep rooted. She can't love Khushi since she is the result of betrayal
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nice update... What happened in past that geet hate kushi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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emotional update! superbly written! So Maan is nt Khushi's biological dad! bt he loves her as his own! Seems like Geet loved someone bt he left her! she was pregnant n didn't want the baby! Maan stopped her! Maan reflects on the past n his decision! Maaneet's turmoil well portrayed! Geet knows Maan will care 4 Khushi! she is nw emotionless! its being 13 years n no change! update soon! there r some readers who wait 4 ur stories 2 b updated!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG...what a story...how unfair right on Geet's part...poor kushi..for no fault of hers except being the daughter of the guy who left geet, so sweet of maan to fully accept this girl as his daughter...am even surprised maaneet had aarav considering they do not have any kind of relationship at all...how long can this go on..it has gone on for 13 years ..what is it going to take for either geet to break or maan to break...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I think geet is psycho.. she faced betrayal but who said her to crosd the limits before marriage... She did the mistake n punishing a child... How pathetic she can get...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
y geet not accepting khushi snd blaming hr
is that she don't want hr earlier
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
geet said she hates khushi becoz she rember the betrayel wat hapoen that geet is like this suprrb contine soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 1

wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan ki pain seeing his daughter how as crying due to his wife geet's behavior hurting his small girl..now my maan have to do some thing..i love te update yar

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago

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