MG OS : NOT A SHADOW OF BETRAYAL discontinued

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

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PROLOGUE PAGE 1

PART 1 PAGE 3 CLICK ME--->>>>

PART 2 PAGE 4 CLICK ME--->>>>

PART 3 PAGE 5 CLICK ME--->>>>

PART 4 PAGE 10CLICK ME--->>>>

Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

~NOT A SHADOW OF BETRAYAL~

PROLOGUE

she is yours , why can't you accept her as yours geet. Beti hai wo tumhari , you birthed her geet. What's her fault. Why are you not giving her the love she deserves. You gave her this life please don't be the reason that she will hate this very life.

His pleadings , his voice , his words fell deaf for her. All she could see was betrayal. The love that was betrayal and left her the symbol that she loathes. She hates the very existence. She hates her. But does she really or is she confused.
Love never demands than why her love was not so strong to keep her secured , cocooned in her embrace.

Questions and unsaid answered that's all she had in her life.

She knew deep within her heart who was she , she knew why she hates her but is it only her hate she is bestowing on her or something else.

She needs to learn before its too late to mend her broken relationship with her own daughter.

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PS : geet is not a goody goody character here , I am reposting it . Those who can't take her as bit negative or grey please don't read.

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago

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cutical

@cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

maan always negatuve so this if its geet its somrthing new it will be interesting i will read it update soon

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical
maan always negatuve so this if its geet its somrthing new it will be interesting i will read it update soon

yup that's true

geet is not intentionally negative but circumstances made her

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hai yaar..very shocking prolong yaar..geet hv some bad past n her daughter is the reminder n she is venting out on her daughter..hope she come out of the dark past.

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suhaaana

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi
Hai yaar..very shocking prolong yaar..geet hv some bad past n her daughter is the reminder n she is venting out on her daughter..hope she come out of the dark past.

thanks
last time I posted directly part 1
but readers couldn't bear it
this time m giving prologue first

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice prologue suha
Seems like geet is betrayed by her love...She feels her daughter as symbol of betrayal...
Who is the HE asking geet to accept her own daughter...
And who was HE whom betrayed geet...
U said geet will b a bit grey...
So I guess maan is not the one who betrayed her !!!????

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks 4 reposting! different concept! interesting prologue! Geet seems 2 hate her daughter! wt betrayal? he pleads with Geet bt she is adamant! update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago