MG OS : NOT A SHADOW OF BETRAYAL discontinued - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice pro
it's seem interesting
new concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intersting
geet has a daughter whom she hates
Is she illegitimate?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting intro
Looking forward to read it..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow another fav of my maaneet from u..very interesting yar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow lovely emotional pro..geet was living in her shadow of betrayed and ignoring her own baby..i love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1

The atmosphere was tensed when he stepped in the mansion , usually he was able to see his children there , his only daughter in the kitchen trying to learn something new from his mother , but today it was quite silent. The usual chattering was missing , he went to his room and saw that his wife was missing , all the things were messed up, a sign that geet was not in a good mood but why he wondered. He changed and went to check on his daughter, the lights were off and he could see a small figure curled up on the bed sobbing. Maan knew what had happened but he couldn't bring it on his own.

Khushi , darling why these lights are off , he said with a casual tone that she usually understood. But this time he couldn't saw her crying , something drastic must have happened , his daughter never cries for small things.

Khushi , are you OK darling ? He asked sitting beside her , she didn't budged like she was all lost , he touched her and she just fell in the protective arms of her father, knowing he will love her always.

What's wrong darling ? Why are you crying sweetheart ? Is everything alright. Maan panicked , khushi never cried like this.

She is not my mother , mom she isn't my biological mother isn't it dad that is the reason she hates me , she hates me because I am not her daughter.

Maan knew what geet has done this time , he was fed up with geet , why can't she just accept the truth and love khushi , she was a part of her and now an integral part of him and their life. Her behaviour , animosity with her is making him drift away from his own wife.

She is not your step mother , sweetheart and you know that , she loves you it's just she doesn't know how to show it. She is not like us , an expert in showing emotions you know.

Khushi looked at him with her doe shaped eyes , she was a true replica of geet , can't geet see that ..

Will you tell me what happened , maan asked as the sobbing was subdued and the tears were left on her face.

Nothing dad. , I think I will get some water she tried to leave but maan didn't let her , he wanted to know about the behaviour of his wife. Her attitude is getting so much hard to bear , now she is crossing her limits

Khushi , you are going to come with me from tomorrow, we will see what we have to do now. Geet has crossed the limit this time .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good. Khushi is the daughter whom Geet hates. What is the reason for this hatred. But it seems it is okay with Maan to accept her as his daughter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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emotional update! superbly written! Feeling 4 Khushi! Maan loves his children so much! Geet;s indifferent behaviour to her own daughter leads Khushi 2 question if Geet is a biological mom! Khushi is very much affected by Geet's behaviour! he consoles Khushi! Y is Geet behaving like this?? Maan upset! Maan decides that the Khushi will come 2 the office after school! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Geet hates her own daughter .. Khushi was crying. Maan consoled her. But what is the reason behind her hatred. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why geet hates khushi
And is khushi really not her daughter?

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