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Originally posted by: Commelina

Teaser

Originally posted by: aparna3011

waiting

Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff

This, to me is the most complex chapter by far, too many emotions, too much happening.

For a change, I could see a semblance of normalcy in Maan-Geet's relationship. That was some progress from acting as complete strangers and ignoring one another. There was kind of reversal of roles, him trying to talk and break the ice, know more and her shunning his advances, more out of embarrassment than anything else.

I liked this persistent Maan. I was not expecting him to try so hard to set things right between them. His conversation with Dev might have put things in perspective, but considering his past behavior, I feel he went out of his way to understand what was wrong and make things better for both of them. His willingness to give their marriage a chance, his trying to convince Geet to stay back and be independent showed him in a different light. It is difficult to figure out what he actually wants.

He sought JasleenJi's diary for solace. And why did he use "Ji" for her. It seems they were close, but he respects her and was not in love with her. Eager to know what role she played in his life.

Another glimpse of Ayush and Geet's school days. It was nice of Geet to do that, guess this marks the beginning of their friendship.

Eager to know what course will their life take, continue real soon please.

Originally posted by: vydehi

Beautiful update. Very well written. You portrayed real struggles in life very well.
I can relate to Geet's character. Not easy to tell about failures.
Maan is very understanding. Again , you are an amazing writer.