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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

This One shot literally got me in Maaneet dreamland
So beautiful,, so majestic,, so magical 😃 😳
Arrange marriage then fall in love what a great journey for some people 😉
Loved it 😃

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Does man like Maan in this OS really exist ?? And even if they do, count of them is like one in crores. And this makes me sad that chance of us having someone like him is so rare 😛 😉

This OS's Maan gave me that feel good feeling, Geet here was really lucky to have him, who stood by her, shared her pain and grief, gave her time, support and love to recover from it waiting for that 'One Day' when his love will be reciprocated and Geet made that day most memorable and magical with the way she confessed and said 'I Love You' to Maan ❤️

Enjoyed and loved it a lot ❤️

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Beautiful. So sensitively written. Really missed your writing so far I think . All the stories I have read so far doesn't do justice to your craft. The OS you have written last days. Superb. Loved this especially. Thanks . Please keep going and write more.

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Beautiful os...truely love can happen twice and when her husband is so nice how can she stop herself..just loved maan he was so patience to her..loved his pov how he fallen slowly for her..beautiful last part geet's touching confesson totally loved it

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Lovely cute os. Beautifully expressed the emotions of both. Loved the way Maan was patient with Geet, waiting for her to fall in love with him. These short stories of yours are so amazing.

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

this was amazing
enjoyed every bit of it
loved maan and his patience ...finally geet fell for him ..dat was real nice

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

One day...

The day of Confession from geet :)

Reminded me of ACTLA :I

Damn I'm missing the child Prem :(

Well coming back to the os :v

Really loved it..

The way maan was so understanding :)

Waited for the day to come when he'll hear the ILU from geet :)

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Amazing

Loved maan's pasense jiske aage geet bhi uss se love karne ke liy majboor ho gayi

Beautifully written🤗

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Awesome and lovely story..
Geet love her 1st hubby who is dead after marrying maan also..
Maan patiencely waiting for geet's love.. Silently loveing her and waiting for her confession.. Finally geet confess..