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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

hi thanks 4 another OS! superb banner! beautiful OS! terrifically written! Maaneet married! Geet loves Ashmit n he died! Maan assures her! he has fallen 4 her bt gives her space n time! Things slowly take its course! Maaneet get closer n become one! she is pregnant! Maan confesses bt Geet has some feeling bt nt love! Finally his patience pays off! Geet confesses why n hw she fell 4 him! Maan ecstatic! Maaneet have a cute daughter!

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

such a lovely and simple OS...

geet remarried to maan...love ow their journey progressed and how maan made geet fall for her...

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Oh god u r making me cry this story was so freaking beautiful such a beautiful depiction of true love , loved it to the core.

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Res

Will comment tomorrow.

Tomorrow has finally come. 😆

I loved reading the snippets on All I Ask OS. You should've totally mentioned in your post that this story is everything between what occurred in that OS. Because it'd have made sense even though this OS can be called a stand alone.

Their journey of falling in love was a sweet one. Like how Maan understood it was not easy for Geet to move on and waited patiently while he slowly and steadily fell for her. Nor once he complained or felt jealous of the way she pined over her ex husband. Instead he gave her all the time she needed and more.

And Geet though not yet in love, she had accepted Maan as husband and even moved on. The way she teased him about date and how it ends said she was willing to give herself a chance.

And all the rest of the moments were endearing and so tender and full of love. Be it their anniversary, or the time they went to Ashmit's gravestone, or when they became parents. Geet confessing her love after 3 years. It was all so so beautiful.

Ever since FFY, I think I've loved the process of gradually falling in love with your partner. Makes it sound more dreamy and romantic.

But really, are men capable of waiting for a year and half? 😛 😆 It's just kinda hard to believe. Especially when they're attracted and slowly falling in love. In All I Ask, I think, Maan didn't wait for Geet to fall nor did she shy away from fulfilling her wifely duties. That's why it took her 4 years to fall for Maan; after having two babies. But then, in that OS Maan was shown in love with her from the start of their marriage. So, I think it's understandable.

Enjoyed reading the OS. Simple but beautiful.

-Sanjana!

Edited by DimaagKaKeeda - 8 years ago

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: DimaagKaKeeda
Res

Will comment tomorrow.

You got me excited for no reason 😳

Phathetic

Thought I'd have something nice to read before going bed 😳

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: --B00KW0RM--

You got me excited for no reason 😳

Phathetic

Thought I'd have something nice to read before going bed 😳

OMG 🤣 🤣

I can understand the disappointment. 😛 😆

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Wow what a story... Loved it...
Wonderful story... Do write more

Edited by sweetysaran - 8 years ago

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

beautiful os .. it takes patience, trust n love that maan had for his geet which made her fall for him though ashmit has his own place in her heart but now maaneet too are complete.

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

its surprsie you giving now a days

and i loving it

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

That was a sweet update. Maan's truly a gentleman. He understands Geet's turmoil.

She's was married to her childhood friend. Though he is no longer alive now, Geet still loves him and cries for his depart.

But Maan didn't force or push Geet to accept their relationship, instead he had given her all the time for her to accept their marriage genuinely. They start of as friends and slowly it turns to be a beautiful love.

I feel that space is very important in a relationship, though being caring, understanding or others is important, but giving space to each other is very important. Everyone would love to be in arms of their loved ones, but at some point of time they still need their own space to do their liking. Be it just to sit alone, we still need that space only if it was given it us without any disturbance.

And since Maan had given her all the space and eventually made a place in her heart, Geet was able to move on with her live together with their little bundle of joy.

I salute Geet's father in law, Ashmit's father. Not all girls are blessed to have such person as a father in law. Even after losing his son, he didn't let go Geet but instead he had choose a guy for Geet's remarriage. He accepted Geet as her daughter and wants her happiness.

Maan did strip tease for Geet's grandma. That's the highlight!!! I'm still trying to imaging how .. Must be some kinky grandma. She's was already obsessed with Maan's firm butt, wonder how's she when Maan did the strip tease.

Wonderful story... niceee