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Posted: 9 years ago
maan hurt geet with his rude talk
geet was lost in him and maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great updates!

These two are constantly pushing and pulling at each other!

8 years?! That's a very long time and Maan is still not over Tara and does not want to live either!

I like Geet better in that sense, even she has nothing to look forward to in life, yet she has the will to live.

Maan was so damn rude and mean to her! Dumb bimbo?! Did he just forget what all that "dumb bimbo" did for him, to make him live and to make him happy!

He gotta pay for that and hope Geet does not forgive him easily!

Looking forward to reading more. Continue soon, please! 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 22

Geet turns and walks away hands clutched angrily

M-OK cool

Chala di gaadi

Geet gai super maket and black shades kharide, ekdum kale, wahi pehnegi ab se

Keh degi ki eye flu hai

+++++++++++++++

As she enters the house her landline phone was ringing

She happily picks up the phone knowing who was it

Ek bohot imp lady hai Geet ki life mein

Her very own cousin sis-Gudda didi

The person she shares everything with

She is very close to her, the person who understands her

Aur jis ghar mein wo abhi rehti hai wo bhi Gudda didi ka hai

Par uski didi only calls one in a month or so

She is married in Australia

Ye ghar bhi unka hai

Iss ghar mein waise to do rooms hain, ek room locked hai...as usmein didi ka samaan tha and Geet was happy with her one room

Normally Geet isn't a talker, didi bhi bass haal chala puch leti hai

Gudda did calls today and Geet sab bata deti hai Maan ke baare mein ki there's a man in her life and all aur wo dono usse aapas mein Maan ko vampire kehke bulaate hain as he comes at night and as Geet ne Maan ka naam nahi bataya hai because she loves calling him vampire or Goldlilocks

Geet bolti rehti hai about her vampire, how's it going and all

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As Geet meets Maan more she is getting more and more attracted

Aise hi kabhi road pe milte hain to Maan Geet ko lift de deta hai ki ghar chod deta hoon

Geet is like ..nahi chalo chalo...we will go out and will roam and tafri marenge

As didi ne romance ke baare mein khwab to dikha die

She isn't into avoidance phase anymore

She knows she loves him aur didi ne bhi himmat de di

Maan Geet ko apne office ki parking mein chodta hai saying ki

M-Driver will drive you to your home. I am busy

G-Why do you always do it? You act as if I don't exist who you are sober. Don't I mean anything to you? You don't even spend time with me

Maan looks at her

M-See Geet don't ever think you can take my Tara's place. You are just a substitute

Geet ko bohooot bura laga

Geet chali gai wahan se

Aise hi ruthna manana, realization attraction dono ke beech chalta raha bohot dino tak

Issi beech gudda didi ka aana tha

Geet ne flight aane ka time AM ki jagah PM padh liya aur wo to mazze mein

Inn sab mein as their relation was progressing Maan ko akal aane lagi ki Geet is the present and Tara is past

Geet came home sad and dejected after Maan's behavior of not giving her priority; his words that she was Tara's substitute had really hurt her

She had decided to show her self-esteem and dignity...no more running behind that ungrateful man!

She reaches her doorsteps

G-Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

She reacts as she sees Maan sitting at the stairs near her doorsteps with his coat hanging to his shoulder, shirt sleeved folded up and tie loosened, slouching yet sober

He looks up hearing her

M-I was waiting for you

She frowns

She starts to go past him but he holds her wrist

M-Hey!

She stops as her heart skips a beat as he holds her hand, grazing his thumb over her skin

He gets up; his lips close to her ears

M-I came here to say sorry

His warm breath blowing off little strands of her hair

M-I am such a foolish man, but you are beautiful

He moves and slowly kisses the curve of her ear

She moves her head and looks into his eyes

He looks back, as their lips come closer turning into a soft kiss

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She wakes up from her warm slumber finding him sleeping peacefully besides her

She couldn't even believe she was so close to him, she was with the man she loves, and they made love

She goes back to his warm embrace into sleep again

Subah hui...aa gai di airport se

Geet ka wait karne ke baad

Gudda di enters in as she finds the door unlocked

Geet wakes up with the sound and is shocked to see Gudda di right in front of her

Gudda di goes out embarrassed saying Oh I am sorry, I will be back'

She gives Geet time to dress up

Geet jaldi se hadbadi mein kapde pehnti hai

Khub koshish karti hai Maan ko uthane ke lie par wo to ghode bechke soye aur khinch liya Geet ko paas

Geet ne chudaya to mudke so gaya

Di aayi

G-emm..wo utha nahi...emm...UTHO NAAA

She shakes him

Gudda di-(smiles) Ohh vampire is in hibernating mode! Vampire hi hai naa

Geet blushes

G-Wo di...sorry

Maan hila adhi neendon mein uthne ke liye

Di bahar chali gai

Ab Maan ne kapde vapde pehne

Geet se pucha ki halla kyun macha rahi hai wo

Geet is full panic mode

She is jumping...dii..di..di utho utho!!!

Maan zara presentable banta h

Geet di ko bulati hai

G-Di...this i...

Di-...Maan?

Maan is shocked looking at her

Di turns aur chalne lagti hai

Maan follows her

M-Tara Taraaa!!!

Geet is dumbstruck

Di goes to the terrace

Maan follows her

Geet follows them

Par jab tak Geet pohonchi di as crying on his chest

Di-I still love you...we got divorced...Maan...I made a wrong choice. I love you

Maan was misty eyed

He embraced her in his arms

M-I love you too...I always did you are my love forever...I knew you would come back...I am so happy

Geet tis numb with shock witnessing the scene in front of her

Di-Will you marry me...I need you..I am alone...so lonely

M-Of course...I will marry you

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Posted: 9 years ago
🥺
Ye kya hogaya!!
Waiting for the next

Jaldi jaldi😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

saddy upfdate poor geet was tired of maasn ignorant behavior but still she loved him he even broke her heart by saying she is substitute for his love tara but he apologised and made up tara is geets di whom geet loves alot never in her life she would have assumed her di would be maans love who was shocked seeing her but geets worls shatters when maan expressed his love for tara and agreed to marry her poor geet idiott maan cant he see the true love geet has for him

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Posted: 9 years ago
shocking update
tara is geet's gudda di
maan say geet that she is substitute to tara can'nt take her place in his life
both tara n maan decide to marry as tara divorce her husband
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thats not fair.. How can maan ditch her like this thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
What the hell is this. how he can do this after spending night with other girl. how he can be ready to marry his betrayer just in momemts not thinking about the girl who has surrender herself for him. this is the limit he did not even look once behind before taking the decision. poor geet thats why she want to stay away from him coz she has feeling that this attraction will cost her alot and this happened too. very shocking part. waiting for outcomes of the decision taken by maan n tara.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God! I was not expecting this at all!

I just hate Maan! He has the gall to say that Geet is Tara's substitute and yet Geet gave into him. Stupid girl!

Gudda di is Tara and she is back! Maan just slept with Geet and he still loves Tara. So he just found Geet beautiful and nothing else, no emotions involved from his side?! Feel really bad for Geet.

And now that Tara and Maan are all ready to rekindle their love and get married. I can kill Maan right now! And maybe hit Geet for her stupidity!

Please continue real soon, desperately waiting for next.

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Posted: 9 years ago
yeh kya kar diya maan ne...aur di hai ki chudail hai...abb geet kya karegi...

painful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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