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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update, well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update!!
Actually when Maan is drunk the story gets interesting!!😆
He is pouring all his heart out😊
Again a sad dreams😒
Can't she have a happy happy dream?
Loved the update!!
Thanks for the PM😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Updates.. just realized I haven't read previous two updates 😲
Love the chapters.. Finally Maan drank alcohol, Geet kamyab hogai 😆
She had another dream,, I love drunk Maan better 😆
Dil ki baat zuban pe 😳
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ud
maan get drank but this time he don't have to go in geet house she's already their and lay beside him both slept peacefully
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Posted: 9 years ago
Funny update geet was trying to stop maan buy no use as again he finished the whole bottle he was very drunk but he wanted geet to stay with him forever geet was trying really hard to handle him but no use she somehow made him sleep and slept beside him she again had a dream buy it was good one as it indicates to be with maan but before she could hold his hand she woke up she was staring at maan trying to understand her dream later slept again she woke in the night maan went to office geet wanted to snoop in his home like he did
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update !! dii
thanq for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww geet is so cute. She is returning his favour brilliant. What he is doing in office that time. Is he ignoring her now. Her dream in start is pleasant but then confusing. Waiting for more. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 21

He snooped in her house, she would snoop in his

Her brain rationalized her crazy actions

Geet uth kar idhar jhaka udhar jhaka, bathroom kholke. bed ke neeche, table ke upar neeche

Thoda sa almaari ka gate bhi kholkar jhaka...he actually possess a tux!

Jitna jhak sakti thi jhaank li

Fir socha ki time to leave and if he took care, maybe they will never see again each other either

To jaakar kahin se ek page liya upar draw kiya wo trademark 3 -4 spike baal wala smiley

And writes-

Idiot, take care!

And now we are equal and not fair how can you draw better than me

Yours truly

The real Goldilocks

(Coz I have the same gender)

Maan ke bathroom ke mirror par chipkakar she left

Agle din hotel mein Geet kaafi busy hai

Real big koi corporate event hai

She has to go about holding a poodle

Bohot saare guests, bohot saare pets

Geet ghum rahi this uss poodle ko godh mein swing karte hue

Ruk gai jab saamne dikha Maan entering

The host is treating him as God incarnated

Maan to tashan mein in a conversation

Waise bhi she is shy aur dubak gai

She feels her heart pitter puttering

The dog senses her excitement and squirms

Geet doggy ko sehlaye, dhyan Maan par lagaye

Maan ko dekh rahi hai chupkar after al he is in tux

Sab event hota hai, khana-vaana hota hai

Maan is esteemed guest

Kuch girls to swoon kar karke himarr gai

Maan ne plate rakhi

Haath milaya host se

Chal pada

Geet machal rahi hai to just even go and talk to him...hear him say her name

She gets these slight jitters whenever he says her name nicely

Iss waqt his indifference hurts...hurts so much

Sidha Geet ke saamne

M-Eaten? You are coming with me? I am waiting outside in the car. Black merc 0672

Nikal gaya tashan mein

Geet jaldi se aa gayi bhagti hui parking lot mei

Wo seedha doggy koo lekar hi bhagti hui pohonch gai Maan ke pas

She hardly remembers much when it comes to Maan

Wo poodle haath mein liye she looks around for the black merc

He stopped in front of her wearing his shades, window slide hui door khula

G-Umm...what? Where are we going to go?

She says clutching dog to her chest like shield to from her destiny

M-That's some lady's dog

G- Huh ... oh!!!

She says looking down

G- Oh I have to return it! I...I... I'll be back

He nods

She whirls around and runs away

2 min baad ayi haafte haafte holding her stomach

M-Want water?

Geet gives him a small glare

G-Paas khadi nahi kar sakte the car? Do you know how hard it i to run in heel?

She says pointing down her long legs which have high heels on

Aaj event tha to pure hotel staff ko kaha tha ki thoda aur ache se taiyaar hone ko

M-Paas mein hi to khadi ki hai car. Hotel ke andar ghusa doon kya , Geet?

G-Tum...

She smiles at him then, very happily, he said her name, he could be forgiven for making her run so far

G- Hum kahan jaa rahe hain? I thought we weren't meeting again?

She says happily

M-Tumhare ghar. Tumhe kahin aur jaana hai?

G-Ummm... why are we... I thought... mere ghar kyun jaana hai? I mean if it is nothing important... I had to take early leave and you made it sound like an emergency

M-Ohhh...I thought

He pushes his brake hard

Zooo reverse gear mein car li

Swift turn maari

G- Stop!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!! Stunt kyun maar rahe ho!!?? I am impressed already!Sach mei!!!

She says holding to dashboard and to side door

Maan ne brake lagaya...zor ka

Jahan se baithe the wahin back to her hotel

Geet looks all scared stuck to her seat

G- Do you always drive like this?

She says looking wide eyed

M-What kind of question is this Geet?

G- You...you...stunt kyun maar rahe the?!

M-Stunt nahi, I just reversed the car to reach

G- You do drive like this... tumhe liscence kisne diya?

Thoda relax hui she jumped out

G- Tumhara driver nahi hai? You need a driver...sach mein you need a driver

M-I d-o-n-t drive like this

G- To mujhe kyun specially dara rahe ho? Maine kya bigada hai? I know I intruded on some personal stuff...matlab ab aese badla loge tum?

M-Geeet! Gooo. You are late

G-You called me out for this then?

She asked looking truly confused

M-Geet, I thought you had to go home but you said you have to be in hotel so...which part is confusing?

G- Oh...

She looks a bit red

G-Umm...I did take the leave now...

She shrugs unsure about everything, plus he was in tux, how can she think properly

M-Arghhh!!! Geet can't you stick to one thing? I hate dumb bimbos and mind ficklers!

Geet sits up back straight

G- Sorry. I am free now. But you don't have to worry about it

She opens the door and gets out

G-I thought you wanted to talk about something important so I took leave, that's all; and I may not have graduated but trust me it wasn't due to lack of brains

Geet turns and walks away hands clutched angrily

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaj mera shayad day of crying hai... Jyse kisine tap khula chod diya ho...😭
Har baat pe rona... Like seriously...

Maan was very rude to her...😭

Both me and geet are hurt

Okay so... Hi I'm ur new reader... Im reading this story from past one week...

I loved the different concept...

Which is so hat k😃

And thr geet of this story is quite unique with special powers not to forget...

Sach me mast story hai...

Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update, well written

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