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Posted: 9 years ago
what an ass r they both
what abt Geet

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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 23

He embraced her in his arms

M-I love you too...I always did you are my love forever...I knew you would come back...I am so happy

Geet tis numb with shock witnessing the scene in front of her

Di-Will you marry me...I need you...I am alone...so lonely

M-Of course...I will marry you

Di smiles

Di-Thanks

Geet to ro hi jaayegi

Geet comes in between...holding Maan

G-No...No!

She is crying

G-How can you? You love me...I love you...how can you...Maan I love you...I really do...

Geet looks so miserable and helpless

He looks at her

M-Listen Geet

He squares her shoulder

M-I am so glad you love me but you knew naa...I always loved Tara, I always told you, right? You are a very nice girl, a great person...you will find such a better man...I am sure; and I know you are not a fool like me to...live with your past. Move on, a beautiful life awaits you I am sure

G-But ...I love...you...why don't you love me...I love you...Maan...Maan..Maan...

She was clutching him while wailing

Udhar se Tara pulls him ki, let's go I have something to tell you

Le gai Maan ko

Geet helpless and wailing and all alone with her defenseless broken heart

Geet is remembering when Maan used to come to Geet drunk and all, Geet usko khilaati thi khayal rakhti thi

Kabhi Sunday ko jaata bhi nahi tha

Adhe kapde Maan ke Geet ke ghar pade hue

She would wash them iron them

Once Maan was drunk and Maan ki ma called him par Geet ne uthaya

Geet was feeding drunk Maan

Maan complained about Geet ki she is so bad...she feeds me every time...even if I don't want to eat...feeds me all the vegetables and all

Maa was impressed ki kaun ladki hai jo mere bete ka itna khayal rakhti hai

Maa spoke to Geet

She found Geet very simple and most importantly she cared for Maan..as much as may be not even his mom could...she liked Geet

Udhar present mein Geet was left crying

She thought itna karne ke baad ye mila...she loved him so much...and he doesnt even understand her love...she feels like a napkin...used and thrown

Geet ghussi ghar ke andar

The worst was, she was supposed to live with Tara, it was her house and Geet had nowhere to go

Geet ko pata chala ki Maan and Tara had decided to get married in a week

Geet feels she would almost have a nervous breakdown...getting all the shocks

Geet was unusually silent from that day, in zombie mode

She hardly uttered a word

All her energies went on refraining herself from wailing at every drop of a hat

She would lock herself in the room, speak to her animals only, hug them and cry

She thinks all those dreams and everything was jsut bogus

Maybe God also likes playing with her, God also thinks she is loony and crazy and born to be made fun of

Maan would visit every day

But these days for Tara

They would go on dates

He would bring her flowers and gifts and Geet would lock herself inside the closet

Geet applied for a job and decided to move out

She can't bear to stay there

She was also studying for some exam, correspondence se doing some course

She was always good in studies

But exam hall mein gai..puri sheet khali chodke...uthke aaa gai

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Maan lejata hai Tara ko ache se restraunt mein ordering her favorite cuisine

Tara snorts ki...my taste has changed...I don't like it at all

So pura order hatwaake, dusre restraunt mein alag khaana

Maan ka double pay

He had made pre arrangements, pura restraunt book kiya tha and all, sab pani mein

Di aayi

Geet ne door khola

Di ke haath mein itnaaa bada flowers ka bouquet

Patak dia

Geet looks at her questioningly ki inka kya karna hai

Di-Throw them. I don't like these flowers

Geet phenk nahi paati flowers

Ache se unhe paani daalke flower vase mein saja deti hai

Geet wanted to leave the house earliest but has to stay till di's wedding as she is family and Geet ke parents aa rahe hain shaadi attend karne, wo unse kya kahegi

Di ne Geet ko samjhaya bhi ki,

Di-Forget Maan. He only loves me, always did. We are made for each other. It may have been infatuation for you or may be just pity

Geet nods lightly

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Tara and Maan were alone

Tara-I am worried about Geet, look at her behavior. She behaves weirdly. Kahin suicide-vuicide kar liya aur naam mere par aagaya to?

Maan does not respond

Geet ne ek baar khud ko band kar liya room mein

Tara called Maan in panic

Maan ne door knock kiya zor zor se

Geet ne khola

Maan gave Geet piece of his mind

Khub chillaya Geet pe

Geet was silent and blank faced all the while

M-Why are you doing this? Tum pagal ho gai ho?

G-Tumne bhi to kabhi ye hi kiya tha

Geet glanced at Tara and walked out

Maan is jaw opened ki kya kare, kaise samjhaye Geet ko

Udhar uska conscience Maan ke peeche pada hai ki what you did with her?

Uska conscience smile karta hai dekhta hai uski taraf...mazze leta hai

Asks him

Kitna leti hai?'

M-Huh?

Geet. kuch to charge karti hogi'

Maan frowned

M-Kya bakwas hai! She is a reputed girl, ye kaisa sawaal hai?

Ohh...but she is no less than a sl**. You also treated her like one, isn't it?'

M-SHUT UPPP. DONT YOU DARE CALL HER THAT!!

He is shouting at his own self...

So you are saying you didn't use her? Used her for your own selfish means, slept with her and left her. You were devastated when Tara left you and you did same to Geet. Take revenge from the innocent girl, huh. Geet...a girl who did so much for you, every day. What a way to pay up!! Take every last thing from her...then leave her like a hot potato'

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Posted: 8 years ago
This Maan and Tara are too much!!!
Does really tara loves Maan this time or still she is just faking?
Poor Geet..why she had to suffer this much :(
Marriage bhi fix ho gayi 😒
Atleast Maan's conscience did say that he is wrong!!
Exactly!!! What is the difference between Maan and Tara
Both are selfish😡
Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan doesn't deserve her love
Geet shld walk away
she is not a use n throw object
n still Maan doesn't realize how self centered Tara is
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Posted: 8 years ago
hate u maan...

awesome update...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update, well written! Hate Maan n Tara! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan n Tara r so selfish! Geet upset! Maan feels guilty 4 wt he did 2 Geet! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Both maan n tara deserve each other ...
Poor geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
maan is blind in love can't understand Tara still using him bcz she not have any choice so she choose him if she get better
choice she again ditch him
geet stop talking to anyone maan Tara closeness making hr
more hurt so she decides to leaves from Tara's house she searching job too maan said hr to move on wen geet expressed hr love but seeing hr doing just like him he shout at hr fr behaving like him
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maan should taste of his own medicine 😡
Tara n Maan both are selfish
Poor geet,, bearing a heartbreak
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
its sad update to see geet
very nicely written

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