MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36

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CHARACTER SKETCH
Man Singh Khurana: 26 years old.
A rich, spoilt ,
careless guy
Savitri devi Khurana: Maan's dadi
who takes care of khurana empire always worried for Maan
Geet: 22 years old ,Widow of Rahul
Rahul Singh: Husband of Geet who died
Nandini Singh: Rahul's Sister
vikram Singh: Rahul's brother
Shalini Singh: Geet's Mother in law
Preeti: will reveal later as story will proceed
PROLOGUE
Geet and Rahul loved each other a lot. They married but fate kept stored other things. Her love died on the next day they married
Geet is broken completely.How will she live without her love ,her in laws will they treat her nicely after death of Rahul
Will Geet able to live without Rahul ? Will her life be filled again with happiness

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Do comment liked or not and advice for improvement are welcome
Hope you liked cs and prologue
Index
PART 1 pg2
PART 2pg 5
part3 pg 7
part 4 pg 11
Part 5 pg13
Part6 pg 15
Part7 pg 18

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part8 pg 20

PART 9 pg 24
Part10 pg26
part12 pg29
part 13 pg 30
Part14 pg 31
Part 15 pg 33

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story!!😃
Feeling bad for Geet..lost her husband on the very next day of their marriage!!
MSK is not as in the show!!!
Interesting..
looking forward to read this😃
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congrats on the FF! awesome cs! superb prologue! Geet shattered! she lost her husband on the next day of her marriage! update soon! pls add me 2 ur pm list!
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preeti
vikram
shalini


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nandini
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i gave main cs hope you guys ok with it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
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PART 1
Rahul belong to the middle class family. After death of his dad he moved to Mumbai from Hoshiarpur for job as whole responsibility on him.
He fell in love with Geet. Both loved each other a lot. But Geet belong to a rich family. So her family denied for her love towards Rahul.
Geet: Rahul I love you a lot. Main shadi karungi to sirf tumse.Nahi to mar jaungi.
Rahul: (kept his finger on lips) Aage se bhulkar bhi aisa mat kehna. I love you a lot dear. Rahul existence is only due to Geet. You are my life darling.I can't live without you
They hugged each other.As Rahul felt Geet crying he separated her and wiped her tears.
Rahul: Don't cry dear Please it hurts me
Geet: What should I do? My family don't want me to marry with you.
But her family didn't agree.They married each other Geet ran away with Rahul.
Geet: We married Rahul. But your family they don't no we married.Your mom will get angry. (Geet tensed)
Rahul: No. They will not. My mom always wanted that I should marry but I always avoided due to my job issue.But its solved and stable and I have my love with me. Mom will be very happy.
Duo Rahul and Geet smiled.
Rahul kissed her forhead and her eyes said her to take rest made her lie on bed. As he was about to leave.
Geet held his hand Rahul saw her and smiled. I know Geet what you want trust me I also want it more than you. I can't control but I want to make our first very special. Just take rest.I am going to make dinner.
Geet: I will do it.
Rahul: I know but princess take rest for today.From tomorrow you have to do it in your sasural.
They hugged each other.
In Rahul's home
Mr. manchanda ( neighbour of Rahul): Namaste Shalini ji
Rahul mom: Namaste Bhaisahab ,aaiye baithiye. Kuch kam tha aap is waqt yaha.
Mr. Manchanda: Ji haa aapke liye ek khushkhabri hai
Shalini: khushkhabri
Mr.Manchanda: Ji our Rahul he married and coming with his wife
Shalini: Really but he didn't told anyone about this. Aise achanak
shadi karli mujhe bhi nahi bataya
Manchanda: You know na how Rahul is I was having slight idea about it. he told me but took promise not to tell as due to his job issue. When ,Why,How it happened will come to know after when he will come here
Shalini: I was having some dream about his marriage.Mere ye armaan to pure nhi hue. But will do preparation for their welcome. Akhir mera beta aur meri bahu jo aanewale hai. Aapne to bahu ka naam hi nhi bataya
Mr.Man.: Her name is Geet
Shalini smiled: Boht pyara naam hai ab intzaar nhi hota.
rahul's sibling were happy as they come to know their bhai married
Precap:Welcome preparation
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for new story
nice update
continue soon

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Loved the first part
please update soon

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Great update
Geet run away with rahul married him
Rahul mother accepted his marriage

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