MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Rahul's family is not nice. Vikram stole Geet's chain and tried to sell it. But Geet saved him from police.He is also a gambler. Geet's parents came. Nandini talked to them rudely and asked them to take Geet with them. Geet refused to go with them. Maan has started going to office and asked Chandu to throw liquor bottles. Dadi is happy. Maan is thinking about Geet and her effect on him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start! Part 1 to 5 is awesome. Loving the effect Geet has on Maan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written! Geet is trying her best! Vikram stole her chain! she lied! Rahul's family unappreciative! Maan affected by Geet n changing! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
so maan did what she said

geet in laws are very bad

thanks for update

please do next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
nice part
geet took the responsibilities of house
but rahuls fam...grrr..
they still didnt understand her
maan has changed
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
nice ud
maan changed his lifestyle daadi happy
but another side geet in laws showing their
color they accusing hr fr rahul's death
and insulting their bahu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
awesome update

hope maan understand geet n help her to come out of that rahul house
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 6
Next day,
Geet gets ready for school , as she reaches in school peon hands her an envelope she opens it and reads
" Mujhe mere sare jawab mil gaye Maine sharab pina chhod diya"
At time when school ends, maan waits for geet parking jeep at distance as he sees geet coming out from gate drives jeep and stops in front of her.
Maan: School ki chhutti ho gayi. Tum baitho na tumhe ghar chhod deta hun. Usi raste se ja raha hun.
Geet: Jee nahi. Main chali jaungi
Maan: Aisa mat karo maine tumhari suni tum meri nahi sunogi. Mmm.. mera matlab hai wo letter padha na tumne.
Geet: Haa par kya aap sach main aisa karenge kya? jaisa likha tha
Maan: bilkul tumhari kasam
Geet shocked as she heard what he said.Maan covered up saying
Maan: Mera matlab hai tum baitho na gadi me warna mujhe lagega tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya.
Geet: Ok.
Maan dropped geet her at home , Geets says thank you ,maan see her until she enters in house and ruffles his hairs , smiles to himself and drives away.
After coming to home geet goes to market , While passing from route she sees old woman who was having difficulty in crossing road.
Geet: Aaiye maaji mera hat pakdiye main aapko chhod deti hun .
She makes her cross road and she comes to know she's going to garden so geet drops her in garden. Old lady thanks her. That time she sees nandini with guy who is hugging her. Geet shocks seeing this cause when she sees boy's face cause that guy is Ravi who was frnd of maan. Geet remembered how he tried to misbehave with her.
In garden,
Ravi tries to kiss nandini she responds. She says
Nandini: ye sab kya hai tum to kehte ho na ye sab shadi ke bad but I love you a lot ravi
Ravi : I love you too.
Nandini lefts saying she getting late. After nandini leaves , Ravi's gang comes. One of guy says " Ravi ye to tumhari jal me fas gayi and they smiles at each other.
Here , Geet who was waiting for nandini sees she's back she asks nandini " Garden main kiske sath thi:"
Nandini : Ravi, Mera friend hai.
Geet: Friends is tarah se behave nahi karte.
Nandini: Boyfriend hai mera sun liya khush
Geet: Nandini wo achha ladka nahi hai mujhe pata hai.
Nandini: mujhe kuch na batao wo hi thik hai. Main samjhti hu mera bura bhala kya hai
Geet: Main BA's isliye keh rahi hun ki tumhe kahi aage jake pachtana na pade khud ke faisle par.
Nandini: Done with your lecture. Thank you. Main dekh lungi mujhe kya karna hai.
Geet thinks to talk about this with vikram.
Geet: Devar ji , mujhe aap se kuch bat karni hai. Aaj kal nandini late late ghar aati ye aisa thik nahi hai aapko use samjhana chahiye.
Vikram was about to reply then nandini overhears it , comes and says" tumhara man nhi bhara na mere aur mere bhai ke bich zagda karvana chahti ho"
Geet becomes sad and leaves from his room
Vikram goes out with his friends
In bar,
Vikram: Ek bhi game nahi jeet raha har raha hun. Main paise leke aata hun.
He goes and asks money to same man.
Man : pehle ke paise bhi hai.
Vikram : Ha de dunga pach das dino me.
Man: Ek mahine bad holi hai. Holi ke thik dusre din mujhe paise chaiye. Yad rakhna holi ke bad. ek mahine ka waqt hai.
Next day,
Pinki (daughter of manchanda) comes to meet geet. Shalini makes her sit.
Pinki asks shalini she wants to take Geet with her. Shalini gives permission and says to come early. Shalini calls geet and leaves
Geet: Tum to nani ke yaha gayi thi na kab aayi
Pinki: Kal rat ko hi aayi .Boutique ka boht kam karna hai. Mujhe saman Lena hai. Chal mere sath meri help karna.
Geet sees shalini tries to find her just then pinki says "Maine permission le li hai chal jaldi wapis bhi aana hai"
Geet gets ready and leaves with pinki .
In km ,
Dadi: maan name market Jana hai chalo na hamare sath.
Maan: Dadi aap driver ke sath chale jaiye mujhe office ka kam hai.
Dadi: Kya maan aap me jab se office Jana shuru kar diya hai hamare sath waqt hi nahi batate.
Maan: Dadi aap hamesha mujhe blackmail karti ho. Chaliye jaldi
Dadi smiles at herself for blackmailing him.
They goes to market.
Coincidently they goes to same shop where pinki and geet were present already .
Dadi : Bete geet aap yaha.
Geet: Namaste mam
Dadi: Say me dadi beta pinki bhi mujhe dadi kehti hai. Kya kharida aapne bete pinki.
Pinki: kuch sadiya le rahi hun embroidery ke liye ladies ko boht pasand aata hai
Dadi: hame bhi bete aapka kam achha lagta hai.
As maan finishes his call he sees geet with pinki talking with dadi.
He comes and greets them.
Dadi: Chaliye hamari help kar dijiye much sadiya leni hai mere relatives ke yaha shadi hai unke yaha gift karna hai.
Ladies gets engrossed in shopping. Maan observing Geet and listening conversation
Maan thinks how god can be so cruel with her. That time he hears.
Dadi: Geet aap bhi kuch kharidiye na.
Pinki: Haa Geet, bhaiya sadiya dikhaiye.
Geet sees sarees and says " bhaiya safed rang ki sadi chahiye"
Dadi shocks says.
Dadi : Geet Bete aap vidhwa ho iska matlab ye nahi sirf safed pehnana hai.
Maan interrupts.
Maan : Dadi thik keh rahi hai. Tum to padhi likhi ho for bhi ye Sab.
Geet about to say something pinki stops her

Pinki: chup reh tu ,bhaiya aap colours me simple saree dikhaiye.
Pinki buys saree for her. They finished shopping. Dadi says them to come with them will drop them home .
They sits in car geet and pinki takes back seat. Maan observes geet through mirror.
He starts car and sees her every time through mirror he feels like magnet he is going towards her. He drops them home. Maan lost in thoughts.Dadi calls him and he comes outb of trance and drives to km.
In km,
Maan lost in his thoughrs .Dadi sees that asks him.
Dadi: Maan aaj kal aap khoye khoye rehte ho kuch bat hai kya.
Maan: nahi dadi.
Dadi: aap mere sath share kar sakte ho.
Maan: Dadi duniya kaha se kaha pohch gayi hai par kisi widhwa par itni pabandi kyun?
Dadi: Hume bhi ye galat lagta hai par kya kare.
They were about to discuss more. But doorbell ranges. Chandu opens door. Dadi asks kon hai chandu. They sees yash. Dadi leaves them alone
Maan: Tum yaha.
Yash: haa mere dost . hamari dosti in baki chijo she boht upar hain. Ye kuch bate hamari purani dosti nahi tod sakti. Wo to mujhe ravi ne bhadkaya. Par mujhe ehsas hai meri galtiyon ka.
Both of them hugs each other .
Maan : am happy mujhe mera dost wapis mila.mujhe laga ravi bhi mera achha dost hai par main galat tha.
Yash : I have to tell you something important.
Maan: say.
yash: you know ravi kaisa hai when it comes to girls. Wo rahul ki behen nandini ko fasa raha hai.
Maan : you mean rahuls sister , rahul who was husband of geet .
Yash: Haa maan,
Maan: achha hua tumne mujhe bata diya. Have to be careful.
Precap: Nandini meets ravi


Edited by priyal12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! well written! Maan falling 4 Geet! Geet sees Ravi with Nandini! Geet overhears wt Ravi sed! she confronts Nandini! Geet n Pinky shopping! Dadi sees them! Maan stares at Geet! she is abt 2 chose a white saree bt dadi n Pinky stop her! Maan admires Geet! Yash tells Maan wt Ravi is up 2 with Nandini! update soon

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