MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART3
Geet came out from shop. She bought some things needed. She was going to home. A jeep crossing from there and speed was too much. Geet was about to collide but she saved but fall due to it. Jeep stopped with sudden brake. Geet stood again.
Geet: Are you blind? Dhang se gadi nahi chala sakte.
As she saw alcohol bottles in their hands
Geet: Aur to aur sharab pikar gadi chala rahe ho. Sharam nahi aati.
( Geet was getting angry)
[ new characters Ravi and yash as maan's friend.
Ravi: Oh madam hum sharab nhi whisky pee rahe hai.
Geet: Shut up.
Yash: Maan panchhi kuch jyada hi angreji bol raha hai.
Maan: Panchhi gusse me aur bhi hasin lag raha hai.
Geet didn't like this way he talk and she gave tight slap to maan
Geet: Don't you dare to talk much. These are your manners.
Geet grabbed her things and left from there.
Ravi: Kuch jyada hi fadfada rhi hai uthakar farmhouse laye kya rat me?
Maan: No leave her, pehli bar hoshiarpur me koi ladki hai jisne mujhpar hat uthane ki himmat ki.Let's go.
In Rahuls home ,
Geet kept things in kitchen, kept money in front of shalini.
Geet: Maa ye paise rakhiye. Nandini aur vikram ke fees ke liye kam aayenge.
Shalini: We don't want anything from you.
Nandini: Ha, apne pass hi rakho.
Geet: Maa aisa mat kahiye main janti hun apko main pasand nhi hun.
par ye paise Rahul ke hai. Usne mujhe jo jewellery di thi usike paise hai. Rakhengi na aap.
At last Shalini accepted it. Geet left from there to meet Mr. Manchanda.
In pinky's home
Pinky: Geet come sit.
Geet: I want to talk with uncle.
Pinky called him.
Mr.man: Geet beta tum yaha...
Geet: Uncle I need your help.
Mr. Man: Haa beta bolo.
Geet: Uncle you know condition of our home. I have to work for this home I want to do job. I am graduate. I can work.
Mr. Man.: Yes Geet I will help you. Geet ek idea hai kyu na tum school me teacher ki job karlo. There's requirement. Hum kal hi jayenge savitri ji ke yaha wo humari madat karegi.
Geet: Haa uncle kal subah hi chalte hai.
Mr. Man: Haa aur jyada chinta na kar Sab thik ho jayega.
Geet thanked and left from there.
Next day
Geet and Mr. manchanda went to Khurana mansion.
Chandu ( servant of km) told them to sit as he will call savitri ji.
Savitri ji came .
Savitri: manchanda ji aap yaha kch kam tha aur apke sath ye kaun aya hain.
Manchanda: Aap to janti hai shalini singh unke bete ki maut ho gai hai. Ye...( manchanda hesitant to say as he treats her as daughter)
Geet: Rahul mere pati the.
Mr.manchanda: Geet sheher se hai padhi likhi hai naukri karna chahti hai. aap kal hi mujhe bata rhe the na ki teacher ki jarurat hai. Geet ye kam achhe se karegi.
Savitri: Haa haa kyo nhi. Beta aap kal se join karlo. main school me bata dungi. Don't worry. Aap boht brave ho beta itna hone ke baad bhi kamjor nhi pade. bhagwan apko khush rakhe.
Geet thanked her. Both Geet and Mr manchanda left from there.
Maan just entering to mansion gate with his friends They saw Geet coming out from there with manchanda.
Ravi: kahi isne dadi se hamari complaint to nhi kar di
Maan told them to leave he will handle.He parked jeep and entered in mansion
Maan: Dadi wo ladki yaha manchanda uncle ke sath.
savitri : wo Rahul Singh tha na uski vidhwa hai naukri karna chahti he.hum ne use teacher ki job di
aap kyun puch rahe ho.
Maan: nahi nahi kuch nhi bas yu hi puch liya.
and ran to his room.
Precap : Geet in school maneet meet again
Edited by priyal12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Thanks for your likes and comments on previous updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update dear waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
First meeting mai thapad😲
I like Geet's char in this..koi kamzoor padne wali ladki nahi hai woh👏
Maan be careful..warna u will get another 3-4 slaps😆
Geet got a job too...thats good 😊
Loved it!!
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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e update. Maan is a rude and awara guy. Geet came out of shop and bought some household stuff. Maan with his friends came in his jeep in drunkun state. Geet fell down. Maan and his friends misbehaved with her. Geet slapped Maan. Geet came home and gave money to Shalini which she accepted after lot of hesitation. Geet went to Mr. Manchanda to help her in getting job. Mr. Manchanda ttok her to KM to meet Savitri Devi and talked to her for Geet's job. Savitri Devi gave her job and appreciated her courage. When Geet and Mr. Manchanda were going out of KM, Maan came with his friends.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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maan with his friends all look like spoiled spoil brats
geet get job in school by Mr.Manchanda reference
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! superbly written! Geet goes 2 buy some stuff! Maan n his friends r rude! She slaps Maan! he is angry! Geet's mil refuses her help! Geet asks Mr Manchada 4 help 2 get a job! they meet SD n she gets a job! Maan sees Geet leaving the mansion n asks dadi abt her! Dadi says she is Rahul's window n wanted a job! Maan is spoilt brat! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start .. Looking forward for next update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Their first meeting went so badly maan and his friends are bed geet got the job nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Achha story hai and u r dealing with this very good enjoyed geet rahul ki vidhva hai aur maan ek spoilt brat good dekhna hai age kya. If u don't mind will u ease sendpm for. Me a new

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