MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice
gert is actually preeti
she feeling guilty that
rahul died due to saving hr
so she came to help his family
Mr. Manchanda get toknow the truth
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Posted: 8 years ago
NOTE
some readers have confusion related to geet and preeti . I will add the pics of chracters in next part . I hope that all of you liked the concept of story.
Thank you Readers for encouraging me to write
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeah!!! We liked this concept very much!!!
U r an amazing writer!!!
Eagerly waiting for pics and update :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n note! will b waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the note
waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
In this story Maan MUST love Preeti ..not Geet🤣
Thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
vicky is changed
its gud
he saw nandini ith ravi n que her
nandini blames geet for it too
geet hiding to come before vinay n dr. calling her preeti
manchanda que her n she tell how she became the reason of rahuls death
n how she decided to come here n help his fam as geet
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n cs pics! wonderful cs! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice picx but still I would say I m not happy . coz we love maaneet and geet is for maan only . the character preety she look like geet (drashti ) but her real identity is not geet . someday her real identity will be out . she is preety ..so when maan will fall for her it means he is falling for preety not geet .
so basically it would be maan preety story ?
I m sorry if I hurt u dear ..I just told what on my mind ..sorry if I sound rude ..please don't mind :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Note : Truth of Geet is revealed. But still i will address preeti as geet cause except mr. Manchanda and pinki no one knows the truth. I want to clear confusion as theres comment about when Geets parent come to meet geet how they didnt recognized preeti. Parents came to meet preeti and they knew the truth she leaving as geet as they want to meet her they came but were supporting her decision of living as widow of rahul cause of her stubborness. Also some are feeling it will be preeti and maan story. But trust me It will be only maneet story.
PART 9
Shalini: Geet main bahar jaa rahi hun. Sham ko lautungi. Vikram aur nandini college jayenge. Tum school jane se pehle chabi pinki ke ghar de dena.
Geet: Haa maa .
Nandini heard conversation between Geet and shalini and thought something
Shalini: Vikram tum mujhe busstop par sham ko aana lene.
Vikram: Haa maa.
Shalini left. Vikram get ready to go to college. He asked Nandini to come with him.She denied saying she is having headache. Geet heard it. She gave medicine to her. But Nandini didnt take it.
Geet : Main rakh deti hun. Tum le lena.
Geet left for school. Nandini called Ravi and they planned to run away. She packed her bag. Locked home. She kept her bag in near compound wall . Gave keys to Mr. Manchanda saying shes going to college. Then she watch here and there and left. She met Ravi. Ravi took her to lodge. She told her to wait in room. Saying he will do arrangement to go to mumbai. Yash had seen Ravi with Nandini. Just then he called Maan said.
Yash: Maan Ravi nandini ko lodge ke taraf leke jaa raha tha
Maan: What tumne use roka kyu nahi? Am coming. Tum bhi aa jao
Maan drove too fastly.
Nandini was waiting for Ravi to come. Just then man entered in her room.
Nandini: Kaun ho tum mere room me kya kar rahe ho.? Chale jao main Ravi ko bata dungi.
Man: Usne hi mujhe yaha bheja hai. Usne tumhe bech diya mujhse paise liye hai.
Man tried to touch her. She was saying to leave her.
Here maan asked receptionist about Ravi in anger. Rceptionist feared and told him his room.
Here in room man throw nandini on bed was trying to force her. She somehow managed to throw vase on him. But he again grabbed her and trying to molest her. She cried for help. Maan came on time he broke the door. He grabbed man and thrown him out of room fighting with him . He beat him very badly. He collapsed on floor. Maan was taking nandini with him. But man get up and tried to stab her . but yash reached there and hold his hand and saved maan. Maan called police. He got arrested. Maan took Nandini with him.
Here Geet reached home and saw a note on table " Maa main ghar chhod ke jaa rahi hun main aur ravi shadi kar rahe hai Am sorry mujhe ye karna pad raha hai kyunki aap ye sab nhi chahte the par main ravi se pyar karti hun."
As Geet read she felt her head spinning was thinking how sad will maa feel and vikram. She sat nearby chair feeling blank. Just then she heard noise of vehicle. She saw nandini coming with maan. Nadini ran and hugged Geet.
Nandini: Bhabhi tum sahi keh rahi thi. Ravi achha ladka nahi hai.
Geet: tum shanti se baitho aur rona band karo .
Geet gave her water. Nandini told her whole matter. Maan was feeling disgusting listening it. Once he was his friend.
Nandini: Agar aaj ye waqt par nahi aate to shayad.
Geet: Thanks a lot. Nandini ro mat ye note maine padha hai. Kisiko nahi bataungi ghar par.
Unknown to them vikram and shalini heard it but pretended they dont no anything.
Shalini: Maan bete aap yaha.
Maan: Haa wo school ke kam se aaya tha. Main chalta hun der ho gayi hai.
He left
Geet:aap dono baitho mai aapke liye chay banati hun.
Vikram: kyu wapis kyun aayi chali kyu nahi gayi us ravi ke sath. Shadi kyu nahi ki.
Vikram was angry. Geet was shocked.
Geet: Devar ji ye aap.
Shalini: Humne sab suna . is ghar ki kitni galtiyon par parda dalogi. Aur ye nahi sudhregi.
Geet: Nahi maa aisa mat kahiye. Use uski galtiyon ka ehsas hai. Maa maaf kar dijiye.
Nandini: Maa am sorry aage ke baad main aisa kuch nhi karungi jisse aapko dukh ho. Am sorry bhabhi.
Geet: koi baat nahi. Nandini, Devar ji khub man laga kar padhai karna aur rahul ka sapna pura karna hai.
They nodded . Shalini kept her hand on geets shoulder. Geet assured. Shalini gave satisfactory smile.
Maan came to home. Dadi talked with maan about marriage. Maan was avoiding again. He finished dinner. Came to room.Armaan comes to him.
Armaan: Tumne Geet se baat ki. Pehle hi nani tumhe lekar boht pareshan rehti hai.
Maan: Tu bhi haat dhokar mere piche pad gaya .
Armaan : Tujhe jald hi geet se baat kar le.
Maan: haa kar lunga yar. Tension mat le.
Armaan: Kahi aisa na ho jaaye ki teri shadi nani kahi kisi dusri ladki se karwa de.
Maan: Nahi... Main shadi to geet se hi karunga. Mujhe kal hi geet se baat karni hogi.
Next day
Maan as usual gave envelope to peon to give it too geet. Peon gave it to geet . Geet read it . After school Geet went to meet maan . Here maan was waiting for geet sitting near tree. He sensed Geet came
Maan: tum aa gayi
Geet: Aapne mujhe yaha kyun bulaya aisi konsi jaruri baat karni thi. Aur aap to mandir nahi aate.
Maan : Geet main nahi janta tum mere bare me kya socht ho. Par main tumse jo bolna chahta hun mujhe nhi lagta ki wo bat kehne ke liye koi aur jagah thik hoti.
Geet: Mere kuch samajh nahi aa raha aap kya bol rahe ho.
Maan: Main tumse pyar karta hun . i really love you so much . shayad tum bhi mujhe bigda amir samjhti hogi. Tum bhagwan me boht manti ho na. Tumhare isi bhagwan ki kasam kha kar keh raha hun main tumse shadi karna chahta hun.
Geet: Main ek vidhwa hun.
Maan: Geet tum well educated ho. Aisa konsi kitab me likha hai ki vidwa shadi nahi kar sakti.
Geet: Dont show pity on me.
Maan: am not showing pity on you. Main tumse boht pyar karta hun. Itna ki main kisi aur ladki ko apni patni ke rup me nahi dekh sakta . kyunki wo jga mere dil me tumne li hai geet.
Geet: par main shadi nahi kar sakti. Jis ghar ki main bahu hun unhe meri jyada jarurat hai
Maan: Hum milkar jimmedari lenge geet. I will also take care of them.
Geet: Shadi ke baad boht kuch badal jata hai . aap nahi samjhenge. Mujhe der ho rahi hai main chalti hun.
Maan hold her hand.
Maan: Geet jaane se pehle mere sawal ka jawab deti jao ,main tumse pyar karta hun . par tumne jawab bhi nahi diya tum mere bare me kya sochti ho.
Geet: Maine kab inkar kiya.
Maan: Thank you geet. Mujhe mera jawab mil gaya . maan tried to hug her but she was hesistant. Tum meri patni bano isliye to main apni aakhri sas tak intzaar karunga geet .
Geet felt shy and ran . maan ruffled his hair and smiled to himself. He ran behind her. He dropped geet to home.
He came to KM . Dadi gave maan photograph and told that girl with her parents coming to meet him. But maan was in some other world. Dadi kept it on table
Dadi: Beta aapne suna come for dinner jaldi.
Maan: Haa dadi.
Maan was playing with spoon . dadi said him to eat. He came out of trance.
Maan: Dadi armaan kaha hai.
Dadi: Beta wo chala gaya use kuch jaruri kam aa gaya .
He finishd dinner . went to room was thinking about him and geet. He said to himself main ye baat dadi ko bata dunga jaldi i know wo mana nhi karengi.
Precap: Rishta for maan



Edited by priyal12 - 8 years ago

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