MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update ..
maan is a spoil brat ..maaneet's first meeting and geet slapped maan .
now geet got a job ..let's see what happen next ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swapna.p

nice update..
continue soon..

yes will update soon probably on tuesday
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sagorika93

superb update ..
maan is a spoil brat ..maaneet's first meeting and geet slapped maan .
now geet got a job ..let's see what happen next ..


Thanks for liking story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Trying to reply everyone but if anyone missed forgive me net is too slow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 4:
In Maan's room
Maan was thinking about Geet slapped him. Just then maan's friends came and asked why she came he told them.
As usual in evening he and his friends started drinking. Maan drunk too much. Maan came to manaion . He was not even able to walk prpoerly. Savitri was sad seeing this. Chandu took maan to his room and made him lie on bed came out.
Savitri: Kuchh samaj nhi ata ye sharab pine ki adat kaha se lagi. Itna bada business hai par ek din bhi dhyan nhi deta.
Chandu : Aap maan baba ki shadi karwa dijiye. Fir unhe jimmedari ka ehsas ho jayega.
Next day,
Maan wake up with heavy head , Again he remember about slap. and thought something. Mr. Man goes with Geet to school.
In school,
Mr. man and Geet reaches in school and sees maan.
Geet: you , yaha bhi aa gaye.
Mr. Man.: Are maan ji aap yaha
Maan: Jee wo school ka kam dekhne aaya tha.
Geet was surprised the way Mr. man talking with maan.
Mr. man: Geet ye Savitri ji ke pote hai. Achha Geet main chalta hun. Maine principal se bat karli hai. You are appointed. Take care.
Geet: Mujhe nhi pata tha aap Savitri ji ke pote hai.
Maan: Kyun agar pata hota to tum mujhse aise bat nhi karti.
Geet: Nahi agar pehle pata hota to shayad isse bhi jyada bura keh deti. Koi aur jiska koi pariwar na ho to keh sakte hai ki sambhalne wala nhi hai isliye aise rehta hai. Par aapko lagta hai aap jaise behave karte hai wo thik hai. Itne achhe pariwar se hai. Apki dadai kitni achhi hai. Jara sochiyega jo maine bola apko apke jawab mil jaye.
Maan: Tum thik keh rahi ho shayad.
Main jarur sochunga.
He lefts. Geet goes to her class.
Maan comes to home. Starts thinking about what Geet said as usual in evening he, Ravi, and yash gathers. Ravi and Yash start drinking. But they sees maan still holding glass in his hands and he breaks one bottle of whisky
Ravi: Maan tumne bottle kyu fod di.
Yash: Koi bat nahi aur hai.
Just then maan empty glass on ground.
Ravi: Ye kya kiya?
Yash: Maan tumne kyun fek di?
Maan Maine sharab chhod di.
Yash: chhod di matlab ?are you ok?
Maan : Am ok .Aaj ke bad mere sath rehna hai to mere samne sharab ka nam bhi mat Lena.
They hears maan and leaves from there. Maan understands. Both of them were with cause of money.
Precap: Maan tries to start afresh



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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
hi thanks 4 da great update! well written! Maan goes 2 the school. Geet appointed! she is shocked seeing the man talk nicely 2 Maan! he tells Geet! she tells Maan hw can he behave like that! her words have an impact on Maan! he stops drinking n warns his friends! update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
very nicle update
reality check to maan
maan friends r there with him for money
but they left when they don't get that
nice precap maan wanted to start fresh
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Maan took geet's advice!!
He left drinks too...very good maan
Hope he becomes more responsible!!
Thanks for pm :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update
geets words have an impact on maan
and he decides to stop drinking
and warns his friends
he decides to start fresh
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Superb update
maan listen to geet advice love it and left the drinking


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