MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice ud
maan meet geet and drop hr at hr place and said wat he wrote in letter he means it
geet found about nadini relation with ravi she try to make nadini understand that ravi is not right but she didn't want to listen gert geet try to say vikram but he's also don't interested and wrnt to play gambling
yash come to maan and apologise about his prev behavior and told about ravi plan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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maan sent letter to geet
he drops her at home
geet saw nandini with ravi
she tries to make her understand ravi is not good
but she gets angry on her
yash says to maan about nandini
maan n dadi met geet n pinky in shop
he is getting pulled by geet
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
lovely part maan have feelings for geet superb update waiting for d next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
maneet meet maan tell ki ussne sharab chod di
maan started to feel for geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Geet is doing good to Nandhini but she is not listening
That vikram too going in bad ways...
Love is blossoming in Maan's heart!!!
Lovely that he is changing for good
Plzz continue soon
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update . maan is getting attracted towards geet ..geet saw nandini with Ravi . geet only wanted to warn her that Ravi is not a good guy but this Nandini grrr .
hopefully maan will able to help geet in this . continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: nadimilesagarse




Oh! Priyal12
Reading all the posts today- which is a very good characterisation and also developing a story - it my goodness! Read yours n others post also - good script writing - are you a script writer or do you write or pen something like short stories or write articles -good work - last some days had no time to read but today I really sat down and read evrything - GEET STORY -IT'S GOOD -REALLY LOVED IT-DO KEEP WRITING N UPDATING FOR I REALLY ENJOYED IT

THANKS
REGARDS



no am not writer , just geet and maan are my favourite . if have to write in hindi we can imagine freely as compare to english thanks for liking
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 7
Nandini again goes to meet Ravi.
Ravi hugs her
Nandini: Ravi hum kab shadi karenge kyunki main janti hun mere ghar ke log kabhi nahi manenge
Ravi: Main jo bhi karunga kya tum usme mera sath dogi.
Nandini: Haa kuch bhi , I love you Ravi.
Ravi: Hum bhagkar shadi karte hai. Hum mumbai jayenge. Waha mera friend rehta hai. Amir hai madat karega hamari
Nandini: main taiyar hun
Ravi : Hum boht jald shadi karenge dont worry.
Nandini leaves from there.
Maan again waits for geet at the time when school ends. He sees Geet coming out and drives then stops in front of her.
Maan: Aaj fir se mulakat hui. Tum baitho main tumhe ghar chhod deta hun.
Geet sits in jeep
Maan: Kaisa rha aaj ka din?
Geet: Jee thik tha.
Maan: Ek bat puchu
Geet : Jee puchiye
Maan:Rahul ki death kaise hui? Matlab accident hua ye pata hai par ye sab hua kaise.
Geets eyes welled up with tears she started crying. Maan stopped jeep.
Maan: I am really sorry. Maine tumko sad kar diya. Maine bas aise hi puch liya.
Maan drives and drops her to home. She runs to home and cries loudly.
Maan: Aise karke maine use dukhi kar diya.
Maan felt bad. He drove away.
At home.
Doctor sharma came to do dadi maa's regular check up.
Doctor:maaji aapke tabiyat me jitni chahiye utni improvement nhi hai.
Savitri: Kaise hogi ? Hamesha bas maan ki chinta lagi rehti hai.
Doctor: Maine to suna ki ab wo har jimmedari nibha raha hai.
Savitri: Haa par mujhe uske shadi ki chinta hai.
Just then maan arrives
Maan: Kaisi hai dadi ki tabiyat.
Dr: Not much improvement. Par ab koi chinta ki baat nhi main hun hoshiarpur me.
Maan: aap mumbai me the na.
Dr: Bas ek mahina hua hai yaha transfer hua.
Savitri: Maan ko aap hi samjhaiye. Achhi achhi ladkiyon ko na keh raha hai.
Dr keeps his finger on lips.
Dr: Bhai aap dono mujhe mat ghasito. Par maan tumhe shadi ke bare me sochna chahiye.
Maan : Dr uncle aap bhi and leaves from there
Savitri: Dekha aapne.
Dr: Ji maa ji dekha aaj kal ke bachhe bhi na.Achha main chalta hun.
Maan comes to his room. Goes to take shower. Cold water running over his body. But Geets face flashes in front of her. He gets fresh and sits to completes his presentation for meeting.
Chandu calls maan for dinner. Maan comes to do dinner. He completes and avoids the topic of marriage.
In room, Maan sits in study on chair reading file. Geet comes and takes file from his hands and blows on his face. Maan just wakes and realise its dream . Maan with difficulty somehow sleeps.But cant stop thinking about geet

Days were passing Geet was getting habitual to her routine and atmosphere of home. She always cared for them but they never understood her.
The festival of holi arrived. All performing holika dahan pooja. Geet was watching it from far.
Savitri devi also arrived with maan. Maan eyes was searching for Geet only. Yash was present there.
Yash: dhyan kaha hai maan Dadi bula rahi hai
Maan: ummm... Wo main haa chalo.
Maan performed pooja and Dadi too. Dadi was engrossed in talking with some people. Maan was searching for Geet. He saw her.and tried to talk with her.
Maan: Tum yaha kyun khadi ho chalo
Just then pinki comes and drags geet with her.
Yash: Kya hua maan tu khoya khoya sa lag raha hai. Chal tere liye surprise hain.
Maan: Surprise.
Yash : Tu chal to sahi. He drags maan with him.
Maan sees armaan and hugs him tightly.
Maan: What a pleasant surprise. Dadi armaan aaya hai.
Dadi: Haa haa pata hai.
Armaan and dadi smiled.
Maan: Matlab aap janti thi armaan aane wala hai.
Dadi: Haa to maine hi bulaya use
( Armaan: Maan's cousin)
Armaan touched savitridevi feet. Savitri to herself" shayad maan armaan ko bata de ki uske man me kya chal raha hai
Next day ,
Its holi.All villagers arranged holi party with help of savitri devi. Maan was getting ready .He wore white kurta. Dadi and armaan saw him.
Dadi and armaan: hmmm...
Maan : Kya hmmm main to bas aap dono ke sath aa raha hun achha nhi lagega main ghar me akela
Dadi: maine kaha kuch bola.
Armaan: Maine bhi nahi.
Armaan thought to himself kuch to hai " sahab kuch badle badle najar aa rahe hai"
All of three reaches to holi party .Dadi introdues armaan to Mr. Manchanda . armaan wish him holi.
Mr. Man: Pinki bete shalini ji nahi aayi.
Pinki: wo to aana nhi chahti thi par maine bulaya unhe phirse wo aati hi hongi.
Dadi: Samajh sakti hun jawan beta khoya hai unhone kitna dukhi hogi.
Mr. Man:Haa aap sahi keh rhi hai.
Just then she sees shalini coming with vikram and nandini.
Mr. Man: Geet beti kaha hai.
Shalini : Wo pinki ke sath thi aati hi hogi.
Geet comes with pinki. Maan sees her and gets happy . Armaan observes it.
But keeps silence .
Shalini: Savitri jee holi mubarak ho.
Armaan touches shalini feet and wish her holi
Dadi :ye hamare nati hai.
Shalini gives him blessing " be happy always"
Pinki comes with geet.
Maan comes to her he tries to apply colour and wish her happy holi. Geet holds his hand. And didnt let him apply colour. Maan realises what he was going to do.
Maan: Am sorry
Geet just smiles and folds her hands and wishes him happy holi. Just then his phone rang

Dadi feels tired she says armaan to take her home. Just then maan comes and says to dadi.
Maan: Dadi main office ja raha hun kal meeting hai uski tayyari karni hai.
Dadi tries to say something but he leaves. Dadi says all to enjoy.
All people playing colours laughing and enjoying. Pinki Nandini and vikram also goes . But vikrams mind is some where else. He then notice a necklace woman wearing. He pulls it and keeps it in his pocket and stand beside geet and shalini.That woman says loudly whn she realise necklace ia not there.
Woman: Mera har chura liya kisine.
Mr. Manchanda strictly says no one will leave the place till check not done he tells pinki to check all ladies. And he himself will check gents
Geet notice somehing in vikrams pocket then she realise whats it . she slowly come and pull it and keeps it in her hand .
Just then mr manchanda see geet clutching something . he tells her to show. He gets shock by seeing necklace
Mr. Man: mujhe boht bura lag rah hai. Maine sapne me bhi nahi socha ki tum aisa kuch karaogi. Geet mujhe tumne sabke samne sharminada kar diya geet.
Shalini: aapko sharminda hona pade aisa kuch nhi kiya geet ne. Main batati hun kya hua hai.
Shalni comes and tightly slaps vikram.
Batao vikram kisne churaya
Vikram: maine
Shalini: Vikram par iljam na aaye isliye geet ne iljam apne upar liya
Mr. Manchanda didnt want to increase difficulty for shalini and requested to forgive him last time and give necklace to woman, tell all people to go home.
Shalini: Mujhe maaf kar do main tumhe pehchan nhi payi. Bas bete ko khone ke dukh me andhi ho gyi thi.
Geet: Nahi aap mafi mat maangiye maa please.
Shalini hugs Geet . Geets gets happy and wipes her tears. They goes to home.
Geet: Devar ji khana kha lijiye . sab ne kha liya.
Vikram: Ab khana kab khana hai ye bhi tum decide karo gi. Sabki najro me mahan ban gayi mere aur maa ke bich faltu me...
Geet: Faltu..., Devar ji chori ki hai aapne chori. Maa ko kitna bura laga.
Vikram: jo kuch bhi baate samjhani hai school ke bacho ko samjhao mujhe nahi.
Geet: Ma ke bare me sochiye . kitne dukh sehne pade hai unko isliye wo itni strict hai
Vikram: Bas yahi ghar me hamesha tarif bhai ki kyun kyunki wo kamata tha aur mujhe kehte the ki main udata hun . aur jyada lad pyar nandini ko kyun to wo chhoti. Par compromise hamesha muje .mujhe koi samjhta hi nhi
Geet: main bas apko aapki jimmedari yo ka ehsas kara rahi hun is ghar ki jimmdari aap par hai kb samjhenge . mera kya hai mai aaj hun kal nhi.
Vikram: Enough ab tum bhi mujhe maa ki tarah lecture dogi kya.
Muje samajh aa raha hai tum kya kehna chahti ho bhabi par...
Geet: Chhodiye wo bate devar ji bataiye aapne wo necklace kyun churaya.
Vikram embarassed
Vikram: juwe me hare hue paise wapis karne ha to main...
Geet: Rukiye devar ji.
Geet goes and comes . She hand over money.
Geet: Abhi ye de dijiye baki hum dhire dhire de denge.
Vikram: iske bad paise dene ki naubat tumpar nhi ane dunga bhabhi
Geet smiles and says him to sit. She serves him. Shalini sees it and wipes her tears and feels happy says to herself " main tumse naaraj thi par sach to ye hai ki tumhare aane ke bad rahul ki kami mehsoos nhi hui " Geet sees her.
Geet: kuch chaihiye maa
Shalini: Haa main wo paani lene aayi thi. Tum bhi so jao.
Geet: Haa aap jaiye me ye sab khatam karke sone hi jaa rhi hun
Precap: Vikram takes responsibilities


Edited by priyal12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! wonderfully written! Ravi promises Nandini they will get married! Maan waits 4 Geet! he offers her a lift home! Maan asks hw Rahul died! Geet in tears! Maan apologises! dadi unwell! Maan avoids marriage topic! Maan nw attending office! Maan thinks abt Geet! Armaan arrives! Dadi hopes Maan will tell Armaan wt is bothering him! Holi celebrates at KM! Maan happy seeing Geet! Armaan notices! Maan abt 2 out colour on her bt she stops him! Vikram steals a chain! Geet takes the chain! Shalini tells Manchada wt happened! Shalini's nw nice 2 Geet! update soon

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