MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story.
Nice cs and prologue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. Geet and Rahul love each other. Rahul belongs to middle class but Geet belongs to rich family. So her family is against this marriage. Geet ran away with Rahul and got married. Rahul did not tell this to her family. His neighbour Mr. Manchanda told his mother about marriage. Rahul's mother Shalini is doing preparations for their welcome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Geet got married with Rahul
His family too happy with that!!
Nice update :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da lovely update! superbly written! Geet married Rahul a middle class guy! she is frm a rich family n loves Rahul! she ran away n gt married! his mom accepted her! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Geet rahul love each other But after married next day he dead her laws lovely caring her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rahul responsibility for his family he searched hus job
Rahul n geet loving each other but her family against her wish so geet married with him she can't live without him.geet scared thoughts rahul family.his family waiting for their bahu nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear !!
nice concept & character sketch..
interesting start ..geet ran away from home and married rahul .
rahul mom is preparing for her daughter in law's welcome ..
let's see what happen next ..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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geet loved rahul and ran away with him and get married
geet family was against this alliance
rahul mom come to know about marriage from neighbour Mr.Manchanda first rahul mom get upset bcuz she have some dream fr his marriage but she accepted to welcome them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
rahul geet loved eachother but geet father not accepting
both ran away and married
welcome preparation
waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2:
Next day
Shalini: Nandini beta do fast, Your bhai and bhabhi will reach here anytime. I want everything perfect for my bahu's grihprawesh, koi kami na rage
Nandini: kya maa kitni chinta karti ho aap main sab kar liya hai.
Shalini: Vikram kaha hai
Nandini:Bhai mithai lene gaye hai
Shalini: Ye ladka na koi kam Zhang se nhi karta. Wo log aate hi honge.
Door bell rang
Shalini (opened door ): Inspector sahab ap yaha. What happened?
Inspector: kaise batau maaji aapke bete ki accident se death ho gai. Hum unki death body lekar aaye hai
Shalini and Nandini were crying loudly as vikram saw it sweets dropped from his hand. he ran to Rahul
Vikram: Bhai utho na ,ye kya ho gaya maa
Rahul hugged Shalini and nandini and tried to calm them they were crying non stop.
Mr. Manchanda helped vikram to complete last rituals of Rahul.
All was looking dull as they lose their beloved. Mr. Manchanda and his daughter pinki somehow calmed them made eat them food.
Shalini was still thinking Rahul will come now and say maa I was joking see am here
Tear escaped from her eyes.Vikram said her to sleep.
Next day after last rituals
A girl reached Hoshiarpur asked some people the address of Rahul's hime . She reached there and knocked door. Coincidenly Mr. manchanda also came there few moments before.All of them saw who knocked door. They saw a girl wearing white saree. She came in.
Girl: Namaste maaji, I am geet widow of Rahul( Geet tried to touch her feet but Shalini moved aside didn't let her teach her feet )
Shalini: Why you came here? Cause of you my Rahul died. As you came to his life he died. Sari khushia chhin li ghar ki. Go away we won't need you.
Geet: Nahi maaji , aisa mat kahiye mera kaun he ab Rahul mere liye sabkuch tha.Now this is my home
Nandini: No you are no one to us.
Vikram: No you are not allowed to live here. Go please.
Geet was crying continuously
Mr. manchanda came in betn
Mr. man..:Ji Shalini ji apke ghar ke mamle mujhe bolna nhi chahiye. Jara dekhiye use kitni dukhi hai wo usne bhi apna pati khoya hai wo bhi shadi ke dusre din. Is ghar me uska barabar ka haq hai. wo Rahul ki patni hai.
Shalini: Look girl, Bhaisahab keh rhe hai isliye tumhe ya rehne ki ijajat hai
par hamare jindgi se dur rahna.
Geet thanked Mr.Manchanda
Mr. Man.: Take care beta. If you need anything don't hesitate
Geet smiled at him and touch his feet Mr. man gave her blessing.
Due to Mr. Manchanda she got permission to live there.
She was arranging her stuff in room she got. She came out of room to take some stuff she forget.
At that time she heard shalini talking with vikram and nandini
Shalini: Kaise chalega ab ye ghar vikram, Rahul ne puri jimmedari uthayi thi tumhari fees ka kharcha hamare pass to is ghar ke alawa kuch bhi nhi hai an ek hi rasta hai hum Sab ko ye ghar bech ke kiraye ke ghar me Jana hoga. vikram you search job
Vikram: How can I leave college? Only three semester left.
Geet heard their talk and felt sad she thought something and wiped tears and left from there.
In jeweller's shop,
She gives her earrings and bangles to jeweller and says
Geet: Mujhe ye girwi rakhna hai,Kitne paise milenge.
Jeweller: Beta iske 30000 milenge.
Geet: Jee thik hai de dijiye.
She takes money from him and leaves from there.
Precap: Maan's entry.Will they meet?


Edited by 7sanjiri - 9 years ago

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