MG FF: GEET PART15: PG 33 Note pg36 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice pt
both pt main shaadi ki shopping ho rahi hai
they buy all thing's fr engagement
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Posted: 8 years ago
happy fr geet sooo much...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
maan arranged date for her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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will update on 27 /11/2016
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Originally posted by: priyal12

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will update on 27 /11/2016

thanks...will b waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 15
Note: i dont have knowledge of rituals so bear me and my writing
All were busy for Geet and Maan marriage preparations. Finally enagement day arrived. All arrangements were done at KM.
Geet wore pink colour lehenga looking beautiful . Maan wore black Sherwani looking handsome. All guests arrived. Maan was talking with clients and waiting for Geet. Dadi was busy with guests. After sometime all saw Geet coming with Nandini. As Maan saw her he lost in her. Yash cleared his throat to grab his attention.
Maan: Tu kab aaya?
Yash: Jab tu bhabhi ko ghoor raha tha.
Maan showed him eyes
Maan: Yash...
Yash: Kya maan ? Kya hoga tera bhabhi se bhi isi style me bat karega.
Maan: Yash...
Yash: Aage bhi kuchh bol.
Maan: yaar tu bhi
Yash hugged him
Yash: Am so happy.
Just then dadi announced to start the engagement ceremony. Maan and Geet got engaged finally. All guests congratulating them. Just then someone came to greet them holdin gift box infront of face. Maan and Geet confused. The guy moved gift aside.
Maan: Armaan.
Armaan: Yes my bro. Congrats. Gave him hug. Tuze to yad hi nhi ki tera ye bhai bhi hai.
Maan: Nhi armaan aisa...
Armaan: Leave it. Congrats once again to both of you. Super jodi
Both smiled. All had lunch
After sometime
Shalini: Savitri ji hum chalte hai. Sham ko haldi ki rasam hai uski tayari bhi karni hai.
Savitri:Jee .
At evening
Hald preparation started. Geet get ready. Wore yellow suit. She was about to open door to go out. But someone pulled her. Geet was about to scream maan kept his hand on mouth.
Maan: Main hun Geet.
Geet: Aap main to dar hi gayi thi. Par aap yaha kaise aye kyun aaye.
Maan: Shhh... To see you.
Maan touched her face. She felt something She touched her cheek and saw its haldi.
Maan: ye haq mera hai sabse pehle.
Geet applied same haldi of her cheek to his face. Maan closed his eyes as first time it geet touched him. She saw his eyes closed.Before maan comes out of his trance she gave peck on his cheek. And ran from there. Maan was shocked he opened his eyes. But Geet nowhere seen.
Maan: Kitna sharmati ho geet tum. He touched his cheek smiled to himself and left from there.
Here Rahul's home
All ladies applying haldi to Geet. All were happy. Singing dancing
Here in km.
Dadi applied haldi to maan.
Armaan and yash left no stone to tease him.
Maan: Boht ho gya aur kitni lagaoge . enough please
Armaan and yash irritated him more.
Dadi: Ho gaya rehne do. Jao beta tum jaa sakte ho.
Maan went to his room. Called someone. After sometime man arrived with some things. Dadi asked him whats all this. Just then maan came.
Maan: maine bulaya hai dadi. Jao chandu sab saman room me rakhva do.
Dadi: Ye sab
Maan: Yu samjh lijiye dadi maa. Geet meri jindagi ka hissa ban gayi hai to main..
Dadi: Samajh gayi main and smiled left from there.
Maan was going in his room. Just then Armaan came. Called him
Armaan: Tujhse baat karni hai.
Maan: Ya come. We will talk.
They went in his room.
Armaan: Maan am so happy you will be with your love in short time . I get to know things how it happened Suddenly.
Maan: Am also happy. I love geet a lot
Armaan saw boxes.
Armaan: Ye sab kya hai.
Maan: Geet ke liye kuchh special karna chahta hun.
Armaan: Oho... Tu to bada romantic ban gya . uff ye ishq aadmi ko kya se kya bana deta hai.
Maan: Armaan..
Armaan: Chilla mat. Jaa raha hoon. ( winked at him) ran from there.
Maan smiled" i will make you feel special Geet" and kissed her photograph. He went to sleep then.
Next day, It was mehendi function. All were so busy . maan and geet also didnt get time to see each other. As Maan engrossed in arrangement of surprise.
In Rahul's home
Mehendi function was going on all things went well.
Here maan denied to put mehendi. Dadi's insistence he applied. But removed it immediately when it dried
Maan was arranging room as he was decorating room. Just then knock on door. It was armaan when he opened door. Maan didnt allowed him to be in.
Armaan: Andar aane de.
Maan: Nahi.
Armaan: Kyun.
Maan: Main Geet ke liye surprise arrange kar raha hun. I know tu andar aayega aur sab spoil karega.
Armaan widened his eyes.
Armaan: haa warna boora impression padega waisa bhi kaunsa dhang ka room hai Geet bhabhi ke aane ke bad thik lagega
Maan: Ho gayi bakwas chal jaa ab and slammed door on his face
Armaan: Areee maan sun to. He left from there smiling.
Dadi: Kya hua beta kyun has rahe ho.
Armaan:Nani sahabzade badal gaye hai
Dadi: Geet ka asar hai. Good night beta
Armaan: haa, Good night.

Precap: Maneet marriage .



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Posted: 8 years ago
welcome back
maaneet ki shaadi hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! wonderfully written! Maaneet get engaged! Armaan teases Maan! Haldi function takes place! Maan puts haldi 4 Geet! Mehendi function complete! Maan wants 2 arrange something special 4 Geet! Armaan teases Maan! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
prerituals of marriage going on
maan applied haldi to geet first
n she did same to him
n gave a peck
maan called someone n they came with boxes
maan arranging surprise for geet
n didnt allow any1 inside room too
nice part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update!!
Maaneet life filled with happiness😃
Maan applied haldhi or Geet😳
He also preparing surprise for Geet too😉
Loved the update very much!!

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