OS SERIES on Maan and Geet: TORN BETWEEN LIFE & DEATH updt on pg14 - Page 12

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi dhruvika

nice part

maan went to london ..

pammi doesn't wnt geet to have a girl child ..good that maa reaches on time and saved geet ..

thank u for lovely os

waiting for next

Originally posted by: doll.12

Hii... nice shot...!!

maan and geet happily married after ... Having gala time together and Vicky was also enjoying his time doing mischievous to his Bhabhi... Cute..!!

maan have to leave for 4 months ... Geet showed maturity ... And everything was going smooth... And then they got the news of geet's pregnancy... All were so damn happy of knowing it and maan was on cloud nine... Sweet..!!

MIL... Come on yar... Living in modern society still she have that old pov. Or at least ... If her past wasn't that good .. For a change she could work hard for the baby girl.. Thank God maan came in time.. And everything gets better ... Hope u write more

Originally posted by: vrinda22

really a sensitive topic

u have written very well

pmmi who was happy knowing geet pregnant

asked to abort knowing its baby

maan came at time

n dadi too

nice story

Originally posted by: tania90

loved it the way maan care for her nd his support nd pami to got to know that their is no difference between girl or boy

Originally posted by: deep002

Superb update dear, loved the way maan stand by geet , hate those people who want to aborted tje child if it's naby girl

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! Well written! Maan has 2 leave 4 UK! Geet is pregnant! Maan so happy! Maan's mom finds out its a girl n wants Geet 2 have an abortion! Geet shattered! she cannot get hold of Maan! Vicky tries 2 help Geet! Maan arrives in time! Maan angry! he wil take Geet n leave! Dadi arrives n shouts Pammi! she makes Pammi understand! Geet has a baby girl! Pammi happy! Maaneet have a son years later! wonderful end! 👏

Originally posted by: meera1803

First of all , I would like to mention that I just love the title of the story.

Undoubtedly quite a well written os in this series.

Shadi hui, pyar bhi hua , aur ab bacche ki bari hogi yeh shayad most of the readers have guessed but after all the overdose of romance, kahani me itna bada twist ayega maybe nobody could have fathom.

Really i guess hope so they would have thought like that😃

More over ur efforts should be praised for choosing a highlighted topic like this which so often taints our otherwise advanced and polished mindset.

Thanks for telling me to write on something intense as you wanted the serious topic credit goes to you.

Padhte padhte kabhi kabar laagi ki maybe u r going too fast but given its an os, the pace of the story do make enough sense.

Iske liye maan and daadi have to make that grand entry at that time only though it may look a little co Incidental and less elaborative on geet's struggle to save her unborn daughter.

Actually she was scared more importantly the fact was she was newsly married and she doesn't know who will support her or not there was a fear in her if she protest she will not suffer too every girl doesn't want that her in laws will leave her or abandon her... mostly if she would have been 3-4 years and it was happened may be by knowing everyone she would have strongly protested as she would have known daadi and vicky and vicky would have been independent too... and daadi would have been there too...

But in an os u don't really have much choice other than to compromise. Woh dono agar uss waqt nehi aate toh shayad abortion ki jaroorat hi nehi hoti.

Geet's helplessness was quite evident and her fright too. That span of time was surely hellish for her when she was asked to abort and if we remember this is the fear that gripped her much before when a matured and sensible Maan relieved her with his wish of having a healthy child over a BOY or GIRL child.

Vicky's efforts were commendable. Being youngest he atleast tried his level best to stand up for the right though he was quite effortlessly shut by his mother.

Thanks to dadi for putting some sense in Parminder's head.

There also u did a great job in portraying the shades of Parminder's character. She is not evil so try as much to hate her but we can't really. She too is a victim of circumstances which led her to think like this and manuever her thoughts in this direction.

That was me who got selfish i didnt want anyone will hate my character's and i wanted to my reader should know what the character has gone why she thinks like that what leads to this thinking of hers as i know nobody will think if there is no reason thats why included that part...

So ALLS WELL THAT ENDS WELL.

The names of the babies u chose were lovely. Accha laaga that u looked after the details so meticulously. The names were apt, justifying the essence of the story.

That i have thought and planned from the start that i will name them as blessings so search then name which meant blessing and find these name "Aksa" and "Aarul" So named them.😃😃😃😃

Chalo I'm stopping here warna comment os se zyada badi ho jayegi. He he he .

Waiting for more add ups in this series.

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Thanks for commenting dear... how was your exam and lets see depends upon my mood ...😃