OS SERIES on Maan and Geet: TORN BETWEEN LIFE & DEATH updt on pg14

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! Well written! Maan has 2 leave 4 UK! Geet is pregnant! Maan so happy! Maan's mom finds out its a girl n wants Geet 2 have an abortion! Geet shattered! she cannot get hold of Maan! Vicky tries 2 help Geet! Maan arrives in time! Maan angry! he wil take Geet n leave! Dadi arrives n shouts Pammi! she makes Pammi understand! Geet has a baby girl! Pammi happy! Maaneet have a son years later! wonderful end! 👏

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janu2006

@janu2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

beautiful os

thanks for pm dear

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

wonderful update..
thank u for pm..

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

already read this os in GHSP celebration thread and commented too...

it was awesome one

loved it!

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Thanks for the PM

Awesome Part

Geet was pregnant while Maan in London on business trip, Maan,s mother wanted to abort the child as she was a girl, how could she stop so low, Maan came on time and saved Geet and dadi also came and made Maan,s mom understand, maneet having two cuties, loved it

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meera1803

@meera1803

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

First of all , I would like to mention that I just love the title of the story.

Undoubtedly quite a well written os in this series.

Shadi hui, pyar bhi hua , aur ab bacche ki bari hogi yeh shayad most of the readers have guessed but after all the overdose of romance, kahani me itna bada twist ayega maybe nobody could have fathom.

More over ur efforts should be praised for choosing a highlighted topic like this which so oftentaints our otherwise advanced and polished mindset.

Padhte padhte kabhi kabar laagi ki maybe u r gointtoo fast but given its an os, the pace of the story do make enough sense. Iske liye maan and daadi have to make that grand entry at that time only though it may look a little co Incidental and less elaborative on geet's struggle to save her unborn daughter. But in an os u don't really have much choice other than to compromise. Woh dono agar uss waqt nehi aate toh shayad abortion ki jaroorat hi nehi hoti.

Geet's helplessness was quite evident and her fright too. That span of time was surely hellish for her when she was asked to abort and if we remember this is the fear that gripped her much before when a matured and sensible Maan relieved her with his wish of having a healthy child over a BOY or GIRL child.

Vicky's efforts were commendable. Being youngest he atleast tried his level best to stand up for the right though he was quite effortlessly shut by his mother.

Thanks to dadi for putting some sense in Parminder's head. There also u did a great job in portraying the shades of Parminder's character. She is not evil so try as much to hate her but we can't really. She too is a victim of circumstances which led her to think like this and manuever her thoughts in this direction.

So ALLS WELL THAT ENDS WELL. The names of the babies u chose were lovely. Accha laaga that u looked after the details so meticulously. The names were apt, justifying the essence of the story.

Chalo I'm stopping here warna comment os se zyada badi ho jayegi. He he he .

Waiting for more add ups in this series.

Edited by meera1803 - 9 years ago

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Hai
Wow sacred relation part 1 was really romantic.
Maan took care of his shy wife yet he loved her with her permission .
Really a nice romantic work,with a beautiful song

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Part 2
Wow maan was really understanding.
He knew something was bothering geet and in his sweet way he consoled her and gave strength to her to have a baby girl.
Urghhh this pammi,i just hate her

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Part 3
It's dhamaka dear
I loved it even though I thought pammi as villian but she proved otherwise
Well kya entry Masti maan and dadi neh
That was SOOO nice to read
Happily ever after wow
Nice

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: priya_21
AWESOM SERIES
TWO PERSON GET MARRIED GOD TIED TWO STRANGERS IN BEAUTIFUL RELATIONS... I LOVED THIS CONCEPT SO MUCH ...HOLE HOLE HO JAAYENGA PYAAR BALIYE... 😉

THEN BOTH TAKE STEP FORWARD GOING TO BECOME PARENTS... AND THEN OUR CRUEL THINKING ABOUT GIRL AND BOY CHILD... SUPERB WRITED

Thanks 😃