OS SERIES on Maan and Geet: TORN BETWEEN LIFE & DEATH updt on pg14

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Beautiful end
Keep writing 😊

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Priya21

@priya_21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

AWESOM SERIES

TWO PERSON GET MARRIED GOD TIED TWO STRANGERS IN BEAUTIFUL RELATIONS... I LOVED THIS CONCEPT SO MUCH ...HOLE HOLE HO JAAYENGA PYAAR BALIYE... 😉

THEN BOTH TAKE STEP FORWARD GOING TO BECOME PARENTS... AND THEN OUR CRUEL THINKING ABOUT GIRL AND BOY CHILD... SUPERB WRITED

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

hi dhruvika

nice part

maan went to london ..

pammi doesn't wnt geet to have a girl child ..good that maa reaches on time and saved geet ..

thank u for lovely os

waiting for next

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Hii... nice shot...!!

maan and geet happily married after ... Having gala time together and Vicky was also enjoying his time doing mischievous to his Bhabhi... Cute..!!

maan have to leave for 4 months ... Geet showed maturity ... And everything was going smooth... And then they got the news of geet's pregnancy... All were so damn happy of knowing it and maan was on cloud nine... Sweet..!!

MIL... Come on yar... Living in modern society still she have that old pov. Or at least ... If her past wasn't that good .. For a change she could work hard for the baby girl.. Thank God maan came in time.. And everything gets better ... Hope u write more

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

really a sensitive topic

u have written very well

pmmi who was happy knowing geet pregnant

asked to abort knowing its baby

maan came at time

n dadi too

nice story

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Superb os

Very well written

Very touchy

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Lovely os

Heart touching update

Thanks for PM

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tania90

@tania90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

loved it the way maan care for her nd his support nd pami to got to know that their is no difference between girl or boy

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Superb update dear, loved the way maan stand by geet , hate those people who want to aborted tje child if it's naby girl

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

heyy dear
thanx for sending me PMS ..
I have already read the os and also commented on ghsp anniversary thrd 😊

beautiful os ..
I hate pammi for her thinking
thank god maan come at the right tym ..and save his wife & unborn child .