Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

fab update
so maan was observing 4 months n finally saw her alone wid her bike...aww geet is so nervous infrnt of him..i loved d text msgs..dats amazing idea..waiting 4 nxt

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

I'm new to this forum. Came across this story and read both the parts.

lovrd your writing style.

curious to know Geet's pov.

continue soon.

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

i want next part (i hope we have more parts here 🤔)

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wonderful part

Loved it

So Geet occupied maans mind and he was intrigued by her..

Loved the their message message game.. Want to know Geet side story

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Fabulous Updates

Maan is a photographer and was dating Tara however they broke up as

Dev offered marriage and Maan was still not ready for that commitment

Tara and Geet were room mates and Maan always felt the need to be shirtless

in the mornings to make her uncomfortable they never conversed

one day Maan spots Geet at the beach and finds that she is beautiful however

he still stayed away watching another guy take her away

it seems after the day he had seen her at the beach he always spots her around

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Read both the parts
its wonderful
love your writing style
keep it up
happy new year

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

omg.. Geet dropped the subject because she didnt want to take help from Maan..
this is crazy story, but I love it..
very subtle and slow, but it has its own enjoyment..

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Wonderful update. Now Maan is sort of stalking her. He saw her smiling, laughing and enjoying life. On evening when he was going back to home, he saw Geet standing near her scooty. He asked her about the problem. She was short of fuel. He asked her to come with him but she refused as her friend was coming. He decided to stay until her friend comes. He started messaging her of which she also replied. He got to know that she is weak in economics. He offered her help which she ignored.

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Just One Day

I walked the same path,

Saw you everyday

I knew you for long,

that little acknowledgement

meant nothing before

that one day

My heart looks around

for that one presence

which it would easily ignore

after that one day

I take the long path,

Not my usual way,

Just to get one glimpse

after that one day

My world has changed

In just one day

No more the one world knows

an anonymous admirer

In just one day

Edited by Sundari. - 9 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Part 2 - Beautiful part. The highlight was convo via text when both sat close-by. He accepted that he stalked her all the time. He knows more things about her routine, her habits, etc. She too knew how he got her no. Oh... he was a topper in economics and he offered to help her in project. Will she really drop that subject ..? Who was that guy and what he have relation to her..? How well he know her, that she will wait till he go away till he take a turn. Humm..she too affected by him