Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Ohh God! That was really beautiful! You write so well.
Amazing plot, It just took a moment for Maan to acknowledge Geet though they have known each other's prescence for long. So Interesting!
I just cant wait to read further. 😃
Can you Please PM when you update? I would be thankful!

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mayyo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Bookmarked!

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And just a day, just a moment is all it takes to change eternity!

This was one enjoyable read. I wonder what is in store for the next half of the story. Don't keep us waiting for too long!

Edited by mayyo - 9 years ago

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CookieMonster

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

awesme starting
tat only day changed his feeling 4 her n seems like he has fallen for our cutie geet..update nxt soon

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icskwt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wonderful piece of work. ..

Wonderfully written part...

Just one moment, one look changed him. ..great. now want to know geet side..

Continue soon. .

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tabby999

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

wonderful os ..

maan was with tara later broke up with her ..

now geet ..

thanks for this lovely part

waiting for next

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Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Another story, albeit a one-shot, makes me happy!

Too many questions: Does Geet seriously have a crush on Maan? What does Maan feel for her now? Who was the guy who took Geet away? What all has transpired in these six months?

Waiting for the next installment.

Update soon please!

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

actually it was the title that caught my attention first n then the writer...

something similar happened with me precisely 11 months and 8 days ago 😆

cant wait for part 2; u can imagine that i suppose 😳

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nice story 👍🏼

Maan n tara together... He likes to embarrass geet

Maan n tara parted... Maan saw geet at beach... Before he went near her another man took her away

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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kabslocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Awesome os. Tara is Maan's GF and Geet is Tara's roommate whom Maan had never recognised due to her geeky looks. Afetr a while Tara broke up from Maan and married to Dev. One day on the beach Maan saw Geet and took her pictures when something changed.

Waiting for next part.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Part 1 - Maan & Tara. Maan was a player and geet is a geeky types. He suspected that she developed crush on him and he purposefully tease her roaming bare in front of her. Was he trying to charm her with his look back then..? May be he thought she could easily charmed with his ways.

So for him everything changed when he saw & captured her pics on beach and he was surprised that she turned to be geet. He was mesmerized with her beauty. Was he felt bad seeing her with someone else.? So he could never forget her after that. Now, too, he was thinking about her when tara invited him for new year's party.