Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awesome start

Maan and Geet both r totally different

Geet witnessing Maan romance with tara

And her expression is worth watching

Waiting for the next

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@ShiningStarz96

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Wow!! I loved it.

Maan is dating Tara but is attracted to her friend, Geet.

While Geet seems to have a crush on Maan like predicted.

Now that Tara and Maan have broken up, waiting to see how Geet and Maan become Maaneet.

Waiting for the next part

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Happy New Year! please update soon

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

lovely update past six months maan was noticing geet very keenly aww they really cute using messages to talk to each other maan wonder why she is so shy around him but so open with her friends oops again that boy awesome part thnx 4 update Happy New Year

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@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Beautiful update

Maan knew everything about geet... He had kept the pic of her

He feels she comfortable with others but not him

Sms conversation too good

Will she take maan's help... Waiting to know

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi thanks 4 updating! really enjoying this OS! chapter 2 - brilliant update! superbly written! Maan gets 2 knw her bt watching her! she intrigues him! he sees her alone in the rain n goes 2 help her! her bile ran out of petrol! her friend is on the way! he sits wid her! Maaneet communicate via text! she thanks him! Maan offers 2 help her with her studies! update soon

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Part 2 is so good.

Geet trying ro hold back and Maan noticing everything abt Geet. Waiting for next.

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Do you send pm for this story. If so kindly add me to that list.

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

He is stalking her lol I guess she sort of feels intimidated by Maan or fears she will fall for hiim! Awww he is helping her! Wonder who is the mystery man with Geet! Eagerly waiting for the next update!