Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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Downhill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

thats a unexpected surprise that i didnt expect of you😆

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Amazing update looks like geet trying hard to avoid maan but our hero took her as a challenge i liked maan's eagerness to meet her and also they convo between tara n him quiet interesting thnx 4 update

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Veil

Haha it was much thought out. I was surprised people didn't pick up on her unusual short lines and concentration while speaking a full sentence.

Anyway yes, it isn't that big an ailment. Anything big or small depends on how we look at it. And yeah it's because of the sensitivity of the issue in the story had I wrote a disclaimer at the beginning

Well to some people (readers like me)
It's not much noticeable,
I can easily attribute it to shyness u see.
And then there's always a presumption that she secretly likes him (a die-hard maaneet fan trait) 😆

Yes I agree with u, anything big or small is associated with what we feel about it. It's all in the mind. And then it becomes better or worse depending upon how the people in our surroundings take it.
Like here, I assume Tara does think of it as a - u know 'problem with her'
Though it doesn't affect her friendship, but she does thinks that a guy would be affected by that in a girl.

That was one hell of disclaimer, u scared me 😆

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.CryBaby.

@.CryBaby.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Read all the three parts in a go!
Its soo interesting. I seriously have no words. Totally loss of expression!

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swetha03

@swetha03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

nice update..

want to know what is in geets mind...

maan may had any number of gfs. but now his mind got occupied with geet..

pls update soon

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Interesting story.

now Maan is attracted to Geet and wants to date her.

Geet is uncomfortable with him.

would love to read her pov.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

part 3 - maan started noticing her more & more. she made him intrigued to know more about her.
she had a sever stutter problem and became worse whenever he was near her. he didn't know about this. it was shocking foe him. so that's why she stopped coming to park to avoid him..?

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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

😛hi..just read the 3 updates...v nice n lovely...n its different...this has us guessing what'll be the next...

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

simply amazing...loving the way story is progressing...geet stutters?

Lets see how maan will react with knowledge and how their relation will go...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

hi thanks 4 updating! wonderful update! well written! Maan helps her by sending her notes! they meet while jogging! they become acquaintances! Maan worried wen he dioesnt see her! he didn't reply 2 his message! Maan goes 2 meet her! Tara tells him abt Geet's stutter problem! update soon