Short story: Just one day (Note

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Veil

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Posted: 9 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

hi congrats on the OS! Fab update! wonderfully written! Maan was gng out wid Tara! Geet was her roommate bt they never conversed! Geet was quiet! Maan n Tara broke up! Maan is a keen photographer! he takes a pic n its Geet! Maan mesmerized! that one day changed everything! waiting 4 next

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poojitha96

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice part waiting to read the story do continue soon 😊

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 1 is awesome.

Maan is a charmer. Geet a geek type. Though Maan has seen her almost everyday for 6 months the one look in beach has changed everything in him. Waiting to know wat Geet thinks about Maan.

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

That is a really nice one shot! Maan does really have a conceded persona in terms of his looks! Poor Geet having Maan shirtless around her...must have been a situation where she went all red lol So I am guessing Geet may have moved out of Tara's apartment ? Really looking forward tot he next part!

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ambbiha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome OS. How geet would have felt when maan desperately went shirtless in front of geet😆😆😆

Maan and tara was in relationship but tara fell for dev since he proposed her marriage. Maan was forced to note geet and he couldnt get off her. Loved it

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maneetarsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely story so maan is the player and geets roommates boy friend. So maan used to tease geet when he was with Tara and now something changed in him and can't stop thinking about geet.

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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it did he feel something seeing her with someone looks like finally the charmer fallen plz cont soon

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Mona (Rashmi)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice part maan aur tara in a relationship aur geet is tara's roomate aur maan apna hartako sa geet ko uncomfortable feel karwata hai aur tara maan ka breakup ka baad maan beach ma geet ko dekhta hai aur just one day aur moment ma kuch mehsoos hota hai maan ko ab aga kya hoga aur geet ka pov kya.. Waiting fr next..

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful part

This is from Mann's pov. He was Naintara's ex boy friend. Geet was her room mate. Who had forced to witness their close moments. And Mann's purposeful show off because he felt that she had a crush on him. I hope Geet did moved out of that apartment. Mann and tara broke up. Dev is her new Bf. But tara is still friends with Mann. Now Mann is thinking about Geet. I think its after him realized that there is a beautiful girl hiding behind that thick geek glasses

Edited by MadelineCutie - 9 years ago