Short story: Just one day (Note - P 33)

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jayshu17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

very nice update

geet is on maan's mind after beach day when he took her photos

seeing her after six months he try to talk her but she answer in few words

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

waiting! Please update soon, thanks

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Binish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Omg u almost gave me a heartattack with the first part.. But second part was able to understand.. Superb yaar.. Nicely weitten.. Cont soon hun

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Wow that was just Fabulous

Maan found Geet as a challenge and he was intrigued too but when he decided that he'll always be around he actually thought that his presence was acceptable but now hearing his ex Tara telling him that his presence around Geet has made uncomfortable and she began to stutter even more
Maan is totally surprised by this and surely he is a guy that has dated many so if he felt he cares about Geet suddenly and now hearing her problem he will run
but again I wonder if Tara is speaking truth could she be jealous

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

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Well not quite what I was expecting... So u did surprise... N I love it.

Now, not that it is a big ailment or anything, but she must be suffering low confidence because of that I assume.
Though I feel too, that it wouldn't matter to him... Would it?
N I assume u thought of this while typing up this part... Coz I don't think I noticed it in the earlier 2.

Well then again the usual stuff, I like ur writing style, choice of words, n narration offcourse!
I do hope we have more parts to it, as I told u I connect to this one more than any other stories. 😃

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Oh! She doesn't even talk much that's y
Just noticed one conversation in part 2
"W..with petrol!"
Explains a lot, especially the most amusing SMS spree...

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Veil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sundari.
Oh! She doesn't even talk much that's y
Just noticed one conversation in part 2
"W..with petrol!"
Explains a lot, especially the most amusing SMS spree...

Haha it was much thought out. I was surprised people didn't pick up on her unusual short lines and concentration while speaking a full sentence.

Anyway yes, it isn't that big an ailment. Anything big or small depends on how we look at it. And yeah it's because of the sensitivity of the issue in the story had I wrote a disclaimer at the beginning

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Doracake

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Superb OS.

Read all 3 Chaters in one go!

Your writing is amazing as usual.

wish you were more regular with your updates.

waiting for next.

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Kkiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

I guess Geet has been working hard in ignoring Maan and that why she didnt speak much especially because she new she would stutter :( Lets see what Maan has to say now?