New ss laal chunariya last part page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi beautiful ppl. This is my first ss with the encouragement of our dear friend masti_maaneet. This story is for masti_maaneet.

Laal chunariya

Geet handa. An angel with magical powers. lived in the USA with her family, where as Maan Singh Khurana lives in India. Now how do they meet and how does this laal chunariya unite them! Lets find out! :)

Far away in NYC there lived a young business woman, geet handa. She had some dreams just like all of the girls her age about her prince charming. But she was down to earth and knew no matter what no person is perfect. But then again she is a pari, she can make the impossible possible. One day her bestfriend come sister came into her office.

Pinky: geet, we have to go to india
Geet: but why pinky? Why all of a sudden?
Pinky: because meri jaan, adi finally proposed, we are getting married next week in India. Adi has all of his family there geet, and I don't have anyone except for you, so that's it your coming
Geet: acha baba, ok, let me book the tickets
Pinky: geeet, we don't need tickets remember.. We are angels.. We can get to india with a clap
Geet: (starts laughing) ok ok clap it is.

The next week everything was settled they reached india.. As soon as geet appears in India she falls on someone and its none other than our maan babu. He was waiting with adi to meet his pinky bhabie.

Maan: wow beautiful, (still holding geet looking in her eyes)
Geet: (all lost in heros eyes until she hears her name)
Haan
Pinky/ Adi: geet tu theek hai? Are u alright?
Geet: (comes back to the world while maan is still lost in our paris eyes) oh yeah pinks im fine..
That is when geet starts blushing being caught
Maan: hi pinky im maan adi's elder brother
Pinky: hi maan veer ji, meet my bestfriend sister geet.
They all meet talk and move towards the khuranas house.
Here adi knows geet and pinky are pari's but maan and his family doesn't.
Geet: (in her mind) hai baba ji, itna hott munda pinky ka brother in law, waise toh jaadu se mein setting ker sakti hoon apni, per mein chahti hoon hamari setting dil se ho.. Please puri kardena
Just then they arrive at KM, whole ride adi pinky were giving eachother glances and maan geet to eachother, chup chup ke..
They reach KM and enter with dadi and padma (maan and adis mom) do arti of pinky.. Unknowingly they did arti of maaneet as well. They all entered with their right foot..
Just then enters our stories villain sasha wearing a super mini skirt, sasha is khuranas neighbor, has a crush on maan and always trying to impress him. But never succeeds lol ;) (and I wont let her succeed)
Sasha: hello everybody, hi aunty, hi dadi, (sees pinky and geet) eww who are these low class people!
Everyone gets mad and irritated, but just then geet sees how she is eyeing maan. Maan is about to scream at her but befoe he could geet does the good work
Geet: abhi maza chakhati hoon issey and clap
Now we see sasha trips and hits her foot on the couch where everyone bursts out laughing

Ok guys soo this was part 1.. I wanted to turn it into an os but I couldn't fit it all in. im trying. Please be honest about the story and writing.. Let me know what I can fix..




Index: part 1 page 1
Part 2 page 2
Last part- page 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you dear that you tried.😊
frankly its really a nice concept..👏
so our geet is a pari..
for maaneet its love at first sight😊
loved when geet wished dil se setting karado😆
and loved this little mischief geet.😉
waiting for next part


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story about Magic. Wow lovely!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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toh maan geet ki pyar aur geet ki masti chalu...

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful starting
loving it
cant w8 for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waiting for it
geet's thinking😉
👏loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Innovative storyline ...
Geet is a Pari and love at first sight!
Kya maza chakaya Sasha ko.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the story! splendid update! Geet is an angel! Maaneet meet! they fall 4 each other! update soon. well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre wah nice story... I liked d concept...
Geet is pari..wahh..
Good work..keep it up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful and Lovely Update
Geet and Pinky are best friends more like sisters and both have magical powers
Pinky and Geet comes to India as Pinky will be marrying Adi and he also knows
about Pinky and Geet been angels
when Geet sees Maan and he too when first sees her it seems that at the same are attracted
to each other and Geet says to herself she wants love but from the heart from the soul not with any powers and that on its own is great
Sasha always there to impress Maan but Geet been there now decides to use a little
mischievous powers so Sasha can embarrass herself
waiting for next update

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