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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laal chunariya part 2
Thank you guyz for ur support and lovely comments.. It means alot to me.. It's a huge encouragement for me.. A huge hand of applause for our writers plzz.. I realize now how difficult it is..

Sasha gets up crying and goes back home. Everyones happy.
Dadima: acha bete aap log fresh ho jaye.. Pinky aur geet aap dono outhouse mein rahengi! U will live in the outhouse!
Maan/ adi: dadi ma I can show them (suddenly maan and adi say making dadi and padma suspicious)
Dadi ma: acha bete, aap dono dikha dijiye.. (Nazar rakhni paregi, yeh maan ko achanak kya ho gaya hai, yeh kisi larki ko outhouse dikhana chahte hai, yeh toh chamakar ho gaya hai)
Maaneet and adinki go to the outhouse to show the girls their room
Maan: woh I thought I can give you company so that adi pinky can spend some time together
Geet: (becomes sad hearing this, she thought he came for her) smiling ji ok
Pinky: (to geet) geet yeh outhouse kitna boring hai..
Geet: areey pinky tu fikar mat ker abhi sahi karti hoon (she was about to clap when pinky stopped her)
Pinky: tu pagal hai geet, maan ko nahi pata hum pariyan hain, sirf adi ko pata hai..
Geet: :( oh sorry
Seeing geets sad face maan decides to become friends
Maan: geet If you don't mind can we be friends
Geet thinks hes doing this for his brother and shakes his hand just then geets phone rings, its from her dad mohinder, she picks it up
Geet: papa ji, kaise ho aap?
Mohinder: acha hoon beta, did u get to india yet?
Geet: yes papa ji we got here 1 hr ago..
Mohinder: what? Geet u both used magic.. (Gets mad)
Geet: sorry papa ji :( but hum kya kartey flight was going to be too long and boring..
Mohinder: geet how many times do I have to tell u I don't like u using magic..
Pinky takes the phone, she realises they r in trouble
Pinky: papa ji sorry sorry sorry, who its my fault.. I was in a hurry plus we missed our flight..
Mohinder almost convinced: acha beta but makesure u don't use it there in india.. I know u girls r very naughty..
Pinky: ji papa ji
Mohinder: ok in hanging up now, im at the office, ur mummy was worried, we will come
2 days b4 ur wedding.. I did all the arrangements..
Pinky and geet: ok papa ji give nani and mama our love
Adi: pinky come I will show you the guest room
Maan: geet come im going to show you the kitchen so if you need anything to eat or drink
Pinky geet: ok lets go
In the kitchen maaneet enter but geet doesn't see the water and slips, geet is about to clap her hands to save herself when maan holds her suddenly to stop her from falling
Just then maan heres maaahiii maahi ve maahi maahi ve and is mesmerised seeing geets eyes again
Geet: shukr hai baba ji maine jaadu nahi kiya, orelse I would have missed this golden opportunity.. Haye yeh waqt yahin tham jaye and she does magic to stop the time : jum jum de dum ho jaye yeh waqt yahin thum
In the room the situation is no different, adi and pinky stare at eachother with sooo much love and geets spell works for pinky too ;) (ab spell puray ghar mein philana tha na lol)
And them after an hr the bell of the outhouse rings and the spell breaks
Geet: who koi aya hai shayad
Maan: hmm mein mein (stutters) dekhta hoon
(Guess whose at the door, sasha and her chamchi tasha)
Sasha: oh hi maan, I found out ur in the outhouse so I came to see you.. She looks behind and sees geet: oh hi geet (fake smile) then falls on maan hugging him almost choking him
Geet: oh hi sasha.. (Almost crying. Baba ji isko bhejna zaroori that. Abhi sabak sikha ti hoon, meri love story ki antogonist) clap and boom maan becomes a gorilla and sasha is hugging the gorilla
Sasha: opens her eyes.. Aaahhh maan kahan gaya.. Where did this gorilla come from??
While geet silently laughs
Geet: oh no sasha I don't know.. U were hugging the gorilla not maan.. Maan went inside the kitchen..
Sasha: whaaat then y didn't u tell me, lets go tasha (goes with a crying face)
(Wondering how come tasha didn't notice, well she was busy checking the new design of her manicure nails lol)
Geet claps again and gorilla turns into maan again
Maan is confused of what happened..
Geet: maan sasha left, lets go see the room, dadi must be waiting for us
Maan: still comfused ???? Oh ok lets go

Just then nakul walked in the outhouse letting everyone know that dadima had called everyone for dinner.
Seeing a smiling maan made dadi ma even more suspicious. But what caught dadima attention was maan smiling at geet..
Dadi: arrey agaye aap log..good u all here we can eat now
Maan delibrately sits next to geet, adi with pinky, dadi and padma in front of eachother.
Padma: geet beta what r u doing right now working going to school?
Geet: oh aunty I handle papa jis business, I did my degree in business management..
Dadima: what r ur future plans beta? We know pinky is your secretary, but now shes going to move to india after marriage!
Geet: dadi, pinky is my bff, my sister, my secret keeper, my adviser, I cant love without her so im planning to move to india as well.. Im going to handle our business in Delhi..
Dadima: what type of business?
Pinky: dadima, papa ji just opened a fashion designing business in delhi, I will be the designer and geet will manage it..
Padma: that's really good beta.. Dono ka mann bhi laga rahega..
During the whole dinner maan kept asking geet for somethivg or another just to feel her hands.. Making geet blush
This did not go unnoticed by dadima.. That's when dadi ma started planning a future wedding of maaneet.. With geet wearing a laal chunariya..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
maan ko gorilla bana diya😆
nice update..😊
so papaji dont like girls to use magic😉
it would be same agar aise magic karte hain tho koi bhi no kahega😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: masti_maaneet

maan ko gorilla bana diya😆

nice update..😊
so papaji dont like girls to use magic😉
it would be same agar aise magic kartehain tho koi bhi no kahega😊





Hahahhaha haan na ab itni badmash shararti gurls hain.. Yeh toh kich bhi nahi.. Just wait for geets nanis entry 😆

Thanx :)
Edited by mayurmaaneet - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
That Was A Magical Update
Lovely Maan is totally smitten by Geet and she too by him while her dad phones
and warns both her and Pinky not to use their powers as he knows how naughty
they can get .
Sasha again returns and this time she falls on Maan hugging him while Geet has turned
him into a gorilla which makes him confuse as to what is happening
Daadima also sees a change Maan as he is smiling at Geet sits next to her
all his gestures are noticed by Daadima and it also seems like she happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic update! Geet stopped time and turned Maan into Gorilla!
Awiee!! Maan is smitten by her. And Dadi in top form.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
chalo dadi ko pata chal gaya...abb sab thik ho jayega...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Loved the concept!!
Aww...such a sweet story
Geet is too naughty
Maan ko gorilla bana diya 🤣
shasha will get nice dose from Geet
Keep rocking with this awesome concept!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
very funny
enjoyed very much
maan totally fidda on geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Lovly update
maan is luking for ways to b with geet..aww dats so sweet..lovd it alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 the update! wonderful update! superbly written! Maan n Geet falling 4 each other! Geet's dad calls n he is upset that they used magic! Pinky explains! Geet changes Maan 2 a gorilla wen Sasha hugs him! Sasha shocked! Dadi notices Maan n Geet n is happy! she is planning their wedding! update soon

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