New ss laal chunariya last part page 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww...lovely update...Pinky and Geet are angels and very naughty...Maaneet fell for each other , but sasha as usual kabab mein haddi...Geet uses her power to embarrass sasha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone for the beautiful comments! Heres the last part.. I seriously don't know how real writers find time to write.. And I truly appreciate all the writers! Thank you to all the writers and readers.. Love u all..

Last part
It's the sangeet of pinky and adi.. Pinky wants her sangeet to be a fairytale (she is a fairy pari remember) but the problem is mohinder papa is coming and he will not allow it.. :( she reapects him too much.. But atleast she can do some things pari style before he gets here!
Geet: pinky tell me how you want the decorations we will decorate and u just get ready..
Pinky: but geet, listen to me, I want the decorations all white and pink.. Just like pari land.
Geet: pinks u know its not possible yaar, aaj papa aa rahe hain and he will not allow it
Geet sees pinkys sad face and forms an idea
Geet: acha soon we will do what u want but it has to be so no one will suspect us.. Ok..
Pinky: gets all happy.. Great idea geetu, chal kaam pe lagte hain, forst lets close the door..
Geet: haan when all is done we will call the decorators and tell them to tell everyone they did it.. We will have them do the small decorations..
Pinky: ok ready, clap the room is decorated
Geet: wow pinks, this is what u had in mind.. Nice.. Chal ab jaldi se lets call the decorators
Clap
Decorators: (all confused) what r we doing here.. We were decorating someone elses birthday party..
Geet: claps again and makes their mind change and makes them believe they were decorating pinkys sangeet.
(Pinkys sangeet will be in the afternoon and wedding at night)

Just then the bell rings and pinky opens the door
Dadi ma: pinky yeh lijiye beta, yeh aapka shagun hai, it has you sangeet and shaadi suit
Pinky: ji dadi ma thank you (takes ashirwaad)
Dadi: arrey wah decoraters ne sajaa bhi diya.. Kitna lyara lag raha hai
Pinky: ji dadi ma, inko maine subha savera bula liya tha
Dadi: acha kiya beta ab aap dono bhi tayyar ho jaye, geet beta yeh aapke liye shaadi ke liye kapde..
Geet: thank you dadi ma and takes ashirwaad..
Dadi leaves and both start to get ready.. Ab ready kya hona hai, papa mama ke aane se pehle jitna jadoo use karna hai who to unko abhi karna padega na
Geet: chal pinky pehle dekhte hain our clothes..
For pinkys sangeet there is a beautiful pink net sari with zardosi work.. For geets sangeet dress there is a beautiful red colored anarkali with red chunariya (sanaj aaya kuch ;))
Both: wow sooo beautiful.. Dadi has nice choice.. Then they open shaadi outfits.. For pinky there is a heavy red lahenga and geet there is a white sari with a sexy blouse ;)
All come with jewelry.. Both pick their clothes and clap
And they r now wearing their clothes and jewelry.. Next makeup
Pinky: geet atleast make up toh khud karlete hain naa plzz..
Geet: (makes a face) ok ok chalo only cuz its ur wedding.. Chal in the room..
They put on their makeup and that's how mohinder papa and rano ma found them
Both see them
Pinky and geet together: maa papa
They both hug eachother
Mohinder and rano have tears:
Moh: yakeen nahi aata hamari ek beti parayi ho jayegi, phir geet ki shaadi ho jayegi..
Nani: haan per mein toh roz milne aaongi apni betiyon se, kyun rano
Moh: maa ji aap aisa kuch nahi karengi
Nani: theek hai phir geet aur pinky aajayengi mere paas
Pinky geet: haan papa
Moh: no, bilkul nahi, phir jadoo, u know I hate magic.. U all always misuse it..
All r sad but then nani does some shararat, clap and mohinder becomes a puppy
Rano: maa change him back please, its pinkys wedding..
Nani: no not until he says yes for us to meet
Then she sees a scared puppy moh nodding his head yes
Everyone starts trying to control their laugh and clap hes back..
Moh: maa ji u will never stop will u
Nani: no never
Everyone laughs.. But its time for sangeet and adis family is about to come soo all get ready to welcome
Meanwhile seeing the laal chunariya geets gets an idea to perform for pinky.. Not knowing that her dance performance will surely hipnotise someone..
Now its time for sangeet and everyone comes..
On the stage is geet with the mike
Geet: helli, namaskar, sasriyakaal and salam to everyone.. Welcome to adi jeeju and pinkys sangeet.. Mein hoon pinky ki behen, best friend and partner in crime geet handa.. Swagat hai aap sab ka.. Now we will begin todays sangeet ceremony.. We will begin with groom side verses bride side dance, toh ho jaye
Everyone screams: ho jaye
Then geet sees sasha and tasha entering eyeing maan she claps acting like shes beginning the show and poof goes sasha tasha lost in antarctica.. (Hehhehe now I cant have them spoil
The sangeet na ;))
First we will begin with the dulhas team
Maan: sings and dances to banno ki saheli, resham ki dori, chup chup ke sharmaye
And teases geet.. And starts dancing with her
Next geet: na na, mehndi mehndi na mujhko lagaana, mujhko saajan ke ghar nahi jaana
Teases maan and tells him kuch bhi karlo mein nahi manoongi
Adi: mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawaan aaya hai, tere aur mere milna ka mausam aaya hai, sabse churakey tujhe dil mein chupana hai
Getting all romantic with pinky slow danicing
Pinky: shaam mere rukhmani palkhein bichaye baithi hai, churake leja, utha ke leja, bhaga ke leja yaar, maika maika ab na bhai hummey tumse ho gaya pyar
Pinky all sharam se paani paani
Maan: oh dil walon dil mera, sunn neko bekaraar hai, kaho na pyar hai, kaho na pyar hai, chahat se chahat ki chahat tak izhaar hai, kaha na pyar hai kaha na pyar hai.. ( maan looks at geet expectantly)
Geet:(claps to hear maans mind) baba ji plzzz mujhe pata chale maan kya sunna chahte hain..
Maans mind: geet plzz boldo ke tumhe bhi mujhe mohabbat hai..
Geets mind: oh shukar hai baba ji yeh bhi mujhe pasand karte hain.. Time for surprise 1
Geet: kaatey nahin kat they na din yeh raat, kehni thi tumse joh dil ki baat,
Lo aaj mein kehti hoon, (all wait for it) I love u, I love u, I love u
Maan and adi to geet and pinky: arrey kab tak jawani chupayo gi rani, kunwaron ko kitna satayo gi rani, kabhi toh kisi ki dulhaniya banogi,( they both bend down proposing position and take out a ring for geet pinky) mujhse shaadi karogi, mujhse shaadi karogi
Geet and pinky reply blushing: laal chunariya odhli maine jabse piya ke naam ki, mere piya bhi kehne lagey hain mein na rahi kisi kaam ki, mehenga padha re mujhe dil ka lagana kar na saki re mein toh koi bahana
All this was witnessed by everyone in the sangeet and the most happy were padma and dadima.. Dadi ma takes geets family in to the other room and decides they want to do engagement of maaneet today.. But mohinder has 1 objection.. Geet has to tell maan the truth about her being a pari.. And everyone becomes tensed.. Ofcourse dadi ma still doesn't know geet is a pari, she finds out and is very happy her bahus r parees.. Ab dadi bhi nani se kam
Thodi hain.. Only difference she doesn't have magical powers but is very naughty..
Maan: ji dadi aapne hummey bulaya
Geet: papa kya hua hai
Moh takes geet to the side and tells her she has to tell maan everything.. Geet gets scared,
Geet; magar papa
Moh: geet tujhe agar maan se shaadi karni hai toh sach batana padega
Geet: maan mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai
Maan: haan geet bolo
Geet: who who im a pari
Maan: I know geet ur a pari.. Ur beautiful like a pari
Geet holds her head: maan im a magical pari, I have magical powers..
Maan: what??? I don't believe it.. Ok do something
Geet: theek hai, im gonna change ur clothes to Egyptian king clothes, clap
Maan: looks down wow ur really a magical pari, geet geet my geet is a pari and twirls her around..
Everyone looks at them and adi pinky enter and start whisteling
Then maaneet get married with adi pinky.. And starts their laal chunariya love with laal chunariya SR!

Hooe you all liked.. Specially masti_maaneet!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
All parts r awsome.
I loved it.
Wow maaneet alo married wid adi pinki.
Poor Sasha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi so soon it has ended! thanks 4 a wonderful SS! well written! lovely update! awesome end! Geet uses some of her powers! Mohinder n Rano arrive! emotional family moments! Sangeeet begins! Geet gets rid of Tasha n Sasha! fab sangeet! nice songs! Maan tells her she is a Pari! Geet confesses abt her powers n shows him! Maaneet get married!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
wow so lovly
maan reaction on geet being pari was awesme
lovd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Its a beautiful story... No No cute story
I loved it
Do write more...as I find you are cute writer and I really like cute writer's
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Last Part was Beautiful
So Maaneet too got married
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidlik

Its a beautiful story... No No cute story
I loved it
Do write more...as I find you are cute writer and I really like cute writer's



Awwwnnn lol ur making me blush hun... Thanx for liking my new story.. Its very hard writing.. I dont know how u guyz do it with such ease...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#003399">hi so soon it has ended! thanks 4 a wonderful SS! well written! lovely update! awesome end! Geet uses some of her powers! Mohinder n Rano arrive! emotional family moments! Sangeeet begins! Geet gets rid of Tasha n Sasha! fab sangeet! nice songs! Maan tells her she is a Pari! Geet confesses abt her powers n shows him! Maaneet get married! </font>



Haan yaar, i wasnt able to write any longer.. You can call it writers block.. My mind wasnt letting me stretch any further.. Thank you soo much for the encouragement.. Means alot to me... And thanx for liking the story.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
got to read t then... bookmarked
good u tried😊

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