Two Shot : LoSt In YoU.....Updated Last Part @page 10.....4th Oct

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D_4_Devil

@D_4_Devil

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awesome story...

maan is like richie rich...he belongs to royal family...

and geet is poor...

but still their marriage is fix and rajmata has no problem with that now that is great...

egarly waiting for maan's reaction after seeing his bride...

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

heyyyaaa

congratulations for this one baby

and u knw.. my reviews...

first of all i m glad u wrote this in MG version.. because yeh dil hai maaneetian u knw heheheh

and coming to first part

well...

this story is very special.. because the way maan falls in love with geet...

and gets that kangan for him...awww

this is one of teh cutest adorable and simple yet beaaauutiful story on GF

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Teaser...

hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte kyunki hum kisi aur se pyar se karte h...humein yeh shaadi sirf pitaji ke vade ki wagah se karni padi varna hum apni geet ko kabhi bhi kisi ke liye nhi chodte...hum jinse pyar karte h unka naam geet aur woh aam ladki hai...par shayad kismet ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha...humein apne pyar ko dhokha nahi de sakte...hum iss shaadi ko nahi maante...

hum apko apni patni hone ke haq toh nahi de sakte par aap ameerkot ki rani h n uske saare haq apko h...hum apse maafi chahte h humari wagah se apko itna sab sehna pad raha h ...par hum apne dil ke hatho majbur h...

Sorry for not giving update...just need one or two correction but didn't get time...so will post Last Part by sunday for sure

Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

lovely interesting teaser, will b waiting

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

nice os...

ohho maan love at 1st sight...n later he fell in love more reading her poems...but he didn't know anything about geet other that her name??

maan heartbroken rajmata fixed his marriage due to his father's wish...

teaser...lolzz maan ne ek baar bhi apni biwi ka chehra nahi dekha kya shadi k waqt!!!warna wahi pata chal jata she is geet only...

heheheh m imagining geet's reeaction hearing his confession that he loves geet 😆

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

is he confessing to geet

nice tsr

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nidhirastogi000

@nidhirastogi000

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Nice teaser. Waiting for update 😊

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: vrinda22
is he confessing to geet
nice tsr

nahi he is telling this to his wife...not to geet😆😆

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

congrats for this new two shot...

Interesting story...

Nice teaser ..

Update soon..

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Lovely update so maan fell for geet at first sight they bumped and fell and maan fell in love with her he got hold of her book and loved her poems he kept it with him he is a king he saved her and was shocked to see her he saw her in a bad state and realised his feelings for her he loves her and was abt to confess when he came to know he was getting married to mohindar handa daughter who is geet abe naam to pooch leta gaddha kahi ka now let see what blunder raja maan does infront of his rani