Two Shot : LoSt In YoU.....Updated Last Part @page 10.....4th Oct - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part 1 and lovely teaser waiting for the next part plz update soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice taeser
waiting for update
maan ki shaadi hogai ..usse paat nahi ki geet hi unki wife hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tabby999

nice taeser

waiting for update
maan ki shaadi hogai ..usse paat nahi ki geet hi unki wife hai

haha...must be fun nah😆😆
bevkuf maan😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! wonderful start dear...loved it
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Thank u guys for liking my story n giving wonderful comments...m just too overwhelmed with urs response...

Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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He never thought his life would change is just mere few hours...yesterday evening he was excited to confess his love to her ...n today he is already a committed man who is engaged to someone else...

He decided to bury his emotions n feeling to fulfill his father last wish ...he decided to visit temple n gave kangan there. He was climbing stairs of mandir still lost in thought when he collided with some one n both hold kangan to save each other from fall. Both looked in each other eyes n whole world stopped around them. God gave so many chances unknowingly to him where he met her n fall in love with her but today when he wanted to buried all his emotions for her...god again made him to meet her...he just want to keep looking at her without any blink...wants to capture her image in his heart for his whole life. They were just so lost in each other that they didn't realized that they are still holding kangan...beautiful moment between them got disturbed by loud bell voice from the mandir n without saying anything he started to move when he realized both are holding kangan...

She looked at him n than at kangan ...she felt uncomfortable for still holding kangan so she unloosens her grip over it...seeing all this Maan say...

Waise toh yeh kangan ab humare kisi kaam ka nhi h par agar yeh apke pass rahega toh hum khushi milegi...aap isse apne pass rakhiye...

Nahi Maan ji...hum kaise yeh rakh sakte h...yeh bahut hi kimati h...

Hum chahte h yeh apke pass rahe isse jyada iske bare mein mat sochiye...ho sakta h yeh apke liye hi bana ho...Isse humari yaad samajh kar hi rakh lijiye...humein khushi milegi...

Geet smiled at him n kept kangan with her n he left from there...with peace in his heart that atleast kangan belong to her now for whom it was made even though purpose was unfilled...

Days keep passing n day of his engagement came...To be bride was standing infront of him in gunghant. He cared less about her...whats her name or how she looks as he already loves someone from his heart and will keep loving her for his entire life...marriage is just for name sake for him to fulfil his dad's promise...

Day of marriage also came n he is unaware of all the preparation n celebration around him...he confided himself in his room only...

He got dressed mechanically n came in mandap to perform last ritual of this so called marriage...again his bride was in gunghat n he care damn about her. He just wish she keep away from him n never show her face...its not that he hate her but he hate the circumstances in which they are getting married n deep down he know he is doing wrong with her...n because of his guilt he doesn't want to face her...

Being a rajput...being king of Ameerkot...he right now want to run away from all this n he was not ashamed of having such feeling...

He didn't know when all ritual were over n panditji asked him to stand for phere...he took seven phere with her n promised her to make her happy and keep away from all pain n hurt ...but deep down he knew, he will be giving her pain for lifetime...he filled her maang n tied mangalsutra around her without bothering to see her face n her long ghunghat helped him for the same...n now he is a married man.

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Maan reached his room where his bride was waiting for him. He decided to tell her that he didn't value this marriage n he loves someone else...

He entered the room...his bride was seating on middle of bed...her head was still fully covered n he was glad that he won't see her face as he didn't had the strength to speak such harsh reality of his n her life on her face...

He cleared his throat n said...

Mujh pata h apko humse n humari shaadi se bahut umeedien h...par hum apko aur dhoke mein nahi rakh sakte...hum apse shaadi se phle hi mil kar sab baat saaf karna chahte the par humein apse milne ki izzazat nahi mili...kuch rasmo ki wagah se dulha n dulhan nhi mile sakte the...par ab aur nahi...yeh sach hum apse nahi chupa sakte...

Yeh shaadi...

jo humari shaadi hui h...

hum...he was not getting enough strength to break her heart as he know what it feel like... how much it pains ...how lifeless u become when someone snatch ur dream...but he also can't give her hope n getting all his strength he closed his eyes n said...

hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte kyunki hum kisi aur se pyar se karte h...humein yeh shaadi sirf pitaji ke vade ki wagah se karni padi varna hum apni Geet ko kabhi bhi kisi ke liye nhi chodte...hum jinse pyar karte h unka naam Geet aur woh aam ladki joroor hai but humare liye bahut hi khas h...par shayad kismet ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha aur humein apse shadi karni padi...par hum apne pyar ko dhokha nahi de sakte...hum iss shaadi ko nahi maante...

hum apko apni patni hone ke haq toh nahi de sakte par aap ameerkot ki rani h n uske saare haq apko h...hum apse maafi chahte h humari wagah se apko itna sab sehna pad raha h ...par hum apne dil ke hatho majbur h......

n he left the room...

she lifted her veil n her face was showing mix emotions...her eyes were filled with tears which were flowing on cheek...she was Geet...Mohinder Handa's daughter...

she don't know what to feel...happy as she heard confession of his love for her ...or sad being rejected by her pati on first night...she was too overwhelmed by the emotions which she was feeling right now...she hugged her knees n cried...she cried for him too...how much pain he kept inside n how much he struggled with himself to fulfill his dad's promise...

whole night just passed liked this only...he never came back to room n she kept crying...but first sunrays of new day brings hope in her...he loved her...she is his Geet...he just need to know that he is married to Geet...his love...than things will b normal...

She get freshen up n get ready to perform ritual of new dulhan n bride of rajmahal...she was doing her first aarti when Maan came back to rajmahal n directly went to his room. She then went to kitchen to make sweet dish for her first cooking. She was passing by when Maan saw her...he was astonished to see Geet here ...he dismissed his thought as illusion.

He moved towards the hall to meet some guest when he again saw her cooking in kitchen...he shook his head...he think he is going crazy thinking about Geet that's y seeing here again n again...he again ignored n moved towards the hall. After meeting them, he decided to spend his day in his study to avoid her wife. He was on his way when again he saw her in corridor...this time he tried to follow her but was interrupted by his worker and when he looked towards her ...she was gone...

He was going crazy seeing her again n again in rajmahal...he just shook his head n headed to his study.

Whole day passed in luka chupi. It was night time n now he can't avoid his room as people will surely talk about it. He was lucky no one noticed him yesterday night as all slept due to tiredness but today he can't take that risk...

He came to his room when he heard sound from bathroom, he guessed her to be in there. He came near the window n start looking outside...when he heard her bangle sound which again pushed her to the Geet thoughts. He realized that she is standing behind her...maybe she wants some answer ...y he ruined her life...why he did this to her...

He broke the silence...humein pata h apko humse bahut sawal ka jawab chaiye hoga...apko hum par gussa bhi araha hoga...apse humse naraz bhi hogi...par is waqt hum kisi bhi sawalo ka jawab nahi de paayenge...humein kuch waqt dijiye...yeh sab humare liye bhi asaan nhi...apko kuch kehna toh aap humse keh sakti h...hum

Aap bolne de toh hum bolenge Maan ji......she cut in between as she don't want to lose this chance...whole day she waited for him...n now when she met him ...She feared may b like yesterday night too, he will leave after saying whatever he want...not giving chance her to speak...

Haan ap boliye jo ......than it strike him...her voice...that's sounded so much like Geet...is his mind working too much...or its true...his heartbeat get high thinking of possibility that this voice belong to Geet...

He slowly turned but his eyes were on floor...he was too scared to assume anything...he lifted his eyes from downwards to above...he saw her saree...same saree he saw Geet in morning when he thought he is dreaming her...he looked at her hands which were adorning with bangles when his eyes caught kangan he gave to her...his heart beats were increasing each second...he looked at her face...his breath stopped...his heart beat stopped...he kept looking at the face infront of her...his Geet...

His hand moved on their own to touch her...to make him believe she was here...no illusion...no dream...in real...in front of her...

When he touched her...his heart gave it away...he fell on his knees n cried...all emotions coming out today...she was Geet...Geet was in front of him...he got married to married to Geet...

Geet reached near him n enclose him in her hug...her hand moving on his back to give him sense of belonging...warmness...to make him realize of reality that they got married...

After sometime when things get sober up, he looked at her asking so many questions still silent not to break this moment...both were looking in eachother eyes n holding hands.

Geet just nodded her head to answer her unasked question n said...

Haan hum hi apki Geet h...apki shaadi humse hi hui h...hum Geet Handa h...Mohinder Handa ki beti jis se bachpan mein apki shaadi pakki hui thi...humein yeh bachpan se hi pata tha isly jab bhi ap mere samne aate the toh mein ghabra jaati thi ki ap kya sochenge mere bare mein...isi darr ki wagah se jab us din kaka ne humein apni beti bola hum chup rahe...kyunki hum apko khona nahi chahte the...hum apse bahut pyar karte h woh bhi aaj se nahi...bachpan se jab se...

Listening to her confession ...Maan cant control his emotions n hugged her tightly...he is married to love of her life n above that she also loves him like he do...

Hum b apse bahut pyar karte hai Geet... I Love U...(ab Maan bahar padh kr aaye h toh itni English toh banti h...)



hope u enjyed reading it...biggest update of mine...1800+words😆😆

waiting for ur likes n comments...

Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
unres 😆
nice update...
for his dad's promise maan decide to go along with the rishta...
ohhh they met again fate is a funny thing ...maan gifted geet the kangan finally as his memory...
aee le what is with maan he is getting married n here he didn't even know his bride's name
waise bechara maan dil ka maara 😆
seriously maan itni bate bata di apni biwi ko but chehra nahi dekha ufff dekh lete to pata chal jata na she is geet only
awww geet's she is crying seeing maan's pain...happy too knowing that he loves her...but sad seeing his pain...
🤣 really maan too much itni baar koi day dream karta hai kya!!
awww finally geet ne maan se baat kar hi li that she is his geet only...
hahaha yeah itni english to banti hai 😆😆
Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
hi vandy
lovely update
buddhu maan apni biwi ka chera toh dekh lete ..sr aaise hi ro kar bardad kar di ..
but finally all well if ends well ..
geet too love him woh bhi bachpan se ..
aachaa lagta hai jab aapko aapka pyaar mil gaye ..
finally they confess and r together
thank u for update
waiting for epilogue


Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello reservy eyes ..
how r u ??😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting fr reviews...di n tabby review fast😆

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