Two Shot : LoSt In YoU.....Updated Last Part @page 10.....4th Oct

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

DI!!!!!!!

Awesome part!!!!!!!!

lovely concept...wah wah..maan geet pe lattu hogaya...kaise na ho...wo tho maaneet hai na 😆

beautifully written di...

poor him when he wanted to confess..bomb phoda ispe...but he missed check what is that actual content of that bomb 🤣

koi nahi soon he will know 😛 😉

waiting for next!!!!

Uma...

Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

superb update...
Loved it ...
Nice one ...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

hi thanks 4 da pm! read n commented already! waiting 4 next part!

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Preethi

@GeetMeet

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nice update dear Mann felt in love with geet in first sight and he wanted to confess his feeling to her for that he arranged a Kangan to tell her but his mom fixed his marriage with his father best friend daughter

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Nice story..

Maan jst chill..god is helping u..

Tera kaam toh aur bhi asaan auf jaldi ho gaya

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome dear.
Maan come home n he meet geet .He love her but his marriage fixed his father friend daughter. ..want to see Maan raction when he'll know she is same Geet...Waiting for next.

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome part maan comes fater a long time and fell for geet but his marriage fixed with someone(he thinks 😉)

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Asheley

@Asheley

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I think he will be happy when he get to know who is MH daughter

Maan is in love with geet

Poor Maan when he thought to propose he came to know his marriage is fixed

BUt he dint know with whom it is fixed 😉

I just hope MH has only one daughter

Thanks for PM dear

Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Wow lovely os...maan live geet but he thought his marriage fixed with someone else...poor him..

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Awesum story.
Love it.
Maan fell for geet in first sught.
Nd her poems just touch his heart n he just fall for her more n more.
He decided to confess his love to hrr.
Bt rajmata fixed his marriage
Totally unaware from that the girl is none other than geet he dont happy with alliance.
Really wonder what will his reaction when he find out his bride is none other than geet.
Waiting for nxt part...
Update soon...