Two Shot : LoSt In YoU.....Updated Last Part @page 10.....4th Oct - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome second part vandy.. you know my opinion about first part..
here i could see a maan and Geet.. though in raga style..
Poor Maan
sacrificed his love to full fillt he promise of his deceased father..after all he was a Rajput
he got married still his heart was with his Geet.. he knew that he was cheating his wife by marrying her with he confessed his love for Geet honestly..
and poor girl she could not understand how should she react\

But she decided to clear all the mist and
Haha
Maan he was day dreaming her everywhere in Raj mahal..
Maan,,here is a surprise for you..
and the time came when everything was going to be cleared ..
and Maan heard his voice and could not believe his ears.. He looked at her from toe to head and got the sweetest surprise..
Lovely OS Vandy..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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atlast he allowed her to speak i thought he wont let her speak again like previous night

What to say to Maan cant even scold him

If by chance if he would have seen his fiance he would have enjoyed his wedding

I am only feeling sorry for that thing

Geet also loved Maan

Happy ending

Thanks for PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
dear not enjoying
so much enjoying hai ji

vegence lover bhi dede
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_21

dear not enjoying

so much enjoying hai ji

vegence lover bhi dede

😆😆
hehe... trying my best to give vengeance lover by this weekend😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
hi di,
nice update...loved the whole concept and the story...⭐️


hehe maan tho pakka ullu bangaya isme...😆


wow geet loves him from childhood 😆


love


uma...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
awesome update...
Maan don't know that he married to Geet and Geet s happy that Maan confessed his love for Geet ...
happy ending
Continue soon
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