OS.....Pehli Nazar Ka Pehla Pyaar - Page 4

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi padma

congrats for turning into writer ..

happy to see one more writer in our forum ..

ur story was really nice ..

simple adorable ..lovely maneet story ..

pehli nazar ka pyaar ..lucky maneet they got each other..

thank u for lovely story .

Originally posted by: drrose31

First of all..

Congozz on your first work..

OS: IT was a sweet OS ... 👏

Liked it ..

Thanks for pm

Would love to read more from you 😉

Originally posted by: priya111111

haaye haaye congrats padma for stepping into new phase in gf as a writer😳

cute and simple sa story hai..love at first sight.. finally confess karliya dono ne.. warna aur kitne din aise hi rehjathe.


ab tu writer bangayi ho aur meri new celebrations thread keliye ek os deni padegi😆😆

Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Its good to see one more new writer in the forum

Loved the OS it sweet and simple

Maaneet felt something for each other at first sight only maan attracted towards her innocent beauty and geet drowned towards his voice and his eyes...both again met in shopping mall actually both bumped into each other and they had Rk pose they again drowned in each other before they could talk pinky and took them away...maan came to gets house to see the girl unknown to him he is going to see the girl he was fida both saw each other and were very happy both talked their hearts out and confessed their love for each other.lovely is

Do write more

Originally posted by: sidlik

Padma

It was so sweet and Beautiful

loved it so much

They fell in love at first sight

Great

Do write More sweety

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Beautiful os.

Originally posted by: CookieMonster.

Lovly one

Originally posted by: singh24

😃 🤗 Hi Padma.. love to see u ..

congo dear... 🥳

😃 A very sweet OS ❤️