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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

tum bhi try karo😉

If I starts writing people run away from the forum I don't want to take that risk

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wooow...finally ...good to see u as a writer...loved this short n sweet os dear...will b waiting for ur nxt one...

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

very cute update di.. love at first sight.. awesome di..

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ammu5
wooow...finally ...good to see u as a writer...loved this short n sweet os dear...will b waiting for ur nxt one...

Thanks Gayathri 😊

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: --aarthi--
very cute update di.. love at first sight.. awesome di..

Aarthi🤗

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: umamaaneet
Hi di...😛

very cute and lovely os...it is so touching😳

emotions were written nicely⭐️

very good start...😃

keep up the good work...👏

love ❤️

uma...🤗

Thanks Uma😊

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -padmarao-

Aarthi🤗

ur welcome di.. tats a sweet surprise

Edited by --aarthi-- - 10 years ago

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

WOW !!!!! That Was Simply Beautiful

Both Maan and Geet had fallen for each other on the first day they saw each other and when they met again after two months they again wanted to talk to each other but due to friends they could not and finally when Geet's parents wanted her to marry and when the boy and his family came home only to find out that both of them love each other already and they were happy