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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

First of all..

Congozz on your first work..

OS: IT was a sweet OS ... 👏

Liked it ..

Thanks for pm

Would love to read more from you 😉

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

haaye haaye congrats padma for stepping into new phase in gf as a writer😳

cute and simple sa story hai..love at first sight.. finally confess karliya dono ne.. warna aur kitne din aise hi rehjathe.

ab tu writer bangayi ho aur meri new celebrations thread keliye ek os deni padegi😆😆

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Its good to see one more new writer in the forum

Loved the OS it sweet and simple

Maaneet felt something for each other at first sight only maan attracted towards her innocent beauty and geet drowned towards his voice and his eyes...both again met in shopping mall actually both bumped into each other and they had Rk pose they again drowned in each other before they could talk pinky and took them away...maan came to gets house to see the girl unknown to him he is going to see the girl he was fida both saw each other and were very happy both talked their hearts out and confessed their love for each other.lovely is

Do write more

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miss_mystery

@miss_mystery

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Padma

It was so sweet and Beautiful

loved it so much

They fell in love at first sight

Great

Do write More sweety

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

hi congrats on the ur OS! 😊 beautiful OS! superbly written! 👏Lovely banner! Love at first sight! they didn't confess! Maan is the guy tht her parents chose 4 her! Geet happy! they confess! hope u write another story soon! n do pm me!

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Very cute and lovely os
Maaneet fell in love the moment they saw each other it was really awesome os

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: taahir004
WOW !!!!! That Was Simply Beautiful

Both Maan and Geet had fallen for each other on the first day they saw each other and when they met again after two months they again wanted to talk to each other but due to friends they could not and finally when Geet's parents wanted her to marry and when the boy and his family came home only to find out that both of them love each other already and they were happy

thanks🤗

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: abinash079
Very cute and lovely os
Maaneet fell in love the moment they saw each other it was really awesome os

thanks Abi🤗

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi congrats on the ur OS! 😊 beautiful OS! superbly written! 👏Lovely banner! Love at first sight! they didn't confess! Maan is the guy tht her parents chose 4 her! Geet happy! they confess! hope u write another story soon! n do pm me!

Thanks dear🤗