OS.....Pehli Nazar Ka Pehla Pyaar

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PEHLI NAZAR KA PEHLA PYAAR


It was a bright Monday morning...there was hustle-bustle going on in**** college . An inter collegiate debate competition was about to begin & the girls were doing the last minute preparations...one girl in her yellow suit was fixing some decorative stuff standing on the ladder...the girl is our geet.






unknown to her a pair of eyes was staring her ...that is maan who had come early to participate in the competition ...he was totally fida over her innocent beauty...he felt it was love at first sight for him😳.



he didn't move from his place till Adi(maan's frnd) came & reminded him about the competition.

The competition had begun...maan's turn came ..when he started speaking...geet was back stage..hearing his voice she was drawn towards the voice & came near the stage, she was so engrossed in his voice & his captive eyes







she came out of her dream hearing the claps..even she felt some feeling & thought its love



It was over 2 months after that incident ...it was a sunday geet & pinky (geet's frnd) had come to a mall...even maan & adi had come...both were so engrossed in their talking ...maaneet bumped into each other...RK pose..hayeee...







Both felt like oasis in a desert seeing each other after 2 months...their mahi moment was broken when pinky n adi called them .They didn't speak a word. Maaneet had the urge to talk to each other...but couldn't as Adi & pinky took them away.


Geet finished her graduation & her parents were searching for a suitable boy for her...she felt broken & thought 'love at first sight' all happens in movies & not in real lives. She agreed to meet the boy.

Next day the boy & his family arrived...geet was called & she was serving tea to all...when she came near the boy ..he took the tea cup & looked at her face...both were shocked & happy too...the boy was maan...looking at them staring parents knew their answer is yes.

Maaneet were sent to talk...both were on the terrace...they were numb..no one spoke both were staring at each other...finally maan broke the silence...

Maan -Geet do you like me or agreeing for this proposal because your parents fixed it ?

Geet-maan i like you & not because of my parents force..woh...woh main (she was hesitant to answer) Maan took geet's hand in his & asked...'what is the matter geet,you are hesitating to tell...you can tell me what in your mind'.

Geet- (Bending her down)Maan woh i had liked you when you had participated in the debate competition ...i had fallen listening to your voice & ur captive eyes(she was blushing while saying this)☺️☺️...maan was on cloud 9 listening to her confession😳😳.

Maan-Geet main ek baath bolu..(she nodded her head without lifting..she was too shy)even i had seen you decorating the hall...i was totally fida over your cute face & smile...i wanted to talk to you at the mall too but couldn't.

Maan kept his finger on geet's chin & made her look at him ..she was fully red😳😳...maan was bowled over her innocence..he couldn't wait any more he pulled geet into a hug ..geet willing gave in ..



Maan"Geet lets go down ,all must be waiting for us..she nodded & both went down...they told their parents that they like each other .


Maaneet marriage got fixed...they lived happily😊😊




Their dream came true❤️❤️



Hi dearies...i am only a reader in this forum😊

Thought of writing on maaneet ...& here it is...hope you people like it😆😆

all comments are welcome😎








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its good to see one more new writer in the forum
Edited by _Chinmayi_ - 9 years ago
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Hi di...😛


very cute and lovely os...it is so touching😳



emotions were written nicely⭐️



very good start...😃



keep up the good work...👏



love ❤️



uma...🤗
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Congrats padma on ur first maaneet story...loved the title
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Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Its good to see one more new writer in the forum


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Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

Congrats padma on ur first maaneet story...loved the title


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Liked the story very much
Beautifully written
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Originally posted by: kamnagupta7

Liked the story very much
Beautifully written


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Originally posted by: _Chinmayi_

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