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Sadqa Tere Ishq ka

A young lady clad in white chudidar and white chunni around her shoulder.

' Hey Babaji sirf ek bar mujhe mere maan ka chahera dikha do..Tere dar par meine itni Mannate ki hai..ek bar to maire par apki dua ho..' geet was tying dhaga and praying for her maan.

Maan entered happily in his house.
Any one can sense his happiness through his voice. 'Maa Maa.. Geet kahan hai?'
His mother seemed somewhat angry at his question.
He turned to his dadima after not getting any answer from his mother.
'Dadima geet?'
Dadima was upset, 'Maan bete..'
But before she could complete her sentence she was stopped mid sentence by her daughter in law.

' Nahi maji.. It's bar aap kuchh nahi kahenge.. Ye hamare bete ki Jindgi ka Sawal hai..
Uss ki baat ab iss ghar mein koi bhi nahi karega..
Khushiyo ne iss ghar se jaise rasta hi badal diya hai..
Maan ne usse ek bar bachaya usne uski jaan khatre mein daal ke..aur fir Mano silsila lag gaya.. Wo ladki Har baar mere maan ki Jindgi ki bikherti gai..na jaane Kaun sa jadu kar diya hai hamare bete par.
Par ab Nahi..humne shaadi karwai inke samne jhuk ke..par wo..ek aulad tak.. ' she was continuously speaking about Geet.

'Maaa..'Maan shouted at her mother.

He was worried about her geet her wife.

'Apne kya kiya? Geet ko kya kaha?
Kahan gai wo?'

Dadima was silent.
'Dadima aap chup kyun hai? '

Tears rolled down on dadima's face.

Maan put his hands on dadima's shoulders. He wiped her face.

He was hyper. Geet was nowhere to be seen in whole house. And his mother was bad mouthing about his love.. His own mother.

What had she done with her?

'Maan bete please aap jaldi jaie.. Geet ko bacha li jiye.. ' Dadima requested,still crying. She was feeling helpless first time in life.

'Par Dadima kya Hua wo to bataye.. '

Flashback

Geet bete.. Hamare liye cha bhijwa dena Robin ke sath..

Dadima.. Mein abhi leke aati hun..

Bete aap kyun khud sab Kam karte rahete hai.
Itne sare to hai ye sab karne je liye..

Dadima..hamari Maa kaheti hai..ki apne Kam khud hi karne chahiye.. Dusro par depend karte karte hum khud se karna bhul Jate hai..Aur hum abhi to jawan hai... She winked at dadima and went to kitchen..

Dadima chuckled at her behavior.

Her smile was infectious..she was always one to get up early in the morning.. Then prayed to God.. After that she made breakfast for everyone.
She has handled everything without any problem.

But his mother was not happy with his choice and didn't leave any chance to insult her.

And that day was no different. Pammi, geet 's mother in law, had invited her kitty friends at home. They were all having fun at theater room. Geet was passing by that room to get dadima's Chai. Nivedita and Kanika both were making joke on pammi for not having any grand child. At that time she didn't say anything. But after all her friends were gone. She insulted geet and asked her to leave her house. She told her if she will not leave then she will be a useless wife in house and maan will be married to another woman. Without heir to his empire he also felt sadness but he couldn't tell her anything. So if geet wanted his happiness she had to leave him.

And with Maan's happiness in her mind she left the mansion.

Flashback end

Geeet, maan cried out her name. He hated his mother. He couldn't see anything happening to his love all this time. And Geet didn't once complained to him.
Because she was Geet,her love. That was her nature.

He instantly called Adi and informed him to find geet. He called commissioner uncle and talked to him about Geet and whole situation.. He did all during his drive to one place, dargah.
Maan went to pray for her safety to her Babaji.
He was walking around and praying and suddenly stopped by those big brown eyes peeping from intricated window.
Geet was tieing a dhaga for her mannat. Aur Mano jaise Rab ne uski sun li ho..
Maan slowly walked to her. He could not believe his eyes.
He slowly reached to her side. They both were looking at each other with so much love in their eyes. Due to wind her chunni dropped from her head. He saw that and slowly covered her head with her chunni all time looking at her lovely face.
She was asking to give a last glance at her love to Rab.
She was Thankful to Rab and averted her eyes to dhaga but her hands were trembling. They weren't steady at all and seeing that maan put his hands on her and helped to tie dhaga..
Dono ki dua qubool hui.. Wo bhi uske darbar Mein..

Geet.. He slowly tried to make conversation.. But as soon as geet tried to talk a lady interrupted them and told geet that she was on wrong side of dargah.. They were supposed to pray from other side as this was man's side. Then she took Geet with her.
Maan was annoyed beyond the point but could not say anything.
He thought to wait for her outside.

After a while when geet was going back to the group maan saw her and stopped her.She knew why he was there and what he wanted. But she has to be strong and have to denied every tempting offer of him.

Geet chalo ghar..
Kaun sa ghar maan?
Ye kaisa Sawal hai geet?
Maine kya galat kaha hai.
Mera koi ghar Nahi hai..Tum wapas chale jao Apne ghar..
His temper was rising by every answer of geet.
He held her upper arms with little force.
Main tumhe liye Bina kahi nahi jaaunga.
Aur mein apke sath kahi nahi jaaungi.

By raising his voice he was grabbing attention from other people.

So geet took him a little far from everyone s eyes.

Geet tumhe meri fikr hai.fir ye natak kyun..
Ye natak nahi hai maan aur ye aap jitni jaldi samje utna hi achha hai..Mera yahan se chale jaane mein hi sab ki bhalai hai..
Geet.. His voice dropped for a second. Then he spoke with loud voice..
Thik hai chali jao yahan se.. Jana hai na jao..par yaad rakhana.. Jaise heer ke Bina raanjha nahi jiya tha Waise hi mein bhi tumhare Bina nahi ji paunga..Geet ke bina uska maan adhura hai, tha aur rahega..
With that he turned around and left the place.
By that time someone was there to call geet to come with them.
But by seeing all that the Elder lady told geet.,ye Tumhara pati hai na tumse bahot pyar karta hai..aise akele mat chhod ke jao..nahi rahe paoge dono ek dusre ke Bina.

Chachi aap samaj nahi rahe ho.. Meri wajah se wo kitni musibat aayegi unpe..
Beta Agar Rab mushkeliyaan deta hai to uske sath uska hal bhi deta hai..
Uss par vishwas rakho.. Jao beta.. Itni aasani se Apne pyar ko apne se dur mat karo..
With that geet ran in Maan's direction. But he was nowhere to be seen.
She ran to parking and spotted him standing by his car.
As she walked near him she could listen the slow murmuring.
Main har gaya Aaj..Geet main har gaya.. Dadima I failed today..
She hugged him from behind.
Kuchh mat boliye.. Maan mein yahin hun apke pas apke saath..Aap kabhi nahi harte ho..Aap Maan Singh Khurana ho..Aap geet ke maan ho..Aap kaise haar sakte ho..
And in that second he got his world back..he tightly hugged and made a promise to never let her go from his life again..
Geet tum tension mat lo..humse ban payega wo hum sab karnge..meri bhi khwahis hai ki mein tumhe Humare bachhe ke sath dekhu.. Par aise haar nahi mante.. Ki tum mujhe hi chhod ke chali jao..chalo wapis ghar chalte hai...
He picked her up and settled her inside car on passenger seat..he sat on his seat but instead of starting his car,he called Adi and commissioner one by one and told that he found geet.
Then drove back to home..
After three months they adopted only a month old baby boy.and after three years they blessed by twin girls.
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Happy Teri Deewani Celebrations




Kudos to Lakshmi and Priya for this wonderful thread and all the efforts they and the writers, editors & vm makers have made...👏

Lakshmi and Priya your hard work and efforts are commendable...👏

Three cheers for everyone's effort to make this forum more active😃🥳
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lakshu di awesom editing
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Cngrtzz for the Thread 😊😛

n Amazing Work Lakshu 😊🤗
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CONGRATULATIONS FOR ONE MORE THREAD LAKSYA😉




I truly appreciate you efforts to relvive the moments of maan and geet. through this thread...👏


kitni patience hai yaar tum mein... 😆



I truly admire you for that... i know how tedious work is this... but you are doing it ... i salute you for your energy...😳



i pray you have this energy till the very end and we get to relive and love our beloved maaneet once again...



LOVE YOU GIRLS... LAKSHU AND PRIYA... MUUUAAAHHH... AUR JADOO KI JHAPPI BHI...



⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️



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its amzing

and di priya di aapki editing bole toh jakaas😃😆

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