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Edits from uluvmg
BREAK UP
he sits in car, someone knock on glass, he sliding down the glass down and see geet standing in front of her...
geet : kya huya maan
maan : car bnd pd gyi hai
geet : so what
yaha se KC asa kitna dur hai
jo aap
padal nhi chl sakte
.
Maan : mein jaa sakta hu padal
Par sayad tumhe dikh nhi raha
Baarish ho rhi hai
Geet : so
Umbrella pata hai aapko kyun use krte hai
Maan : wo is waqt car mein available nhi hai
Toh maine ramesh ko beja hai
Geet : wo baarish mein jaa sakta hai
Aur aap nhi
.
Ye bilkul galat baat hai
MR. Maan
.
Maan : wo uski duty hai
Geet : aapse umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai
Maan : geet aur tumse kya umeed ki jaa sakti hai
Yhi bta do
.
Geet : come out
Aap chaho toh mere sath umbrella share kr sakte ho
.
Maan : hmm
*********
Geet : maan itne dur kyun jaa rhe ho
Ase toh aap khud big jaayonge
Ya mujhe biga donge
Maan : mein tumhare karib bhi toh nhi aa sakta
Geet : kyun nhi aa sakte
Am your girl friend
Maan : really
Kal raat hi toh break up huya tha
Geet : wo toh maine bs gusse mein kh diya tha
Uska koi matlab nhi tha
.
Aur waise bhi
Raat gyi baat gyi
She held his hand and come close to her...
.
Pata hai maan
Mujhe ek song yaad aa raha hai
.
Pyaar huya
Ikraar huya
Pyaar se fir kyun darta hai dil
.
Kehta hai dil
Rasta mushkil
Maalom nahin hai kahan manzil
.
Maan : geet office aa gya hai
Aur baarish bhi ruk chuki hai
He left her outside...
*********
Due to you Miss geet Handa
This all things happened
.
Maan baarish kya mere hath mein
Jaise mein usse khti
Baarish ji
Abhi maan singh khurana
Bahar hai
Aap bilkul mt aana
.
Bolo
.
.
Geet mera mobile tumhare wajh se kharab huya hai
.
Ek mobile ke liye aap apni GF ko daat rhe ho
Very bad Mr. maan
.
Just shut up geet
Tum situation ko bilkul nhi smjhti ho
Itna important call tha
Due to your child behavior
This all thing happened...
Abhi hum kissi five star hotel mein hote
Toh ye situation aati hi nhi
Par nhi Miss handa ko toh dabbe pe khana hai
.
Bs maan
Break Up
.
What you say geet
.
Jo aapne suna
Am going
Jaldi se baitho
Aapko gahr drop kr deti hu
.
Mein ajnabiyo ke sath nhi jaata
Bye
.
Byeee
**************
Maan : geet pack your bag
One meeting hai
Hume aaj hi raat ko niklana honga
Geet : ok
Hum wapas kb aayenge
Maan : aaj jaayenge
Kal wapas
Geet : what
Hum kaha jaa rhe hai
Maan : Mumbai
Geet : maan mein Mumbai kbhi nhi gyi
Aap mujhe Mumbai dikhayonge na
Maan : geet we are going for meeting not for outing
So concentrate on meeting
Geet : maan meeting ke baad
Maan : I think later about this
Now you go and check all details of this file
Then make hard copy and soft copy too
Geet : hmm
Dd khi ka
Maan : mujhe baad mein kosna
I want 100 % geet
No mistake this time
Geet : ji
.
Maan
Kal raat ke liye sorry
Maan : sorry
Tum kh rhi ho
Geet : maan
Aapka important call tha
Aur fir ye sb ho gya
Baarish mere hath mein nhi thi
Par sayad jagah ki choice better ho sakti thi
Maan : geet go back to your work
I have meeting
Geet : maan
Maan: goo
Geet : hmm
**********
Both left to Mumbai and attend meeting and after sign the deal, maaneet is sited alone...
Geet : maan abhi toh bs 3 bje hai
Maan : toh
Geet : maan chalo na mumbai nagri gumte hai
Maan : tum jaayo
I have work
Geet : maan ab kya kaam rh gya
Maan : geet bahar car hai
Tum jaha chaho jaa sakti ho
Geet : aur aap
Maan : I manage
Bs 8 bje tak hume airport puchna hai
Toh tum hotel wapas 6 bje tk aa jaana
Tum aa jaana
Geet : aap pakka nhi chalonge
Maan : no
Geet : ok
********
Firstly she goes for shopping, try to entertain own self...but feeling some strange fear in heart...something going happen soon...but what...
.
Geet tu bhi na
Bhut soch rhi hai
.
Pata nhi kyun mujhe ase lag raha hai maan
Mujhse naraaz hai
Ya fir unke dimag mein kuch ch raha hai
.
Geet tu jyada mt soch
Sbse phle maan ke liye kuch le lete hai
Wo khush ho jaayenge
*************
Geet calls maan...
Geet : maan
Aap kaha hai
Mein hotel puch gyi hu
Maan : geet ek problem ho gyi hai
.
Geet : maan
Kya huya
.
Maan
Bolo na
Maan : geet
Tumhari awaaz nhi aa rhi hai
.
Geet : maan aap kaha ho
Maan : geet
Gurudware
.
Geet : ye kaha hai maan
Maan : hotel ke pass hi hai
.
.
Cuttt
*************
She tries his call again but going switch off...now environment also changing...thundering clouds making her restlessness...
She takes purse and left to search him...
Driver : madam
Shi gurudwara hai sbse najdeek
Geet : thik hai bhaiya
Mein abhi aati hu
Driver : ji
.
She runs mechanically , her eyes only want to see him, why her heart not in peace... She collided with fakir...
Geet : maaf krna mujhe
Fakir : jiske liye tu bechan hai
Wo tujhe jaroor milenga
Par aaj nhi
Geet : ji
Ye aap kya kh rhe hai
Wo andher hai
Fakir : honga wo andher
.
Par har ek mohabbat mein
Kuch na kuch khatnaiya aati hai
Tum dono paar kr gye
Toh humesha ke liye mil jaayonge
Ya fir
Geet : ya fir
Fakir : wo tujhe waqt batayenga
********
Today wind also against her...or says saying some message to her...want to stop her for facing the break up...???
One thread come and falls on her feet... She takes thread and her feet automatically go forward to owner of this thread...
Geet : suniye
He turns and shocked to see her here and she happy to see him, her eyes feel with tears...
Aunty : beta
Tum yaha nhi aa sakti
She held geet hand and dragging her side...thread going to lose from her hand and maan try to read her eyes...
Maan (think) no maan
You take one decision and it's totally right
He pulls the thread and turns ...geet felt hurt sees his back and blank eyes for her...
**********
She is waiting patiently outside...
Geet : maan
,
Kitna time laga diya aapne
.
Mein aapka hi wait kr rhi thi
.
Pta hai
Aapne kitna dra diya tha mujhe
.
Mein na jaane kya - kya soch rhi thi
Aap thik ho na
Maan : hmm
Geet : fir aap kuch bol kyun nhi rhe
.
Maan mujhe bataya kyun nhi
Aap yaha aa rhe ho
.
Hum sath aate na
Maan : geet I want to tell something
Geet : kaho
Na
Maan : break up
Geet : what break up
Maan : geet its simple
Hum dono bhut alag hai
We are not compatible with each other...
Acha hai hum alag ho jaaye
.
Geet : maan ye aap ky a kh rhe hai
Maan : geet yhi shi hai humare liye
Geet : no maan
Never
.
Maan I know you are angry na
Wo dabbe wali baat ke liye
But that's not mean na
Aap mujhe khud se durr krde
.
Dekho maan mein aapke liye kya laayi thi
Ye tie
Cufflinks
.
Maan : geet I don't need this
Geet : maan
You can't say like this
Maan : geet behave yourself
Don't behave like kids
Geet : why you always feel
Am kid
Maan : because you are
Tumhari harkaate waise hi hai
.
Now wipe your tears
Humari flight ka waqt ho raha hai
Geet : maan
Maan (think) no maan
Don't see in her eyes
Ye decision bilkul thik hai
You can adjust with her child behavior
And she also too
.
Tu has bol kya liya iske sath
Ye pyaar thode hai
Relation mein aur bhi bhut se cheeze hoti hai
He left without saying any word...
*********
Edits from preethi_maaneet
Edits from JIYAMG
Edits from valli30
Edits from shonamsk
OS by Uma (umamaaneet)
~THOLI KALAYIKA(FIRST MEET)~
The outlines of the houses are becoming clearer as the spring's first orange hued rays of sunrise kissed the still dust laden road...the city was subdued quiet ..only road sweepers & some early morning joggers hurried through the otherwise deserted streets...that's when Maan singh khurana started with his daily jog routine...he was an early riser...
It is fun to jog..he thought as he felt the early morning warm rays kiss his face...he is always enthusiastic about trying new things..daily he jog in his VIP's block street..today he want to jog in lower level block..that is B-block...he believes in equality...all are equal under the sun that his thought...as he changed his route towards b-block street unaware that his life is going to take a new turn...
As he continued to jog he felt thirsty and settled down on one of the bench..suddenly a hand came in front of his vision with a Mickey mouse water bottle but what caught his attention was the qwner of that hand...that belongs to a girl in her early twenties...with a heart shaped face,hazel eyes,curly hair...cute red nose,petal like lips..so kissable...swan like neck...curvy figure...his breath caught ..he couldn't describe her beauty in mere words...beautiful would be an understatement to describe her...
His chain of thoughts came to an end by the beauty herself...
Theesuko(take it)....she shook her mickey bottle infront of him...
Huh.??.maan frowned in a confusing manner...
Are baba...I mean take it...
Oh..thanks...maan mumbled and took the bottle in his hand..after quenching his thirst maan returned the bottle and stood immediately as he saw the girl resumed with her jog...he matched her pace...
Maan(nervously)-hi...
Girl-hi
Maan (forwarding his hand))- maan..
Girl after thinking slowly rose her hand and shook with him..
Geet... geet handa...
No getting how to converse more maan kept silent hoping she may start...and she did not disappoint him...
Geet- "which block do you belong?"
Without giving maan a chance she continued...
Geet-I know B or C ...u cannot be from that nasty VIP's block ...how can that proud idiots can come to their lower level block
Maan was perplexed at her prediction...but choose to not reveal his identity..fearing she might get angry at him...he himself doesn't know why he want to get in her good books...
Maan-yes yes I belong to B-block only...he shuttered...
Geet(all smiles)-good ...but I did not see you here anywhere?
Maan was caught off guard...
Maan(covering)-this is my first time jog...
Geet-oh...what do you do...where r you from...I work at NGO and ..my native is Hyderabad...mother tongue is telugu...due to work we shifted to mumbai
Maan-oh nice...I work in small company as manager...my native is Mumbai only...
Maan felt guilty for lying to her...but he does not have any other option...
Geet- nice...
Maan(holding his breath)-between why you hate VIP block that much?
Geet-(eyes red)-not hate...I loathe them...
Maan(scared)- y?
Geet(angry)-what why...they are all blood sucking leeches...they are worst than devils...they are responsible for this bad situation of poor people...thankless fools...they make them work hard and enjoy luxuries and pleasures of being rich...but poor people are struck there only where they are struggling for their daily bread...
Geet was breathing heavily at the end...whilst maan stood shocked at her outburst...
He knew she was right but not all rich people are like that...
Maan(whispering)-but not all r same
Geet(gritting her teeth)-no all are like that only
Maan- ok ok cool...all r like that...
He gulped thinking what will be her reaction after knowing about his identity...
They continued to jog ..they came across some street children who were sweeping the road...geet stopped them and gave them chocolates which she bought with her... And she took their brooms...gave one to maan while she took other...
Maan(horrified)-whatt!!!!!!!!! 😲
Geet- are take na...see small children are working when their age is to study and play...i know we are not capable of solving all their problems but we can help them right...
Geet started her work unaware of what effect her words caused to the person stood beside her...
Till that moment maan was unable to name the feeling he felt for her but at that very second he knew that MAAN SINGH KHURANA is head over heels in love with GEET HANDA...
preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi
ho gayi main matwaari
bal bal jaaun apane piya ko
he main jaaun vaari vaari
mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki
yeh toh jaane duniya saari
bebas aur laachar phiru main
MSK the great business magnet swept the road along with his love ...that is the power of love...
After their work both bid bye to each other...geet felt happy to find a friend in maan ...whilst maan 😳...?
Next morning...
Maan again came to b-block...joined geet and both started their jog ..by the time they came to children .all children were happily playing while other workers were cleaning roads...geet was surprised ...on enquiring them...they said that some big company took their responsibility ...and from tomorrow they can go to school as the company also promised to afford their expenses...geet's happiness knew no bounds...she asked the company's name but children said they doesn't know...
Geet's face lit up...she too started to jump along with the children...the sight was a treat to maan...it made his day...what more he would want that his love's smile...he can do anything and everything for that...it gives him immense satisfaction that his millions and trillions deals doesn't give...from that day he solved every problem which geet described without him being in the picture...😳
Days passed their friendship bloomed to next level...and geet's heart too started to beat in the budding love for her maan...yes her maan...
haari main dil haari - 2
Though she is a tough girl but she too want him to confess first...she is very sensitive in this matters...
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One fine day...
Maan was in very bad mood due to his brother dev...he loved naintara but she is a gold digger...maan was aware about her and tried to warn dev but dev did not listen to him...he was blinded by naintara's love talks...
Geet who saw him lost in thoughts shook him...
What's wrong...? Why are you dull?...they both can understand each other by their face itself...
Maan was in fix ..he couldn't reveal dev as his brother...so he lied ...
Maan-its about my friend dev...he is rich..he loves one girl but she is very bad...she is after his money ..i tried to warn him but he is not listening to me....
Geet(eyes all bright with a naughty glint)-oh that's it...then you should deal her in her way only...
Maan(raising his brow)- what r you trying to imply...
Geet(hitting his head) -are verri vengalappaya(you mad fool...)
Maan was now used to her scolding him and calling him names in telugu...😆
Geet-do one thing stealthily take ur friend's mobile and msg her that...his parents are not agreeing for their marriage...so he left all his wealth as he don't want anything other than her...
Maan's tube light lit while geet winked at him...😉
his naughty princess...maan smiled shaking his head
Maan did as told and the result was successful ..dev asked for forgiveness from him...
Everything was going fine...but maan's conscience was feeling guilty for lying her...he decided to tell her truth and propose her he next morning where their first meeting happened...in their jog place...unaware of what fate has in store for him...
That evening when he was in his office he made calls for the next days proposal arrangements...and came out of his cabin as he has a meeting in conference hall...
Geet came to KC to ask donation for her NGO..while asking to the receptionist he saw maan's photo there...she was surprised...she thought that her maan is very popular in his company...she want to confirm
Geet(pointing towards photo smiling.. )- who is he?
Receptionist(smiling)- he is our boss...Maan singh khurana..KC's MD...
Geet's smile vanished ...she staggered back as is been pushed...she felt cold and numb...her legs felt week to hold her upright ...she felt difficult to breath...
Geeet...a terrified gasp left from maan who saw her there...his fearful eyes met her cold hurt eyes...and he felt lighting stuck on him seeing the pain there...her almonds were screaming only one word...betrayal...
...his eyes glistened seeing her numb...his gulped the chocking lump which formed in his throat...
Geet..pls listen...it is not like that...he took one step towards her hurriedly...but she ran from there...leaving him in the abyss of pain and guilt...
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After one week...
It has been a bloody week since he has seen her...after that encounter , he ran after her but couldn't catch her...he thought to give her some time but she did not come to their morning jog...he want to explain her that he did not mean to hurt her...he just couldn't tell her truth as he feared losing her...he felt life less without her...if he didn't see her he will surely die...his eyes became sunken telling the tale of his sleepless nights...he became weak as he missed his meals...how can he when his every cell and breath was howling for her in pain...
He searched her every street but it was like she vanished from thin air...what he was unaware was that not only he ..she was also missing him...geet s mind and heart was in war...she couldn't forget him...she too couldn't breathe without him...he was her first and last love thus she followed him every morning hiding from behind...
She came to know about him ...that he is the reason of that street children welfare...only for her he ,the MSK swept clean the roads...he is the reason her NGO got a large amount of donation...he has a great heart ...even before her KC used to help many poor people...by donations...but ,but she was feeling guilty for making him suffer...she felt she doesn't deserve the gem like him...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VbaB8TnnUk[/YOUTUBE]
tere naam se jee loon - 2
tere naam se marr jaaun - 2
teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani- 2
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani - 2
ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2
haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye
ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2
khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole
yahi ishq di marzi hain
yahi rab di marzi hain
yahi ishq di marzi hain
yahi rab di marzi hain
tere bin jeena kaisa
haan khudgarzi hai
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani - 4
geet wiped her tears and turned around to leave that place but stopped short seeing the maan there...her breath caught in her lungs...she tried to escape but maan cornered her...
Maan's orbs watered seeing his geet after whole one week...he was memorizing her every feature...but he came out of his trance hearing her...
geet(facking anger so that he will leave her)-leave me...what more lies you want to feed me...?
Maan(chokingly)-geet..geet shona..pls listen to me...i did not mean to hurt or cheat you...I did not mean to play with you...how can I when you mean the whole world to me...you are my life jaan...i agree I lied you but that was due to the fear of losing you...that fear scares the hell out of me...I just...maan gulped the lump...i just couldn't live without you...that day I thought to tell you the whole truth and propose you..but even before that you came to know about that...i am sorry ...really sorry...forgive me...if me being rich is the problem then I will leave everything...beat me ,scold me,call me names...but never leave me...i will d...
Geet stopped him by placing her hand on his mouth...
Geet(crying bitterly)- malli ala anna vante champestanu...na verri vengalapayya...(if you again say that ..i will kill you myself...my mad man..)...
Maan laughed hearing her...
Maan(eyes having mischievous glint )- alage na verri vengalamma...(ok my mad woman)...
Geet's eyes widened seeing him talking in telugu...
Geet-how do you?...
Maan(winking)-I learned telugu...he kissed her red cheek ...for you...
Geet (feeling overwhelmed) - I love you maan...
Maan gasped feeling the gush of happiness spread through his body...the word for which he craved .he listened today...it was like music to his ears...
Maan(with all his heart promising his life)- I love you too geet...I love you more than my life...i promise will never lie to you again...
Both hugged each other savoring the feel
Maan(naughtily with tongue in cheek)- nenu neeku muddu pettocha?(can I kiss u?)...
Geet (angrily blushing )- you...idi ra nuvvu telugulo nerchukundi...(you stupid this is what you learn in telugu)...
She ran after him beating...whilst maan dodged her...geet not able to catch him stopped there huffing puffing...
Maan-sorry...
Geet turned her face...but suddenly gasped as maan pulled her in a toe curling, life shattering, body jingling and soul shattering kiss...this is their deewani
he main rang rangeeli deewani - 2
ke main albeli main mastani
gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun
he main deen dhram se begaani
ke main deewani main deewani
tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun - 2
tere jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani...
Edits from Rashmi...
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