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OS by Priyanka (priya_21)











BREAK UP

he sits in car, someone knock on glass, he sliding down the glass down and see geet standing in front of her...

geet : kya huya maan

maan : car bnd pd gyi hai

geet : so what

yaha se KC asa kitna dur hai

jo aap

padal nhi chl sakte

.

Maan : mein jaa sakta hu padal

Par sayad tumhe dikh nhi raha

Baarish ho rhi hai

Geet : so

Umbrella pata hai aapko kyun use krte hai

Maan : wo is waqt car mein available nhi hai

Toh maine ramesh ko beja hai

Geet : wo baarish mein jaa sakta hai

Aur aap nhi

.

Ye bilkul galat baat hai

MR. Maan

.

Maan : wo uski duty hai

Geet : aapse umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai

Maan : geet aur tumse kya umeed ki jaa sakti hai

Yhi bta do

.

Geet : come out

Aap chaho toh mere sath umbrella share kr sakte ho

.

Maan : hmm

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Geet : maan itne dur kyun jaa rhe ho

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Ase toh aap khud big jaayonge

Ya mujhe biga donge

Maan : mein tumhare karib bhi toh nhi aa sakta

Geet : kyun nhi aa sakte

Am your girl friend

Maan : really

Kal raat hi toh break up huya tha

Geet : wo toh maine bs gusse mein kh diya tha

Uska koi matlab nhi tha

.

Aur waise bhi

Raat gyi baat gyi

She held his hand and come close to her...

.

Pata hai maan

Mujhe ek song yaad aa raha hai

.

Pyaar huya

Ikraar huya

Pyaar se fir kyun darta hai dil

.

Kehta hai dil

Rasta mushkil

Maalom nahin hai kahan manzil

.

Maan : geet office aa gya hai

Aur baarish bhi ruk chuki hai

He left her outside...

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Due to you Miss geet Handa

This all things happened

.

Maan baarish kya mere hath mein

Jaise mein usse khti

Baarish ji

Abhi maan singh khurana

Bahar hai

Aap bilkul mt aana

.

Bolo

.

.

Geet mera mobile tumhare wajh se kharab huya hai

.

Ek mobile ke liye aap apni GF ko daat rhe ho

Very bad Mr. maan

.

Just shut up geet

Tum situation ko bilkul nhi smjhti ho

Itna important call tha

Due to your child behavior

This all thing happened...

Abhi hum kissi five star hotel mein hote

Toh ye situation aati hi nhi

Par nhi Miss handa ko toh dabbe pe khana hai

.

Bs maan

Break Up

.

What you say geet

.

Jo aapne suna

Am going

Jaldi se baitho

Aapko gahr drop kr deti hu

.

Mein ajnabiyo ke sath nhi jaata

Bye

.

Byeee

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Maan : geet pack your bag

One meeting hai

Hume aaj hi raat ko niklana honga

Geet : ok

Hum wapas kb aayenge

Maan : aaj jaayenge

Kal wapas

Geet : what

Hum kaha jaa rhe hai

Maan : Mumbai

Geet : maan mein Mumbai kbhi nhi gyi

Aap mujhe Mumbai dikhayonge na

Maan : geet we are going for meeting not for outing

So concentrate on meeting

Geet : maan meeting ke baad

Maan : I think later about this

Now you go and check all details of this file

Then make hard copy and soft copy too

Geet : hmm

Dd khi ka

Maan : mujhe baad mein kosna

I want 100 % geet

No mistake this time

Geet : ji

.

Maan

Kal raat ke liye sorry

Maan : sorry

Tum kh rhi ho

Geet : maan

Aapka important call tha

Aur fir ye sb ho gya

Baarish mere hath mein nhi thi

Par sayad jagah ki choice better ho sakti thi

Maan : geet go back to your work

I have meeting

Geet : maan

Maan: goo

Geet : hmm

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Both left to Mumbai and attend meeting and after sign the deal, maaneet is sited alone...

Geet : maan abhi toh bs 3 bje hai

Maan : toh

Geet : maan chalo na mumbai nagri gumte hai

Maan : tum jaayo

I have work

Geet : maan ab kya kaam rh gya

Maan : geet bahar car hai

Tum jaha chaho jaa sakti ho

Geet : aur aap

Maan : I manage

Bs 8 bje tak hume airport puchna hai

Toh tum hotel wapas 6 bje tk aa jaana

Tum aa jaana

Geet : aap pakka nhi chalonge

Maan : no

Geet : ok

********

Firstly she goes for shopping, try to entertain own self...but feeling some strange fear in heart...something going happen soon...but what...

.

Geet tu bhi na

Bhut soch rhi hai

.

Pata nhi kyun mujhe ase lag raha hai maan

Mujhse naraaz hai

Ya fir unke dimag mein kuch ch raha hai

.

Geet tu jyada mt soch

Sbse phle maan ke liye kuch le lete hai

Wo khush ho jaayenge

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Geet calls maan...

Geet : maan

Aap kaha hai

Mein hotel puch gyi hu

Maan : geet ek problem ho gyi hai

.

Geet : maan

Kya huya

.

Maan

Bolo na

Maan : geet

Tumhari awaaz nhi aa rhi hai

.

Geet : maan aap kaha ho

Maan : geet

Gurudware

.

Geet : ye kaha hai maan

Maan : hotel ke pass hi hai

.

.

Cuttt

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She tries his call again but going switch off...now environment also changing...thundering clouds making her restlessness...

She takes purse and left to search him...

Driver : madam

Shi gurudwara hai sbse najdeek

Geet : thik hai bhaiya

Mein abhi aati hu

Driver : ji

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She runs mechanically , her eyes only want to see him, why her heart not in peace... She collided with fakir...

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Geet : maaf krna mujhe

Fakir : jiske liye tu bechan hai

Wo tujhe jaroor milenga

Par aaj nhi

Geet : ji

Ye aap kya kh rhe hai

Wo andher hai

Fakir : honga wo andher

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Par har ek mohabbat mein

Kuch na kuch khatnaiya aati hai

Tum dono paar kr gye

Toh humesha ke liye mil jaayonge

Ya fir

Geet : ya fir

Fakir : wo tujhe waqt batayenga

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Today wind also against her...or says saying some message to her...want to stop her for facing the break up...???

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One thread come and falls on her feet... She takes thread and her feet automatically go forward to owner of this thread...

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Geet : suniye

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He turns and shocked to see her here and she happy to see him, her eyes feel with tears...

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Aunty : beta

Tum yaha nhi aa sakti


She held geet hand and dragging her side...thread going to lose from her hand and maan try to read her eyes...

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Maan (think) no maan

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You take one decision and it's totally right

He pulls the thread and turns ...geet felt hurt sees his back and blank eyes for her...

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She is waiting patiently outside...

Geet : maan

,

Kitna time laga diya aapne

.

Mein aapka hi wait kr rhi thi

.

Pta hai

Aapne kitna dra diya tha mujhe

.

Mein na jaane kya - kya soch rhi thi

Aap thik ho na

Maan : hmm

Geet : fir aap kuch bol kyun nhi rhe

.

Maan mujhe bataya kyun nhi

Aap yaha aa rhe ho

.

Hum sath aate na

Maan : geet I want to tell something

Geet : kaho

Na

Maan : break up

Geet : what break up

Maan : geet its simple

Hum dono bhut alag hai

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We are not compatible with each other...

Acha hai hum alag ho jaaye

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Geet : maan ye aap ky a kh rhe hai

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Maan : geet yhi shi hai humare liye

Geet : no maan

Never

.

Maan I know you are angry na

Wo dabbe wali baat ke liye

But that's not mean na

Aap mujhe khud se durr krde

.

Dekho maan mein aapke liye kya laayi thi

Ye tie

Cufflinks

.

Maan : geet I don't need this

Geet : maan

You can't say like this

Maan : geet behave yourself

Don't behave like kids

Geet : why you always feel

Am kid

Maan : because you are

Tumhari harkaate waise hi hai

.

Now wipe your tears

Humari flight ka waqt ho raha hai

Geet : maan

Maan (think) no maan

Don't see in her eyes

Ye decision bilkul thik hai

You can adjust with her child behavior

And she also too

.

Tu has bol kya liya iske sath

Ye pyaar thode hai

Relation mein aur bhi bhut se cheeze hoti hai

He left without saying any word...

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OS by Indu (-indu-)






Deewani si ek ladki...




Geet sat in looking for hope...kya koi ummeed bhi hai... kya hai uske naseeb mein... kyun baar baar usse woh chodna padta hai jo uski chhaah hai... pehle padhayi... kuch logo ki wajah se usse apni collage chodni padi... phir uske papa usse chodke chalegaye... aur ab...WOH bhi... kyun babaji... main jaanti hoon mujhe koi haq nahi hain unse pyar karne ka... par kya dil par kisi ka bas chalta hai...




Usse pata hi nahi chala ki kab iske dil mein woh bas gaya... kab apni jagah banali... kab uski rooh mein bas gaya... par... kya iss pyar ki koi manzil hain... kya usse woh pyar milega...






Preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi

Ho gayi main matwaali

Bal bal jaaun apane piya ko

He main jaaun vaari vaari

Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki

Yeh toh jaane duniya saari

Bebas aur laachar phiru main

Haari main dil haari - 2



She remembered seeing him first time... two years back... when she joined KC... but he didn't even spared a glance at her... nor she had feelings for him then.. it was a casual boss and employee meeting... they never interacted for an year ... but she had seen him occasionally in meetings...



But she had heard of him from her colleagues... thier crazyness for his looks...calling him Dhak Dhak... his everything... but she never saw him in another light... he was her boss.. and she IS a mere employee... she very well knew he didn't even knew her name also... but she heard tales of him...about his proposals and him rejecting them also... he didn't gave any hint what he was thinking..what is there in his heart... but everyday... some or the other girls heart would break... by his rejection...




She remembered how two of his clients tried to seduce him and how he dismissed them rejecting their deals also... He blasted them in front of his whole staff... he wouldn't do business with people who don't have morals... That is the first time she saw him in a different light... she slowly started observing things about him... but chori chori...





Geet smiled remembering the instances she used to observe him... and the first time he gave a chance to explain her point... may be he noticed her then...





New project meeting was going on and she found out something wrong... but she was too scared to even open her mouth in front of the heads of each department... she tried as the mistake may incur loss to the company... she tried to tell adi... but she was caught and Sr. Mr. Khurana told her to talk... and give her idea... but she couldn't open her mouth in front of so many people... they waited for few minutes..but she couldn't come out and put down her points... as usual some people who wait for an opportunity started their taunting... she was in verge of tears... she was trying hard to open her mouth and tell her point but couldn't coz of her fears... one of the HOD started to blast her... but was stooped by HIS voice... He got up from his seat... came to her... offered her a glass of water... asked her to cool down... she had that water but still there was that hesitation...




he turned to Adi... Adi said.. Geet... HE turned to her and said...MS. Geet... you are finding it difficult to express ...


SHE for the first time saw in to his eyes... His orbs took her into a different world...


she some how nodded...



Adi slowly said... Sir... she is...



HE stopped Adi by showing his hand...




HE again said... I have a solution for this... will you do that...



Geet nodded... HE said... good... do one thing... take this paper and write down your point...



Geet agreed promptly and did as he told and gave the paper to him along with the file in which she found the mistake...





After that all appreciated her... but she was too lost in his eyes even to know anything... their appreciation didn't matter to her... she was completely under his spell... his eyes casted a spell on her...




Tere naam se jee loon -

Tere naam se marr jaaun -

Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani- 2

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani - 2




She opened her bag and pulled out a dried rose... she caresses it with extreme softness... IT was given by him to her... after the meeting... a white rose... it showed his appreciation and gratitude for what she had done...

Slowly he started to be a part of her life.. he would wish her good morning first... its was her duty to wish her boss... but he would wish her... as he says there are no rules in friendship.. it doesn't matter who wished first... sometimes he would invite her for aa coffee with him...in his cabin... after the office hrs... and if they got late.. he would made sure that she reaches he safely...


And then one day at such coffee time.. she told him about her ... what happened to her at collage...


Her father wanted her to be a doctor... and to fulfill his wish ... she studied harder and got admission in one of the best collages in the city... she got full scholarship too for that... but she couldn't adjust there... she tried hard... but she couldn't fight every day... one day they would lock her up in empty rooms... store rooms... one day in a lab.. or even in toilets... it was becoming too much for her to bear... and the final nail was when they had locked her up in a mortuary... she couldn't bear and ran back to save her life... she still feels sorry for not fulfilling her dad's dream... but she couldn't study in such an atmosphere... where there is no respect... no mercy on juniors... may be some have survived... but a girl like her couldn't... she had to leave the collage... and change her stream...and her dad supported her.. he couldn't see her miserable state and hear her cry every day...



Maan felt miserable hearing her pain... he knew how the collage was.. as his sister Annie is there too... but she is not in hostel... so she is saved from those tortures... and even the last name.. Khurana helped her too...



Maan consoled her saying beautiful things... he would make her laugh with jokes and saying about his pranks in childhood... he always made her feel great... he wouldn't treat her any less.. he would treat her equal to him.. even though she is much much less in status...





From that day she started following him... not literally but her eyes followed him everywhere... she stared to dress in his fav colours... she saw her dress... again his fav color... white... she smiled at her craziness... she is behaving like a teenage girl... or else who would do these things now a days... and she didn't know when he made place in her prayers too...




She prayed for him too along with her family members... she prayed for his well being...






She kept the rose back and sat watching the people coming and offering prayers... and she saw HIM... intently looking at her... she smiled with tears... smiled coz... she saw him again... and tears coz she knew he is not real... he is iust her imagination...










Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2

Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2

Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole






She can see her(self) with him... both praying together and they both with the sacred dhaga... they were about to tie the dhaga... but... some one came and held her hand and took far away from him...










Tears started to flow from her eyes... Mujhe pata hai babaji... mujhe aisi ummed bhi nahi rakhni chahiye... woh kaha aur main kaha...












She then remembered an incident... Most of the staff has left that day.. as Sr. Khurana gave few hrs off as they cracked a very profitable and big deal... And the office atmosphere was light... Sr. Khurana.. Maan sir... Adi... Geet and few more staff were present.. Geet was gatherting papers and was listening to their talks... Sr. Khurana said something to Adi about finding a perfect match to Maan ...





Maan sir promptly denied and said... that he found someone... and is waiting for her yes...




Yahi ishq di marzi hain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

Yahi ishq di marzi hain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

Tere bin jeena kaisa

Haan Khudgarzi hi

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani - 4




She don't know what she felt... she cannot even measure the pain she endured that time... that was a reality check for her... till then she was in a imagination... a virtual world... and his words brought her to reality... a harsh reality...







From then she tried to avoid him but is it even possible... he would call her for every work... even for a small coffee he would call her... she tried to deny him... but he wouldn't listen ... his small touch would create ripples in her body... but she couldn't express... she would always find a way to escape from him... and she would be in his cabin the next minute... She , every minute fought with herself, she fought with the love for HIM...



Oh ho oh hoohhh...

He main rang rangeeli deewani - 2

Ke main albeli main mastani

Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun

He main dila zaram se begaani

Ke main deewani main deewani




She knew she has crossed all the barriers... HE is her krishna and she is his radha... Radha and Krishna never became one... but They both were present in each others hearts... And He will be in her heart forever...






Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun

Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main




She is finding light in his eyes... his mere glance has become her life... his smile made her day... his small worry brought panic in her... his sad face caused her distress...




Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani...




Her mobile buzzed .. she looked at it... ... Her mother messaged her.. to return home immediately... She then remembered her mothers words... There is no other way... she has to accept her parents wish... Her mother chose some Dev for her... she has to obey her parents... how can she not ... when her father gave the word... She doesn't know she is doing right or wrong...




She stood up to leave the holy shrine... no matter what HE will always be there in her heart... she again drifted into her imaginative world... where he is close to her... walking with her ... guiding her like always... where nothing else matters...



But she least knew.. he is actually present there watching her...



and that day ... the gloomiest day as she thought transformed into the happiest day in her life... when she reached home... she is shocked to see her boss Sr Mr. Khurana and his wife... in their home... Preet ran to her as soon as she saw Geet... She was completely in a dream... when her mother told her about the rishta ... Mr. Khurana had come to ask for Geet for his elder son.. MAAN...


Another shock came her way.. when she saw Maan sir... in the same dress she imagined... He winked at her and she looked down ... and few minutes later she started blushing as she heard the elder talking about their marriage ...


When Maan came to know about Rahul through Adi... she didn't waste time... he told his dad about his love for Geet... Mr. Khurana agreed as he knew Geet and had seen her for two years... And in no time... Maan and Geet were married...


Maan said... I wonder what would have happened if you had not changed your stream and joined office... Geet...


Geet snuggled into him more and said... it wouldn't have mattered Maan... some or the other way I would have reached you... babaji ne Geet ko Maan ke liye hi banaya hain... toh kaise nahi milte... We are destined Maan... kuch bhi ho.. chahe duniya ke ksis kone mein bhi ho.. hum milke hi rehte...
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OS by Uma (umamaaneet)









~THOLI KALAYIKA(FIRST MEET)~



The outlines of the houses are becoming clearer as the spring's first orange hued rays of sunrise kissed the still dust laden road...the city was subdued quiet ..only road sweepers & some early morning joggers hurried through the otherwise deserted streets...that's when Maan singh khurana started with his daily jog routine...he was an early riser...

It is fun to jog..he thought as he felt the early morning warm rays kiss his face...he is always enthusiastic about trying new things..daily he jog in his VIP's block street..today he want to jog in lower level block..that is B-block...he believes in equality...all are equal under the sun that his thought...as he changed his route towards b-block street unaware that his life is going to take a new turn...

As he continued to jog he felt thirsty and settled down on one of the bench..suddenly a hand came in front of his vision with a Mickey mouse water bottle but what caught his attention was the qwner of that hand...that belongs to a girl in her early twenties...with a heart shaped face,hazel eyes,curly hair...cute red nose,petal like lips..so kissable...swan like neck...curvy figure...his breath caught ..he couldn't describe her beauty in mere words...beautiful would be an understatement to describe her...

His chain of thoughts came to an end by the beauty herself...

Theesuko(take it)....she shook her mickey bottle infront of him...

Huh.??.maan frowned in a confusing manner...

Are baba...I mean take it...

Oh..thanks...maan mumbled and took the bottle in his hand..after quenching his thirst maan returned the bottle and stood immediately as he saw the girl resumed with her jog...he matched her pace...

Maan(nervously)-hi...

Girl-hi


Maan (forwarding his hand))- maan..

Girl after thinking slowly rose her hand and shook with him..

Geet... geet handa...

No getting how to converse more maan kept silent hoping she may start...and she did not disappoint him...

Geet- "which block do you belong?"

Without giving maan a chance she continued...

Geet-I know B or C ...u cannot be from that nasty VIP's block ...how can that proud idiots can come to their lower level block

Maan was perplexed at her prediction...but choose to not reveal his identity..fearing she might get angry at him...he himself doesn't know why he want to get in her good books...

Maan-yes yes I belong to B-block only...he shuttered...

Geet(all smiles)-good ...but I did not see you here anywhere?

Maan was caught off guard...

Maan(covering)-this is my first time jog...

Geet-oh...what do you do...where r you from...I work at NGO and ..my native is Hyderabad...mother tongue is telugu...due to work we shifted to mumbai

Maan-oh nice...I work in small company as manager...my native is Mumbai only...

Maan felt guilty for lying to her...but he does not have any other option...

Geet- nice...

Maan(holding his breath)-between why you hate VIP block that much?

Geet-(eyes red)-not hate...I loathe them...

Maan(scared)- y?

Geet(angry)-what why...they are all blood sucking leeches...they are worst than devils...they are responsible for this bad situation of poor people...thankless fools...they make them work hard and enjoy luxuries and pleasures of being rich...but poor people are struck there only where they are struggling for their daily bread...

Geet was breathing heavily at the end...whilst maan stood shocked at her outburst...

He knew she was right but not all rich people are like that...

Maan(whispering)-but not all r same

Geet(gritting her teeth)-no all are like that only

Maan- ok ok cool...all r like that...

He gulped thinking what will be her reaction after knowing about his identity...

They continued to jog ..they came across some street children who were sweeping the road...geet stopped them and gave them chocolates which she bought with her... And she took their brooms...gave one to maan while she took other...

Maan(horrified)-whatt!!!!!!!!! 😲

Geet- are take na...see small children are working when their age is to study and play...i know we are not capable of solving all their problems but we can help them right...

Geet started her work unaware of what effect her words caused to the person stood beside her...

Till that moment maan was unable to name the feeling he felt for her but at that very second he knew that MAAN SINGH KHURANA is head over heels in love with GEET HANDA...



preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi
ho gayi main matwaari
bal bal jaaun apane piya ko
he main jaaun vaari vaari
mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki
yeh toh jaane duniya saari
bebas aur laachar phiru main


MSK the great business magnet swept the road along with his love ...that is the power of love...

After their work both bid bye to each other...geet felt happy to find a friend in maan ...whilst maan 😳...?

Next morning...

Maan again came to b-block...joined geet and both started their jog ..by the time they came to children .all children were happily playing while other workers were cleaning roads...geet was surprised ...on enquiring them...they said that some big company took their responsibility ...and from tomorrow they can go to school as the company also promised to afford their expenses...geet's happiness knew no bounds...she asked the company's name but children said they doesn't know...

Geet's face lit up...she too started to jump along with the children...the sight was a treat to maan...it made his day...what more he would want that his love's smile...he can do anything and everything for that...it gives him immense satisfaction that his millions and trillions deals doesn't give...from that day he solved every problem which geet described without him being in the picture...😳

Days passed their friendship bloomed to next level...and geet's heart too started to beat in the budding love for her maan...yes her maan...

haari main dil haari - 2

Though she is a tough girl but she too want him to confess first...she is very sensitive in this matters...


*************************************

One fine day...

Maan was in very bad mood due to his brother dev...he loved naintara but she is a gold digger...maan was aware about her and tried to warn dev but dev did not listen to him...he was blinded by naintara's love talks...

Geet who saw him lost in thoughts shook him...

What's wrong...? Why are you dull?...they both can understand each other by their face itself...

Maan was in fix ..he couldn't reveal dev as his brother...so he lied ...

Maan-its about my friend dev...he is rich..he loves one girl but she is very bad...she is after his money ..i tried to warn him but he is not listening to me....

Geet(eyes all bright with a naughty glint)-oh that's it...then you should deal her in her way only...

Maan(raising his brow)- what r you trying to imply...

Geet(hitting his head) -are verri vengalappaya(you mad fool...)

Maan was now used to her scolding him and calling him names in telugu...😆

Geet-do one thing stealthily take ur friend's mobile and msg her that...his parents are not agreeing for their marriage...so he left all his wealth as he don't want anything other than her...

Maan's tube light lit while geet winked at him...😉


his naughty princess...maan smiled shaking his head


Maan did as told and the result was successful ..dev asked for forgiveness from him...

Everything was going fine...but maan's conscience was feeling guilty for lying her...he decided to tell her truth and propose her he next morning where their first meeting happened...in their jog place...unaware of what fate has in store for him...

That evening when he was in his office he made calls for the next days proposal arrangements...and came out of his cabin as he has a meeting in conference hall...

Geet came to KC to ask donation for her NGO..while asking to the receptionist he saw maan's photo there...she was surprised...she thought that her maan is very popular in his company...she want to confirm

Geet(pointing towards photo smiling.. )- who is he?

Receptionist(smiling)- he is our boss...Maan singh khurana..KC's MD...

Geet's smile vanished ...she staggered back as is been pushed...she felt cold and numb...her legs felt week to hold her upright ...she felt difficult to breath...

Geeet...a terrified gasp left from maan who saw her there...his fearful eyes met her cold hurt eyes...and he felt lighting stuck on him seeing the pain there...her almonds were screaming only one word...betrayal...


...his eyes glistened seeing her numb...his gulped the chocking lump which formed in his throat...

Geet..pls listen...it is not like that...he took one step towards her hurriedly...but she ran from there...leaving him in the abyss of pain and guilt...


********************************


After one week...


It has been a bloody week since he has seen her...after that encounter , he ran after her but couldn't catch her...he thought to give her some time but she did not come to their morning jog...he want to explain her that he did not mean to hurt her...he just couldn't tell her truth as he feared losing her...he felt life less without her...if he didn't see her he will surely die...his eyes became sunken telling the tale of his sleepless nights...he became weak as he missed his meals...how can he when his every cell and breath was howling for her in pain...

He searched her every street but it was like she vanished from thin air...what he was unaware was that not only he ..she was also missing him...geet s mind and heart was in war...she couldn't forget him...she too couldn't breathe without him...he was her first and last love thus she followed him every morning hiding from behind...

She came to know about him ...that he is the reason of that street children welfare...only for her he ,the MSK swept clean the roads...he is the reason her NGO got a large amount of donation...he has a great heart ...even before her KC used to help many poor people...by donations...but ,but she was feeling guilty for making him suffer...she felt she doesn't deserve the gem like him...

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tere naam se jee loon - 2
tere naam se marr jaaun - 2
teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani- 2
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani - 2

ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2
haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye
ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2
khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole
yahi ishq di marzi hain
yahi rab di marzi hain
yahi ishq di marzi hain
yahi rab di marzi hain
tere bin jeena kaisa
haan khudgarzi hai
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ji ha ji ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani - 4



geet wiped her tears and turned around to leave that place but stopped short seeing the maan there...her breath caught in her lungs...she tried to escape but maan cornered her...

Maan's orbs watered seeing his geet after whole one week...he was memorizing her every feature...but he came out of his trance hearing her...

geet(facking anger so that he will leave her)-leave me...what more lies you want to feed me...?

Maan(chokingly)-geet..geet shona..pls listen to me...i did not mean to hurt or cheat you...I did not mean to play with you...how can I when you mean the whole world to me...you are my life jaan...i agree I lied you but that was due to the fear of losing you...that fear scares the hell out of me...I just...maan gulped the lump...i just couldn't live without you...that day I thought to tell you the whole truth and propose you..but even before that you came to know about that...i am sorry ...really sorry...forgive me...if me being rich is the problem then I will leave everything...beat me ,scold me,call me names...but never leave me...i will d...


Geet stopped him by placing her hand on his mouth...


Geet(crying bitterly)- malli ala anna vante champestanu...na verri vengalapayya...(if you again say that ..i will kill you myself...my mad man..)...


Maan laughed hearing her...



Maan(eyes having mischievous glint )- alage na verri vengalamma...(ok my mad woman)...



Geet's eyes widened seeing him talking in telugu...



Geet-how do you?...



Maan(winking)-I learned telugu...he kissed her red cheek ...for you...



Geet (feeling overwhelmed) - I love you maan...



Maan gasped feeling the gush of happiness spread through his body...the word for which he craved .he listened today...it was like music to his ears...



Maan(with all his heart promising his life)- I love you too geet...I love you more than my life...i promise will never lie to you again...



Both hugged each other savoring the feel



Maan(naughtily with tongue in cheek)- nenu neeku muddu pettocha?(can I kiss u?)...



Geet (angrily blushing )- you...idi ra nuvvu telugulo nerchukundi...(you stupid this is what you learn in telugu)...


She ran after him beating...whilst maan dodged her...geet not able to catch him stopped there huffing puffing...


Maan-sorry...



Geet turned her face...but suddenly gasped as maan pulled her in a toe curling, life shattering, body jingling and soul shattering kiss...this is their deewani


he main rang rangeeli deewani - 2
ke main albeli main mastani
gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun
he main deen dhram se begaani
ke main deewani main deewani
tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun - 2
tere jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani...


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