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OS by Rashmi (Rashmi...)







Deewaangi Tere Pyaar ki

Phone rang and Geet picked up the call-Hello

And she heard her father on the other side-Geet.. How are you?

It was Geet's father-Mohinder

Geet-I m fine papa..

Mohinder-Geet I want you to come India as soon as possible..

Geet was surprised-But why papa? You are coming back in few days ..why you want me to come there?..

Mohinder-Geet not only you but bring Maanu with you too..

Geet - papa you are sounding so excited.. What happened?

Mohinder-Geet Here I met my childhood friend.. we are from the same village and we were in school together.. we met in a business meeting and he is asking me to call you..He wants to see you.. he wants both our families to meet together

Geet-But papa,, why me?.. I don't know him..What will I do there... I don't want to come India..

Mihnder-But Geet

Geet-papa..Please..Don't force me

Mohinder-Geet I know beta why you don't want to come.. I will always held myself guilty for that...but I want two of you here ..Please aa jaao Geet.. I know I have lost every right to order you but I can request my daughter.. Please Geet.. I request you.

Geet-Papa what is the emergency to come to India.. I will meet him some other time..I m not coming..

Mohinder-Ok Geet .. As you wish..I know I don't exist for you in this world.. It's Ok.. I m the culprit so I have to bear the punishment

Geet closed her eyes... She did not want to do what he was asking but .. she could not ignore the fact that he was her father..

Geet-Stop this Papa.. Al right..I m coming.. But we will be back soon..

Mohinder-Thank U beta..

And Three days later Geet was in India.. Mohinder welcomed her-Geet I m really very happy to see you here..and Geet nodded.

They reached the Hotel where Mohinder was staying..

Mohinder-Geet we will stay here for today.. and tomorrow we will shift to my friend's house..He was forcing me to stay with him but I asked him to wait for you.. I did not want to accept his invitation without your consent

Geet-Papa.. I would like to stay here only.. I m not comfortable in staying at unknown place..

Mohinder-Geet But he is my childhood friend..

Geet -Papa..He is your friend and I don't know him..I m here as you requested me to come.. but I m not going to stay anywhere.. I can go to his house to meet him and his family ..That's all. If you are agree then ok ,Otherwise I m going back..

Mohinder was looking at Geet... what her daughter had turned in to and he knew that he was the only reason for her condition ..

Mohinder informed his friend that they would come to meet but they would not be able to stay with them as his daughter was not comfortable to stay with anyone.. and he requested his friend not to force her ..He knew that his this talk about his daughter were going to create an egoistic image of her in his friend's mind but he was helpless..

Next day in the morning..

Geet informed her father that she was going out and will be back in few hrs..Mohinder wanted to ask where she was going but she left without giving him a glance..He looked at sleeping maanu.. and caressed her cheeks softly..

Mohindet-I m really sorry Geet..

Geet entered the sacred premises of Nizamuddin Dargah,, She felt a calmness in her heart..She entered in to the dargah putting her dupatta on her head.. She went to the place where people were tying the sacred threads.. She went there and instead of tying the thread she started to open a thread..Her eyes were wet now.. She after opening the thread went toward the main dargah where she could see many people sitting there as sufi songs were being performed by some sufi saints...

She was looking around her and her eyes fell on him..

She was stunned to see him there.. She took few steps back as she did not want him to see her.. But from there she could see him.. She was seeing him after 7 years.. he hadn't changed much but his boyish looks were changed in to a manish looks and he was having a stubble which was giving him the perfect look..Geet was looking at her with mesmerized eyes.. He was the owner of a great personality..

Geet was staring at him as she wanted to fill her eyes along with her heart with his image..she did not know if she would be able to see him again or not

Just then her concentration was disturbed by a baba who was roaming there-Bachhha.. lagta hai kisi ki talaash me ho?

Geet looked at him and said-Nahin baba talaash to use karte hain na jo juda ho jaate hain... jo hamesha hamaare paas hain unko kya talaash karna..

Baba-Phir kya baat hai bachchha .. Kyun itni khoyi hui ho khayaalon me?

Geet-Kuchh nahin Baba.. main yahaan apni beti aur apne pati ki salaamati ki dua Maangne aayi hoon.. aap dua kijiye ki wo hamesha khush rahen..

Baba-Baba ki dargah se koi khali haath nahin jata bachha.. Khuda tumhaari muraad zaroor puri karega.. saying this Baba moved Plumes (the bundle of sticks of peacock feathers)over her head and touched it with her head as baba's blessings

Geet before going wanted to look him for one more time but he was not there..

he had gone.. Geet smiled sadly.. Her eyes were filled with tears and she too left from there..

In the evening

Mohinder and Geet were at Mohinder's friend's house..They were impressed with the size of the house ..It was no less than a palace..

They were welcomed with open heart there.. Mohinder Introduced Geet to them-Raj.. bhabhi..Meet my daughter Geet and Geet touched their feet.. and the image which Raj and his wife had created with his friend's words last day immediately disappear and they knew that she was not any rude or egoistic girl..

They asked Geet and Mohinder to sit comfortably and asked one servant to call the other members of the house..

The servant left and few minutes later there came a lady who was pregnant ..

Raj introduced her-Mohinder this is my daughter in law.Meera.. Meera came and touched Moinder's feet and said a Hi to Geet with a sweet smile..and Geet too smiled at her and wished her

She sat there with Geet and chatted with her formally.. at beginning they talked formally but soon they were comfortable with each other..Geet and Mohinder were at dinner invitation there.. Suddenly there was little hussle bussle..

Raj-I think My son is here.. and he looked in to the direction.. Geet's back was in that direction..

A man came there and stood near them..

Raj-Mohinder-Meet my son Maan.. and the name Maan made Geet shaken from inside..

Raj-And Maan this is my childhood friend Mohinder and his daughter Geet and Geet's name forced Maan to look at her..

Geet stood and just said a hello to him


Maan too said a littler hello to her

Raj-Maan. You know Mohinder is my childhood friend.. He is really very lucky .. jis kaam ko bhi haath lagaya he touched height in that..

Maan smiled and looked at Mohinder

And then Raj said -Mohinder.. Maan is just like you.. he too is very lucky in this matter.. what ever you can see around is the result of Maan's hard work.. We were just a middle class family few years ago but Maan's hard work had made him stood amongst the richest business men of India..

Mohinder-That's great.. I m so happy to meet you Maan.. after all there is someone else too who learns the value of the hard work..

Meera passed a glass of water to Maan he smiled at her-Thanks..and in return she too gave him a smile

Maan-How are you Meera?

Meera gave a sweet smile to Maan and said-I m fine.. Maan asked a servant to bring coffee..

Meera-I will bring the coffee and she stood up again but Maan made her sit again-No meera.. You don't stress yourself..Servants are there what they will do.. Let them do.. and you just relax..

Geet noticed the way Maan was caring for Meera and she too smiled seeing them smiling each other.. Every wife expects that kind of concern from her husband

but her smile was little sad..

Raj asked servant to get coffee for all. Maan went to change and after some time returned and joined them... and sometime later they were having Coffee.. Maan's phone rang ..and Maan got up from his place and in this process he was hit by the table and Geet who was sitting on the other side of the table was disturbed by the movement of table and the coffee spilled on her dress.. She stood and rubbed the coffee from her dress..

Meera-Geet this stain will be removed only by water.. Come I show you the washroom..

Maan-Meera tum rahne do.. you sit comfortably here .. I will show her the washroom.. and Meera nodded

Geet looked at him and lowered her eyes..

Maan-This way miss Geet..

And Geet followed him..

On the way-So.. How is life going on Miss Geet?

Geet looked at her-Perfectly fine mr. Khurana..

Maan-Tell me Miss Geet.. what do you think? Do you find me quite rich or not ? I mean do I stand parallel to your husband in richness or not? He had seen that Geet was having a small line of sindoor in her partition.

Geet looked at her and smiled-How can I say if you parallel to him or not. I mean I can't count the money obtained by both of you but I m really happy to see you so much successful in your life..I wish you to touch many more heights in your professional and personal life.. You seem quite happy in your personal life too..

Maan-Such talks do not suit the person who ran away after deceiving..

Geet's eyes became moist but she controlled- I did what I thought was right at that time . I m not having any regrets now.. Everyone wants to live happily in life and for that money is very important..we can't sit only with a hope to have money in future.. It's the need of the present..so I preferred to chose present instead of future

Maan gave her a mocking smile-Yesss I know.. But you know Money can come at any stage of life but love.. that's very rare to get at any stage of life.. But who cares now.. I thank God every day that he saved me from a back stabber..

Geet smiled .. she wanted to say something but her phone rang.. She received the call and her eyes got wider hearing that..What ????and she ran back to her father-Papa.. please jaldi chaliya.. Maanu...

Mohinder-What happened to Maanu..and Maan was shocked to hear that name.. He was looking at both of them .. But how was it possible?.. No... may be he heard some wrong name..

Geet-Papa she was jumping on the bed and she fell down and was hit by the edge of the bed.. she is badly bleeding..Papa please jaldi chaliye na..

Raj- Mohinder.. who is Maanu?

Mohinder-Geet's daughter .. just tell me the name of good hospital near our hotel so that I can ask hotel management to take her there.. and Raj suggested the name and Mohinder informed the governess of Maanu and Hotel authorities to take her to that hospital..as they were far away from the hotel so it will be safe to meet at hospital directly..

And Raj and Maan too accompanied them.. Geet was shedding tears..

Mohinder-Geet..calm down beta.. Kuchh nahin hoga Maanu ko..don't worry..

Geet-papa please jaldi kijiye..

Maan was driving the car and Raj was on passenger seat where as Mohinder and Geet were on the back seats..

Maan looked at Geet through mirror..and he was feeling very bad for her.. after all her daughter was in danger

Raaj too informed the hospital authorities to admit the girl as soon as she arrives there... they asked for name and Raj asked Mohinder the name of the girl

Mohinder-Maanvika..

Raj informed the authorities and cut the call..

Raj-But why did you left her there?

Mohinder-She was watching her fav. movie that time and she refused to come as she might get bore there..

Raj-Ohh.. Geet don't worry beta.. Nothing will happen with your daughter

They reached hospital.. Geet ran in side of the hospital and she asked about Manu and she was informed that she was in OT

Geet-What?OT? And she ran towards the OT followed by others.. There Dr. were attending her and they told that they did not need to worry.. She just needed the cut on her head to be stitched and she will be kept under observation for 24 hrs.. as she had lost blood.. and she may needed Blood later..

A nurse came there and asked about the details of Patient..

She asked the age of the girl ..Mohinder was going to tell but Geet quickly said-5 years and Manhin was shocked hearing Geet .. he looked at Geet and Geet avoided his eyes..

Maan and Raj were with them and they were taking care of everything..

After half N hour she was shifted to the room and was going to stay there for 24 Hrs.. Manu was still under the effects of the medicines so was sleeping.. Geet was sitting near her holding her Hand..

Maan brought coffee as they had skipped their dinner so it was needed at that moment..

Geet-I don't want any thing.

Maan-Take it Geet.. Nothing will happen to your daughter. She will be fine.. coffee pee lo thodi.. you will feel good..

And Geet could not say no again and she took the cup of coffee and while taking the cup their hands touched and their eyes met for a moment but Geet lowered her eyes as she did not want to meet them with his eyes..

They finished coffee and Manhi asked Raj and Maan to go as Manu was fine and she was sleeping .. Dr. had informed that she was going to sleep full night.. Maan and Raaj left from there telling them to return next day..

Next morning

Geet was sleeping by keeping her head on Maanu's bed,, Maanu opened her eyes and called her-Mom..

Geet heard her voice and woke up..

Geet-Maanu .. You are awake? She kissed her daughter numerous timed as if she got her lost life back.. How are you feeling sweety?

Maanu-Mom.. It's paining here and she put her hand on her head ..

Geet kissed with a feather touch there-It will be fine baby..you are my brave girl na.. and Maanu nodded.. Mohinder too was looking at both of them.He smiled seeing mother and daughter. he came near Maanu-Good morning Maanu..

Maanu-Good morning Naanu..

Geet-you need something to eat?

And Maanu nodded... Raj entered there with BF for mohinder and Geet and some light BF for Maanu..

Raj-Lo kisi ne yaad kiya kya breakfast ko?

Maanu looked at him and geet told her that he was her Naanu's childhood friend..

And Maanu smiled looking at him..Raj handed the BF basket to Geet

Geet helped Maanu to eat the break fast..

Raj-Maan is talking to the doctor.. he will me here in some time..

Moninder nodded his head but Get did not react

Geet-Uncle..Can you do me a favor? Actually I need to go to my hotel room to take the clothes for our change. Can I borrow your car?

Raj-come on Geet why are you being so formal.. Take the car.. there is driver and I m calling him.. and He told Geet the no. of Car and Geet left after telling Maanu that she would be back soon.. and Maanu nodded.. She was very understanding girl..

Geet left from there and few minutes later Maan came to see Maanu.. She was awake and was talking to Mohinder..

Maan looked at her.. He found her very cute and adorable.. Maanu too looked at him and her smile got bigger seeing him.. She was looking at him with surprised Eyes.

Maan came near her and asked-How are you Maanu? He sat near her and Maanu hugged him and said--Dad..

And Not only Maan but every one was shocked seeing Maanu calling Maan dad

Mohinder-No Maanu.. He is not your dad.. Call him uncle.. and he handled the situation-I think she is missing her dad .. that's why she is calling you.. I m sorry Maan..bachchhi hai na..

And Maan who was little surprised by Maanu calling him dad got relaxed hearing Mohinder.. May be he was right.. she was missing her dad..but the word dad shook something inside of him

Maan-NP uncle.. she is just a kid.. and he caressed her cheeks-How are you Maanu.. She was still in his arms..He kissed on her head

Raj too did not take that seriously as she was a child and was missing her father because she was hurt and was in hospital

Maanu was continuously staring at him and was smiling.. Maan's eyes were again and again falling on her and he continuously found her looking at him only. He was amazed to see her smiling...But he was finding that girl very sweet and was feeling attached to her..Maan talked to Mohinder for some time and asked Raj to go as he was having some urgent meetings which he could not be postponed ..

Raj-But Maan.. Car is with Geet. and she will be coming soon..

With Name of Geet some thing moved in his heart.. he was trying to not to show any emotion..But the truth was that he could never hate her in spite of the fact that she cheated him.. she insulted his love for her.. She deserved his hatred but he was never able to hate her..and he could never understand this mystery..he wanted to run from there

Maan-NP Dad.. leave that car for Geet and uncle ..they may need it as they are going to stay here for today... we will go by cab as it's very urgent..

Raj-Ok Maan.. and they left from there.. Maan looked at Maanu who was still looking at her.. He came near her and kissed on her forehead-Bye Maanu.. will see you in the evening..

Maanu-Bye...and she whispered .. Dad.. but Maan heard that and looked at her with smile ..and said-Bye..

They left and Mohinder asked Maanu-Why you were calling him Dad?

Maanu-Because he is my dad..

Mohinder-How can be you so sure?

Maanu-Because I have seen his pics .. Mom has few pics of him with her.. She talks to his pics at night,. Some time she cries too..Once I was awake and she thought that I was sleeping.. That day she talked to his pic and after some time when she slept .. I saw that pic..

Maanu-Are you sure?

Maanu-100%

And now Mohinder understood why Geet lied about her age.. she did not want to give any indication to him.. She left from there 7 years ago and Geet told them that Maanu was 5 years old.. so that he could not doubt.. while as the truth was that she had completed her 6 years sometime back and she had seen a pregnant lady at his house,.. and it was sure that she was his wife as he was taking full care of her..

Maanu-nanu don't you know him?

Mohinder was embarrassed-No Maanu I don't.. as your mother married him against my wish and I never met him.Tell me Maanu ..Does Geet know that you have seen your father's pic?

Maanu-No naanu.. I did not tell her..I know that she will feel sad if she knows that I have seen his pics

Mohinder-Maanu promise me one thing.. just like you hid from your mom that you know about your father .. please don't say him dad again.. They don't live together na..

Maanu-But Why naanu..why they are not together..First I thought that I don't have father so he does not live with us..why they live away from each other?

Mohinder-You just think that it's a game of hide n seek.. May be they too had a fight and are angry with each other.so your mom did not tell you about your father.. let them solve their issues .. Till than keep quite..If your mom does not tell you anything then please don't tell her that you know who your father is..she will feel bad .. AM I right.. me and you won't like to make her cry

Maanu looked at him. She was a very nice girl and understood that her mother had cried so many times seeing her father's pics.. she could see that something was there and she did not want her to cry more .. So she promised Mohinder to not tell anyone and she promised too that she would not call her father as Dad..

That day passed and in the evening Maan and Raj were there to help Geet and Maahi..

Raj asked Geet one more time to stay at KM but she politely refused his proposal saying that she wont feel comfortable there..

Maan could understand the reason .. so he did not say a word...

They reached Hotel and made Maanu settled at bad.. Raj asked Geet to call him if they need them anytime.. and Geet thanked him..

Two days later Maanu was fine but her wound was still soft.. so Geet was taking full care of her.. Raj with his wife and Meera came to see Maanu Maan did not come with them and Mohinder told Maanu-Manu she is Maan uncle's mother and she is Meera aunty..and Maanu wished them with a smile..

Raj asked Mohinder-Mohinder when are you returning?

Mohinder-We are returning back on Friday..

Geet-No papa.. we will go on Saturday,, I have some work here..

Mohinder was surprised-which work you have Geet..

Geet-Nothing papa I want to go to Nizaamuddin Dargah on Friday.. papa it's the matter of just one day..

Raj-Actually Geet you said what I wanted.. Mohinder on Friday we are having double celebrations..Birthday and wedding anniversary both at the same day..and Meera was looking happy with the name of anniversary everyone could guess that it was her wedding anniversary..

Mohinder-It's your wedding anniversary meera?

Meera -Yes uncle and a shyness spread on her face

Raj-And whose birthday is it?

Raj-Maan ka..

Manu got excited-Maan uncle ka?

Raj-Yes and you all have to come..

Mohinder-Off course we will come..

Geet-I m sorry uncle I think I may not able to come.. it's very crowded there at Fridays.. I may get late.. but papa and Maanu will come..I m really sorry uncle..Hope you won't mind..

Though Geet had accepted the destiny but it was not easy for her to see him celebrating his happiness with someone else..After all she Loved him immensely..

Friday

Geet had gone to Dargah instructing Maanu to behave properly at their place..One side Maau was happy that she was going to attend her Dad's birthday celebration other side she was feeling to cry.. She could not call him Dad..

Maanu-Nanu.. we will not see dad again.. ?

And Mohinder lowered his eyes.. his one mistake destroyed his daughter's life and now his Grand daughter too was going through the same..Today he was regretting..He wished if he had heard his daughter once 7 years ago.. but he did not hear a word from him in his ego..

He hugged Maanu-Maanu I m really sorry beta.. you and your mother are going through this because of me.. Now we cannot do anything other than waiting for the right time.. I m really sorry Maanu

Maanu wiped his tears-It's ok Naau.. I understand.. Please don't cry.. when Mom can live without him then I can too..Don't worry.. I will never ask about him after today..

Mohinder-thank u baby,, you are so sweet..Now we should move..

Manu smiled-yess Nanu

AT Km

Raj welcomed them.. He did not asked about Get as she had already told him the reason..

Maaan came and took his blessings... Mohinder was feeling so guilty that he could not even tough him as his hands were shaking ..Maan looked here and there if he was looking for someone..

Mohinder noticed it and said-Geet is not with us..She has gone to Dargah,, as we are going tomorrow..

Maan-Oh..and he remembered that Geet often used to go there.He too started to go there because of her,.. She used to take him there by almost pulling his hand...Maanu was looking at him with love filled eyes.. and that caught Maan's attention..There was a time when Geet too used to look at him with same expressions..

Maan-Maanu what happened?

And Maanu gave a gift to him-it was quite big in size and she asked him to come down to her height.He came on his knees to match her height and she kissed him on his cheeks-Happy birthday uncle..

Maan with a smile said-Thanks Maanu and he too kissed her back with love

Maan-What is this Maanu?

Maanu-Uncle this is my favorite teddy. I never allow anyone other than mom to touch it But I want to give to you..It will keep you reminding of me.I will feel that I m with you. She was little sad while saying that-We are going back tomorrow,, Uncle will you remember me.?

Maan could not see her sad.He hugged her...He felt himself restless knowing that they were going back tomorrow.. But he did not know why he was feeling so.. Geet was someone else's wife and was the mother of his husband's child..So they had to go back..

Maanu-Uncle I will miss you.. Will you come to meet me if you come to London?

Maan looked at her.. her eyes were wet.. He was not getting why she was reacting in that way..He wiped her tears -Off course I will come to meet you..please don't cry beta.. Maanu again hugged him.. and he patted her back with love..Mohinder was looking at both of them.. he was too feeling like crying but was controlling him because if someone saw him then it would be a odd situation for him.

Raj -Maan I think Maanu and you have some relation of last birth See how she is reacting with you..

And Mohinder try to laugh hearing him And reacted as if Raj was joking but he knew that Raj was right they were related to each other

There were not so many people .. all were seemed close to them..Few were Meera's relatives..

Raj called a man and introduced him to Mohinder-Mohinder meet my younger son Dev.. he was out of the city for some days for some work.

Dev wished him..

And all were there so it was time for cake cuttings..

First Maan cut his birthday cake ..

every one wished him and he fed everyone with cake.. he even fed Maanu too and in return Maanu fed him and rubbed little cake on his check too and giggled seeing him in cake..

Maan too smiled seeing her smiling..

And Now it was the time for the anniversary celebrations..And Mohinder's eyes got wider to see the couple . He saw Dev and Meera standing in front of the cake holding each other's hand.. and Maan was standing near them..Dev and Meera cut the cake but Mohinder was not able to see anything..His mind was working fast.Meera was not Maan's wife.. she was Dev's wife

Cake cutting was done and Mohinder Asked Raj-Raj.. Meera is Dev's wife?

Raj-Haan.. Didn't I tell you?

Mohinder shook his head-No..

Raj-Oh I m sorry.. but why are you asking ?

Mohinder-Because I thought that Meera was Maan's wife..If Meera is Maan's wife then what about Maan's wife?

Raj-Maan is not married..

Mohinder-why?

Raj became sad-He was in love with a girl 7 years ago and she left him saying that he was not worth her. She wanted some rich guy for herself.. She was a daughter of some rich man and we were not rich that time.. Mohinder ..and that girl deceive forced Maan to work harder.. As if he wanted to prove that girl wrong

Mohinder was hearing everything..

Mohinder-Did he tell about the girl..

Raj-No.. No one knows about her as he never talked about her..

Mohinder looked in to the direct ion where Maanu was talking to Maan .. He was looking very happy while talking to her.. She had impressed him..after all she too was the daughter of Maan..

Mohinder-It's time Mohinder.. you can amend your mistakes.. you cannot bring the old time back but their future can be full of pleasures

His feet started to move in that direction..He reached near Maan.. he was busy with Maanu

Mohinder -Maan..

And Maan looked at him.. Mohinder joined his both hands and sat on the knees in front of Maan.

Maan was stunned seeing him like that he got up at his place and asked-Uncle please.. what are you doing?

Mohinder-Maan please forgive me..

Now everyone was looking at them.. all came near them.. Maan looked at all and then at Mohinder-Uncle why are you asking my forgiveness..what did you do.?

Mohinder-Maan I m the culprit who snatched your love from you.. Maan Geet loves you a lot.. It was me who forced him to break her relation with you..

Not only Maan but everyone was shocked to hear that.. Raj-What? That means Geet is the girl whom Maan loved..

Mohinder-Haan Raj..Geet is the girl whom he loved..

Maan stood for few moment-But Uncle what is the use of telling this now. Geet is someone's wife and is Maanu's mother..

Mohinder-Maanu is your daughter Maan..

And this exploded like a bomb on Maan-What??.. What are you saying Uncle? This is not right.. me and Geet never crossed our lines and. I don't believe it.. I mean how can I agree to this fact where as I know that we were always in our limits..and second fact Maanu is 5 years old and Geet left me 7 years ago..

Mohinder-Maanu is not 5 years old Maan.. She has completed her 6 years..wo Geet ne jaan boojh ke jhooth bola..may be she saw Meera here and thought her to be your wife in fact I too thought that

Maan -but uncle I don't remember anything like that

Mohinder-Maan wo main kuchh nahin Jaanta.. tumdono ke beech kya hua kaise hua I don't know..when I found her pregnant I asked her to tell me about babie's father so that I could come and tell him the truth but she told me the same.. she too said that you would not accept it as he did not know anything about it.. Mujhe kuchh nahin pata Maan..iss bare me to Geet hi bata sakti hai ki actual me kya hua tha..you remember Maanu called you dad.. she did not call you by mistake.. she recognized you as she had seen your pics which Geet has.. Maanu knew that you are her father..

Maan looked at Maanu who was standing there looking at him.. she was crying..Maan came near her and looked at her..she was looking at him ..He wiped her tears

Maanu-Uncle please forgive naanu...

Mohinder-Maanu you can call him Dad..

Maanu - Is their Hide and seek game over Naanu?..

Mohinder-Yes beta..

Maanu-Uncle Can I call you dad?

Maan was trying to remember.. he was remembering his last meeting with Geet.. they met in a hotel as Geet had called him to meet.. he went to meet and there he drank only juice as he did not like to drink alcohol.. he did not remember anything n after that.. Next morning he found himself in a room of same hotel and there was a letter from Geet in which she informed him that she was going away from him forever as he was not capable to take her responsibilities and her father had search a rich guy for her and she too was agree with her father.. His love was not enough for her to spend her life.. she needed money too.. He clearly remembered her sentence-Sirf pyaar ke sahaare zindagi nahi bitaayi ja sakti ..jeene ke liye paisa bhi zaroori hota hai

That very moment he knew that Geet had left him only because he was not rich.He was completely broken.. He could not believe that Geet had left.. She loved him madly.. after that . He returned to his house and went to take a bath . He wanted to shade tears behind the flowing water He did not want anyone to know it that the girl whom he loved had left him.. while taking bath he noticed some red color mixed with water flowing away from is body.. he was surprised to see that.. he even checked his body if he was hurt somewhere on his body but he was perfectly fine.. it was just a little cut on his right hand thumb..nothing else.and that cut was not too big that could release that amount of blood

Now Maan was connecting everything.. that means that night They were one.. but why he is not able to remember it

He remembered something else.. Geet used to call him Maanu and he hated that word and he was always irritated with this word"Geet used to laugh loud seeing him irritated..and one day she said-Maan I m definitely going to name one of our children Maanu.. you never let me call this.. but I will call my kid Maanu and will irritate you.. and her this talk made Maan laughed..

He was even surprised to see Geet calling her daughter Manu that day and he remebered the samething that day too but the situation did not allow him to think much as Maanu needed to rush to the hospital.. Now he did not have any doubt that Maanu was his daughter

.. he was brought back from his past by Maanu.

Who was asking him again and again by shaking him-Uncle please say something .. Can I call you dad,?

And Man sat on his knees infront of Maanu spread his arms-Maanu.. My baby.. and Maanu ran and hugged him calling him Dad.. Maan collected her in his arms and started to kiss every where at her face- Maanu my baby. Yes I m your dad..

Everyone there was having tears in their eyes.. they could see the reunion of father and daughter.. who did not know each other few days back..

Maan's mother came near them- She too hugged Maanu .. and kissed her on her face..

She said to Maan-Maan..we have got our grand daughter,, now we want our DIl too with us.. Bring her back Maan.. and Maan looked at his father,, He too said .Your mother is right Maan.. Go and bring her back.. and Maan ran from there to bring his Geet back to him..

At Dargah

Geet was sitting in a corner

.. .. she was crying..she never thought that she would come to India again and meet Maan but it happened..and the love which she kept hidden in side of her heart was paining her now.. She was sure when she was in London that Maan must had moved in his life as no one would love a cheater but seeing him in front her with someone else was hurting her.. Today was the last day in India.. She so much wanted to see him once but she knew that she was running behind a mirage.. Maan had moved in his life but she was happy to see him successful.. what else she needed..but the fact that she did not have any right on Maan was right too..She wished if her dad hadn't shown his stubbornness. they might have been living as a happy family

She smiled sadly and remembered their past..

Flashback..

7 years ago

Geet was in India under the scheme of student exchange program.. She never had seen India as her father had shifted to London before her birth..She got the opportunity and she opted to do graduation from India.. She came and joined her college there she met Maan and they were attracted towards each at first sight .. They became friends and soon their friendship turned in a love.. Geet found Maan a very caring and sensible human.. She liked every quality in him.. He was very intelligent and humble boy.. Geet was a daughter of a rich NRI business man and she could see that dedication in him which she saw in her father .. She was sure that Maan would attain success in future ..

He never tried to take the advantage of her being rich.. He was from a normal family of a small town.. He never tried to cross his limits in love .. he was always decent with her, he kept their love hidden from all too as he did not want to give any opportunity to anyone to mock their love...and his each and every quality made Geet fall deep in his love..

But she did not know that the love of their life was too short.. She did not know How her father came to know about them.. He was capable to do everything and that was the reason that he was keeping an eye on her from different country..

One day get received his call- He was very angry on her

Gaat-What happened papa.. why are you so angry..

Mohinder-Geet I sent you to study there not to learn the love lessions.. How dare you to think that you will like some bagger and I will agree for your relation? No way Geet.. It's not possible

Geet knew that it was not possible to hide ..

Geet-Papa.. he is not rich like us but he is very intelligent and hardworking ..He will gain success,..

Mohinder-Don't argue Geet.. who has seen the future.. At present he is not capable to look after you..

Geet-But Papa just meet him once .. I make you sure you will not be disappointed..

Mohinder-Milna to door bki baat hai Geet.. I even don't want to know his name.. Now listen to me care fully..-Forget him..

Geet-Papa.. Pleas don't say this.. I love him..He too loves me a lot..I can't live without him..

Mohinder-Then you have to live without your father

Geet-What do you mean Papa?

Mohinder-Geeettt.. you have to chose one between us

Geet-please papa. Don't say like this. Give him one chance..

Mohinder-Geet.. I m telling you for the last time..If you do not come back to London within 7 days then I will ..and Geet was hearing him with a thudding heart,,. She did not want to harm Maan in any case.and she knew that her father could do anything

Mohinder complete his sentence-I will kill my self Geet..and after my death you can celebrate your marriage on my dead body ..and Geet eyes got wider-No papa please aisa mat boliye..

Mohinder-This is my last decision.. If you are not here within 7 fdays.. then on the 8th day you will see me dead..saying this he cut the phone..

Geet had no option now.. she knew how his father was.. He had to leave Maan as could not be the reason of his father's death,... He gave her life how could she take his life and enjoy her life.. Her father had no option left for her as she had to choose between them. She knew that it would be a cheating with Maan but she did not have any other option

.. But She too was the daughter of her Father.. More ziddi than him.. She called her father back and told im that she would be coming back.. He became happy and Geet cut the call..

And se smirked-Papa.. your daughter is coming back but you will regret your decision.. You can keep me away from My Maan but you can't separate us

Geet asked Maan to meet in a hotel

Maan wa s surprised-Hotel me kyun?

Geet-bas yun hi .. I wanted to spend some time peacefully..please na mat bolo..

Maan-Okk. And Maan reached where Geet had asked him to come..They settled at their seats and he asked waiter to bring juice for both of them.. they were talking happily.. Geet was looking at him with intense eyes.. she knew she was looking him for the last time

Maan-Geet kya hua..aise kyun dekh rahi ho?

Geet-Kuchh nahin aise hi..Maan will you do something for me?

Maan-Kya bolo..Taare tod ke lane hain aasmaan se

Ad Geet laughed-Maanabhi tare todne ka time nahin aaya filhaal mujhe wo rose flower tod ke laa do

Maan -Bas itni si baat? Abhi laata hoon..

Maan went to bring that flower and Geet got a chance and she mixed some drugs in his juice..

He came back and had their juice..

Soon Maan felt some dizziness and held his head..Geet something is happening to me.

Geet-Are you alright Maan?

But Maan was not able to bear that feeling and he did not reply her..

Geet called manager and said-can we hire a room? He is not feeling well.. ..and she hired a room and with the help ofa waiter she took him to the room..

Waiter-Maam do you need doctor?

Geet-No he has some problem and I have his medicine with me.. don't worry..and waiter left

Geet made him sit on the bed..

Geet-Maan mujhe tumse kuchh kahna hai

Maan-Kya..

Geet-Maan I m going back to London..

Maan-No Geet tum nahin ja sakti..tumhaare bina kaise jiyunga?

Geet-If you don't want me to go then make me yours... phir main kabhi nahin jaaungi tumhe chhod ke..

Maan- No Geet this is wrong..you know na ki kisi ko apna banaane ke liye shadi zaroori hoti hai

Get-Haan to humk abhi shadi kar lete hain.. aur dekho agar tumne meri baat nahin Maani to main chali jaaungi.. Maan was completely under the effects of drugs..

Maan-Nahin Geet pleas aisa mat bolo..I will not let you go.. I will make you mine.. and he looked here and there and Geet took a knife from her handbag and gave to him.. Maan smiled seeing it.. he put a little cut on his right thumb and blood ozzed out.. He filled her partition with that blood..and Geet closed her eyes..

Maan-Ab theek hai..ab hamaari shadi ho gayi na.. Now promise you will not go away..

Geet -Never Maan.. now make me yours..and they celebrated their first night .. For Geet it was the only night with her husband between them.. Geet was now only of Maan.. No one could separate her from him,., Not even his father

After some time she made Maan sleep and he slept.. Geet said to Maan-I m really sorry Maan.. I have to go..I know I m cheating you ,,. But I have been asked to chose one between the two men in my life,.. and I m not able to leave any of you.. so I m yours in all senses and I m going back to my father.. She kissed on his lips-Maan you will always be in my heart..Ho sake to maaf kar dena apni Geet ko..she kept a letter on the side table of the bed under his wrist watch and she left.. She was crying while going back...

She reached London and Mohinder Was happy to see her back.. he gave her time days to settle again..

After two months Mohinder told Geet that he had selected a boy for her..

Geet-Papa.. ask him if he is ready to accept my child with me?

Mohinder-What? Ye kya bol rahi ho Geet..

Geet- wahi jo aapne suna... Papa you blackmailed me by threatening me.. Now I m here. I left my love there but have brought his love with me.. I m going to be a mother of his baby papa..

Mohinder-Geet I will take an appointment with doctor.. we will get rid of this child..

Geet-Dare papa.. if you even think this.. you called me by threatening me that you will kill yourself.. Now I m threatening you Papa that if you touch my baby.. I will kill myself.. and I m your daughter papa.. aap ziddi hain to main bhi utni hi ziddi hoon.. Want to see the proof? and she picked up the knife from the table and cut her wrist and Mohinder was so scared to see her.. He rushed to the hospital taking Geet and Geet was soon treated and she was fine in few days.. Seeing Geet Mohinder was so disturbed,, but he did not dare to say anything to her.. Geet had stopped to talk to him..and after 9 month Mannu arrived and Mohinder was regretting now.. he had spoiled her daughter's life.. He so many times tried to ask the name of the father of Maanu but she did not open her mouth and one day when he bagged infront of her to tell the name she told him-No use papa.. he will not agree as he did not know any thing about Maanu. So don't even try..and Mohinder surrendered in front of her.. he tried to reduce the distances between himself and Geet but Geet had shut her heart for her father... but she never stopped him to come near Maanu..

And they were living like that for 7 years..

Flashback ended

Geet's thoughts were disturbed by the voice of someone.. She looked at him and found the same baba whom she met that day..

He asked-Tum to wahi ho na jo uss din aayi thi

Geet-Ji Baba

Baba-Aaj kya hua?

Geet-Baba-Aaj mere pati ka janamdin hai..unki lambi umr ki dua Maangne aayi hoon

Baba-Bachha..Uss dib hi tum akeli thi aur aaj bhi..Pati kahaan hai tumhara..

Geet-Ji. Wo yahaan nahin...but they heard a voice-mai yahaan hoon baba..and Geet looked in that direction..she found Maan standing there... he was looking at her... He came near them and said-Main hoon iska pati baba..ye mujhe bina bataaye hi yahaan aa gayi meri lambi umr ki dua Maange.. and he said to Geet-Geet bata kar to ana chhaiye tha na..

And Bab smiled hearing him..and he blessed both of them'' Maan held her hand.. Geet was watching all this with confusion.-Why he is reacting like this?he turned from there holding her hand

Baba was still standing behind them.. so Geet did not say anything but as they went little far-Geet jerked his hand-Mr. Khurana.. be in your limits..you know na that I married..

Maan-So what? I m married too Geet.. Is there any rule that a married man can not touch any married woman

Geet was more confused now.

Maan came near Geet and cuped her face-Geet I know the truth now..mujeh sab pata chal gaya ki tum kyun chhod kar gayi mujhe..

Geet's eyes got wider hearing this.. She gulped her saliva..But how?

Maan-Mohinder uncle confesses everything ..

Geet's eyes filled with water and Maan wiped them and then kissed them one by one..

Geet-Do you believe that Maanu is your daughter?

Maan-Mohinder uncle ke confession ke baad believe karne ke liye kuchh rah hi nahin jaata Geet.. I was shocked to hear her name from your mouth on the first day.. Mujhe yaad tha Geet ki tum kya bolti thi Maanu Naam ke bare me.. Geet .. I don't remember anything about that night,.. but felt some changes in me.. Kitni koshish ki maine ki tumse nafrat karun par nahin kar paaya..How could I Geet.. may be I had some feeling that you and me were one by then.. you were an important part of me.. bhale hi kuchh yaad nahin tha ..par ek ahsaas tha kit um aas paas hi ho mere..

Geet was crying hearing him,.. Maan hugged her without thinking that they were at a public place.. He was feeling his heart finally at peace.. He was never in peace after Geet left him.. Neither he could hate her nor could forget her

Maan again said-Aur aaj sab kuchh saaf ho gaya Geet.. Shayad Baba ji ne sun li tumhaare dul ki dua.. ab ghar chalo Geet.. sab tumhara intezaar karr ahe hain..

Geet-Sab?

And Maan signaled in one direction.. Geet looked there and found everyone from Maan's family with Maanu and Mohinder..

And then Geet remembered some thing-Nahin Maan.. ab ye possible nahin hai.. You are Meera's husband now and I cannot come between you two..

And Maan smiled hearing this..

Maan's parents came near them

His mother hugged her -Geet dekho hum sab tumhen lene aaye hain.. apne ghar ki badi bahu ko..

Geet-Badi bahu?..

Raj-Haan Meeera chhoti bahu hai na.. wo hamaare chhote bte Dev ki wife hai.. Maan usko abni bahan ki tarah pyaar karta hai... Geet looked at Maan He was smiling .. His eyes were filled with love for her..

And they heard Maanu-Mom.. Dad..and she came running toward them and jumped in Maan's arms.. Maan kissed her and He looked at Geet..

Maan-Chalo Geet . ghar chalte hain..He put his arm around Geet and was holding Maanu in other arm..

Geet was looking at him with tearful eyes aNd Maan again shook his head signaling her not to cry..He held her close to him and Geet wiped her tears.. Babaji had listened to her prayers everyone bent their head in front ot the majar before leaving for home


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CHOTI SI LOVE STORY
XYZ college campus..all the final year students were on full josh as they were going for the college trip... apart from all the students Maan and Geet were in tension.. Geet.. for how to disclose this news to her family members and Maan for waiting for her approval.

"Geet jaldi jaakar darji se baat karna" said pinky and pari who are close friends to Geet.

Geet : mujhe dar lagraha hai yaar.. pata nahi darji ko kaise samajhaoon.

Pari : Geet tum chinta mat kar hum dono bhi tere saath ghar aayenge aur darji se baat karenge.. chal pinky tu bhi aaja ..aaj kisi tarah darji ko manalenge...

There was silence in the entire mansion... everyone fears to raise their voice in front of darji ... And they all treat him as the hilter...Geet was the only child of mohinder and rano handa .. inspite of being from a rich family Geet lives a simple life.

Three girls entered the house and directly went in to the kitchen to meet Geet's mother.

Geet : Maa

Pinky and pari : Aunty

By hearing their voice rano became alert as darji was at home and she didn'tt want to make darji angry on the girls...came to the trio making them aware of darji's presence.

Geet : maa ek help chahiye. Aaj college mein trip ki baat huyi .. sab logon ne apna naam dediya.. aur yeh saal aakhri saal hai please darji ko manao na.. mujhe bhi jaana hai.

Rano : yeh kya kehrahi ho Geet.. darji bilkul nahi Maanenge.. tere papa bhi nahi hai iss waqt usse baat karne keliye..main kuch nahi kar sakti.

Just then mohinder handa entered the house..and came to know about the trip... he assured Geet that he was going to speak to darji..and went to meet darji

Here outside of the room trio was eagerly waiting for darji's decision.. mohinder finally convinced darji and took the permission for sending Geet.

Outside three girls jumped with joy after hearing this ... pari and pinky left handa house happily thinking about their future trip.

Next day Maan got the news about Geet coming to the trip and his happiness had no bounds...

Maan : yash dekh yaar Geet aane waale hai ab iss baar main usko apne dil ki baat zaroor boloonga ..

Yash : Maan I know Geet too have some feelings for u inspite of being reserve with u..

Maan : haan yaar I know only because of u she is able to talk to me little bit warna wo meri taraf dekh bhi nahi paathi.

Yash : kya karein yaar uski family hi aisi hai.. they won't allow her to talk with any boy.. except me as I am her cousin.. and they even made her join this college because of me... her darji is really hilter yaar.. sab darthe hain uss se..aur mujhe tho unke saamne jaane me hi paseena choot jaatha hai.

Maan : kya iss baar Geet mujhse akele baat karne ka mauka degi? Tumhen hi kuch karna padega... warna aisa mauka mujhe dobara milna mushkil hoga.. exams ke baad sab alag ho jayenge..

Yash : tum chinta mat kar yaar main kuch karta hoon.. pinky aur pari bhi haina undono ki help leta hoon.. Geet se milwane ke liye. Waise yeh bataao.. tum 3 saal se uske pyaar mein dhoobe hue ho..agar Geet mana karegi tho kya karoge..

Maan : kuch nahi bas zindagi bhar ussi ka intezaar karta rahoonga.. mere dil mein aur zindagi mein bas ussi keliye jagah hai aur kisi ke liye nahi.

Maan is the only son of raj and priya khurana.. who owns khurana constructions. Having one sister annie.. Maan is the ladla beta and all his wishes will be fulfilled without asking..but Maan never took advantage of their love.

Yash : ok ok ab bas karo.. itna emotional mat ho..mujhe yakeen hai tera pyaar jeet jaayega..ab chal trip ki tayyari karte hai.. tumhen aur saare kaam bhi tho hai.

Finally the day came when all reached the college and boarded the bus... yash.,pinky and pari planned and made Maan and Geet to sit near by seats..Maan was so happy to see Geet sitting near by and here Geet feeling tensed. Journey started with all masti but Geet was quite and was looking sad... by seeing her Maan became tensed and tried to ask her but Geet did not say anything

Two days passed and only two days were left.. third day with the help of yash ,pinky and pari Maan managed to meet Geet alone..

Maan: hi Geet, please don't be scared. I brought u here to say something.

Geet: please Maan mujhe jaane do.. kahin kisi aur ne dekhliya tho acha nahi hoga.

Maan: Geet please listen , here no one can see us . main jyaada time nahi loonga ... bas mujhe kuch kehna hai.

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Please mujhe jana hai.. by saying this Geet started moving.

Maan immediately came infront of her and stopped her from moving .

Maan: Geet please ek baar mauka do apne dil ki baat kehne ka... 3 saal se wait karta raha kab main tumse apne dil ki baat bataaunga .. par aaj mauka mila mujhe aur main iss mauke ko gawana nahi chahta hoon.. Geet I love you... mere zindagi mein tumhen shaamil karna chahta hoon.. kya tum meri zindagi ka hissa banogi?

Maan waited for Geet's reply .. but instead of saying anything Geet started to cry .. Maan couldn't take Geet tears and came close to her... but Geet stopped him

eet: Maan aaj tak yehi baat sunne ke liye taras rahi thi.. ki tum kab mujhe yeh baat bataoge..mere dil mein tum tab hi dastak de baithe thay jab pehli baar maine tumhen yash bhai ke saath dekha.. tab se main sirf tumhen dekhne yash bhai se milne aathi thi.. par kabhi himmat nahi juta payi tumse baat karne ki..dar tha kahi tum mujhe aise nazron se nahi dekh rahe ho.. main tho simple si dikhne waali ladki hoon aur tum college ke jaan the..kitni baar tumse kehna chahti thi par har baar koi na koi aakar tumhen dur le jatha tha.. kitni baar main jealous feel kar rahi thi jab tum sam ke saath baat karte thay.. par main kuch nahi keh payi.. kehti bhi tho kis haq se.. mujhe yeh tak nahi pata tha ki tumhaare dil mein mere liye kya feelings hain... par ab jab tum khud kehne aaye ho ki mujhse pyaar karte ho... shayad meri kismet hi aisi hai ki meri zindagi mein pyaar hi nahi likha ho.. and she started crying ...

Maan was shocked by listening all this..

Maan: Geet yeh tum kya kehrahi ho.. jab tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho.. phir ro kyun rahi ho.

eet : Maan trip par aane se pehle darji ne mujhe apne paas bulaya aur mujhse waada liya ki trip se aane ke baad mujhe uske friend ke pote se shadi karni hai..aur unki baat ko mujhe manna hi padega.. mere darji ke baaremein tum jaanthe ho shayad yash se... koi usko na nahi kehtha.. isse pehle main apne dil ki baat bata doon unhone faisla le liya aur one week ke baad meri sagayi bhi fix kardi aur main kaise apne dil ki baat batati .. jab ki mujhe yeh tak nahi pata tha ki tumbhi mujhse pyaar karte ho.

After telling everything Geet ran from there crying and Maan's heart was broken. yash who heard everything became sad to see his both loved ones in pain..

Yash:Geet Maan met with an accident.. after coming back from trip he was totally devastated and in that mood he hit his car to the tree.. he is in hospital.

Listening to this Geet shattered and started blaming herself for Maan's condition and ran to the dargah to pray for Maan's well being.. here yash came to know about Geet going to dargah informed Maan that Geet went to dargah and told him to meet her once and try to convince her ..

Geet reached to dargah.She was still crying.. Seeing her said one baba on that dargah came near her and said-beta tum chinta mat karo sab kuch teek ho jayega.. tum bas yeh dhaaga uss deewar par baando aur tumhaari saari mannat poore hojayegi.. shanti milegi.

Hearing this Geet took dhaaga from baba and started tying .. other side Maan too came to meet Geet .. Geet was continuously crying and praying for Maan...after tying the dhaaga Geet saw Maan who came to meet her... after seeing Maan fit and fine Geet was so happy...and lost in Maan's eyes .

Sufi kawwali was being presented by some saints there

preet ki lat mohe aaisi laagi

ho gayi main matwaari

bal bal jaaun apane piya ko

he main jaaun vaari vaari

mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki

yeh toh jaane duniya saari

bebas aur laachar phiru main

haari main dil haari

tere naam se jee loon

tere naam se marr jaaun

teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ji ha ji ho gayi main

teri deewani deewani- 2

Maan slowly came near Geet and touched Geet by seeing her lost.. this broke Geets trance.. closing her mouth she just ran from their without speaking anything .seeing Geet like that Maan's could feel himself in pain too.. He was worried for Geet and was fearing to loose her

Maan found every road to get Geet blocked so he decided to ask his father for his help to get his love..Raj after listening everything agreed to help his son and decided to unite Maan and Geet. but before that they have to get all information about dev who is going to marry Geet.. and wants him to back out from this alliance.

When raj asked Maan and yash to find about dev... they came to know about dev's character.. and werer shocked .. instead of confronting him they both planned to expose him infront of darji and started collecting proofs against dev.

Finally the engagement day has arrived.. handa mansion has been decorated fully.. guests started coming..As khuranaa's are too in business there was business relation between handa's and khuraana's .so raj and priya too came to attend the ceremony. in Geet's room pinky and pari after knowing everything about Maan and Geet felt sad to see Geet in that condition.. here Geet lost all hopes and sat like a lifeless...

Time has approached .. rano along with pari and pinky brought Geet down and took her to the stage where dev was already waiting with cunning smile.Engagement ceremony started .. time for rings exchange.. before putting the ring in dev's finger.. yash voice stopped Geet in the middle.. Darji became angry on yash and started shouting on yash for stopping the ceremony... but this time yash didn't fear for darji as his friend's and Geet life was in danger and he wants them to live together for whole life and for them he is ready to face any one... with this determination.. he came infront of darji and showed all the proofs against dev... darji stood shock knowing dev's deeds and gave a tight slap to dev ... dev understood that now there is no way to escape and he disclosed everything that he is already married to tara and wanted the money to get out of the debt which he has by marrying Geet as she is the only daughter of the handa's..by hearing this earth slipped from darji , mohinder and rano.. taking the opportumnity yash throwed dev out of the handa mansion.

Here in khurana mansion Maan was eagerly waiting for yash and raj's call .. after throwing out dev yash called Maan and disclosed everything about what has happened... Maan was so happy finally he is going to get his Geet.

Geet was lost in her own misery as she was doing all the things mechanically.. and when she came to know about dev she felt happy that there is still some hope is left for her to win her love...

Darji and Geet's parents felt ashamed for spoiling their daughter's life without knowing anything about dev's family.. Raj and priya thought that this is the right time and proceeded towards darji.

Raj: mr. handa mujhe apse kuch kehna hai.

Darji:mr.khurana sorry ab main iss halat mein nahi hoon ki aapse kuch baat karein.. turning towards the guest he folded his arms and requested the guest to leave as no engagement was going to take place.

Raj: please mr.handa just listen to me once and then u decide which is good and which is bad. Darji:boliye mr.khurana.

Raj: we want Geet as our bahu .. agar aap chahen tho.. mera ek hi beta hai Maan jo abhi padayi khatam karne waale hai aur mere business ko sambhalne waala hai.

Darji , mohinder and rano stood shock after listening to raj's words.

Darji. Mr.khurana yeha itna sab kuch hogaya phir bhi aap yehi chahthe ho..

Raj: ji darji.humein Geet bohut pasand hai aur Maan humare baat nahi taalega.. chahe tho aap ek baar Maan se mil lijiye aaapko zaroor pasand aayega mera beta.

darji:ek baar galat kar chuka hoon ab iss baar main Geet ki dil ki baat sunna chahta hoon.. pehle Geet se pooch leta hoon.. he called Geet.

Darji: Geet beta pehli baar maine galat faisla liya.. wo bhi teri zindagi ka.. kharab hone se bach gayi.. warna main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata... iss baar main teri dil ki baat sunna chahti hoon... kya aap Maan se shadi karne keliye tayyar hai..

After listening to darji ... Geet was literally in shock.. usko kuch samajh mein nahi aarahi thi ki kya bole.. here pinky and pari were jumping with happiness and nudged Geet to say yes.. Geet shyly nodded her head.

Everyone felt happy after getting Geet's approval and both families decided to do the engagement after their exams.. and darji announced Maan's and Geet's engagement to all the guests...

Maan who was listening everything from yash phone was so happy as his wish is going to fulfill..after fixing the alliance raj and priya returned to the mansion to share this happy news to Maan before fixing the meeting date of Maan with handa's.

Maan thought to spend time with Geet as they had got the license for their meetings but one enemy was still present between them .. that was their exams.. Maan and geet controlled their desires to meet each other and got busy in exams. Finally exams were over and both families fixed their engagement . But they gave them time to enjoy their courtship before wedding..finally raj handed over his business to Maan by making him MD.. Maan and Geet started their new journey after getting married.

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Ankahe Ehsaas

" Maaannn" She screamed... And fell on the floor helplessly..

Geet handa felt lonely... after her Love raj abandoned her... and thereafter maan. Her best frnd.. dint come for her rescue..

" Stop it drama queen..."

Maan uttered pressings his lips.. tightly..

Geet sniffed... and wiped her nose.. Huffing angrily she strolled towards the bed..where Maan was seated..

" Don't u dare... make that face Maan.. I was dam serious with ricky okay ?" She punched...him... and wiped her tears..

Maan rolled his eyes.. ignoring her antics..

" yes...serious for the 5th time.. in the month..ha?" he snarled

Geet twisted her lips..and rolled her eyes " as if u care... there I was breaking up.. and u.. u were busy..in your stupid meeting..." she cribbed

Maan clenched his eyes and stood to his feet

" geet u were breaking up...with him on Fb"

"sooo?????????? " she squealed raising her brow

"geet u were next to me.. typing and breaking up with him... while I was..talking to Mr.Barreto

" ddint u even think for a sec before barging inside my meeting... And pulling out a chair..." Maan was definitely surprised over her behavior..

Maan and geet were best frnds since high school... Geet was Handa's only child... But her parents died at a early age.. since then she lived in Khurana mansion.. with maan's parents. Everyone loved her ... for Maan's parents... she was a sweetheart ... But his dadi disliked her..

Geet twisted her lips.. and sniffed...turning away from him..

" geeett... Offoo" Maan walked towards her... and went on his knees..

" Listen to me.." He cupped her face..

" Just don't make bfs for ssome time.. decide think..fall in love.. first and then...go ahead take ur decision.." he muttered in his soft voice...

Geet blinked her eyes..listening to his words carefully.. the way maan said.. and..his eyes which twinkled...drove her somewhere else... the words which he spoke... left a powerful impact on her mind...

Few days later..

Geet had a small accident...which resulted stiches on her forehead..

When her frnds dropped her home that day... Dadi scolded her a lot.. Maan''s parents were out and so was he..

Geet scurried inside her room..and cried..whole night.. dadi s harsh words..of being a a burden on Khurana Family.. was floating in her mind..

In midst of all she forgot to inform..maan..about her accident..

She whimpered...clutching the pillow tightly...curing her luck... Sometimes.. she too felt that she was burden on this family ..

She cuddled herself and soon fell slept...

a while later she felt someone caressing her forehead..very softly...

Subconsciously even in that state her lips uttered " Maan" and formed a small smile..

His eyes...formed tears instead glimpsing the bandage on her forehead... " Geet" it was all he could whisper...

" Maan..." sshe realized it was True... and snapped her eyes open..before.. gluing her body to him..in a tight hug...

Maan hugged her...with closed eyes and kissed at the top of her head..

Geet smiled at his care. " why dint u call me...geet" This was a serious conversation Maan was initiating..she knew that ..his voice said it all..

Geet parted away and..looked down..meekly.. Maan cupped her face..and kissed her forehead..he knew her silent answer ... She never disturbed him...while he was out.. after that incident. Once he was out of station and geet had to contact maan urgently... But dadi taunted her... Since that she never troubled him while he was out .. The geet who was a fighter...and bubbly girl would appear timid infront of dadi... She curbed herself in front of her...

" chalo now..sleep..did u take medicines?" he asked..making her lay on bed..

She nodded her head...

he hummmed and covered her with blanket...

He smiled..at her and then was about to back off...when she clasped his hand tighter..

" dont leave me maan"

Maan glanced at her..and blinked his eyes... He sat down on the floor..holding her hand comfortably.. She tweeked her brows..but he shook his head...saying he is..alright here ..

Soon her eyelids closed...and she slept...peacefully with maan by her side..

After that incident..something changed in her.. everything Maan and she would do...implicated something in her heart..

Each of those memories they lived together... were portrayed in different view..something which she never thought of

In fact her thoughts were visible in her behavior ... She would crave to be with him.. But when she is with him..she ll just be quiet...and live the moment with him..

Maan too was observing the changes in her...

After almost a month...Geet's ex bf began troubling her... He used to call her numerous times... tried meeting her ..

Maan was out of station for a project...

geet was already...upset due to that..and to top it all her ex started irritating..her..

Past whole month she did not talk to any guy... She only thought of maan... She was under the impression...that she was just following his words... but was compltely oblivious about the feelings her heart started to bear for maan...

That day...she came to Km all pissed off...

Her ex had..stalked her in mall...too resulting her outburst on him..

As she entered Km dadi was already present...

geet glanced at dadi and then lowered her eyes...

She began pacing upstairs in her room...but dadi's voice stopped her...

She turned..and walked down... she now stood before dadi..

Next she knew..she was all in tears listening dad's accusations..

Apparently dad had spotted her with her ex in the mall..

she accused her of being a characterless... But that dint make her cry... thereafter she stated..of being a bitch who is trying to trap the only khurana heir..

Geet let her tears flow...as she tried to explain dadi her pov... But dadi's words grew more tyrannical...

Unable to control her emotions...she closed her eyes..and ran upstairs in her room...

geet locked the door...and slipped on the floor..

dadi's words bloated her mind...

never in her life she can ever think of maan as her... She clenched her eyes ... making tears spill out..

She shook her head trying to prove dadi's words wrong..

But her heart was saying something else... One way she was crying due to dad's words... But on the other hand..her heart was rejoicing the feeling when dadi took Maan and her name together... As if thats what it wanted... Her world... subsumed in that...

Her eyes snapped opened...and she clutched her dupatta...

This isnt possible.. Maan and she..they are best frnds... both can never ??? never??????????? her thoughts were overpowered by Maan and their memories which flashed before her eyes

Gasping she laid out a scream...covering her face...

"geeett" Maan's voice started her... He was continuously banging the door..

She clenched here eyes..again feeling helpless...

Maan called her numerous times...requesting her to let him in... But today she wasnt in a state to listen .. She was fighting with her feelings which were for him..

When maan dint listen... she said " Chale jaoo...mujhe akela chod do maan..for god sake just leaveee..."

Hearing her whimper...Maan decided to leave...

She lowered her head in between her knees...

She laid there for some time...silently crying...trying to contempt her growing feelings ...

"geeettt "

" Maaannn" Geet woke up..with a scream...

Her breaths were uneven..and forehead was sweaty... She had just fallen asleep..when Maan' voice... began hammering her mind...

There was a sudden.. anxiety which engulfed her heart...

She gulped her saliva... and closed her eyes...

Again maan's face flashes before her eyes... she snapped her eyes open..

" babaji... Maan thik toh hai na.. Mujhe aise kyu lag raha hai..ki..." The feelings she felt.. were unexplainable...

Her ehart was heavy...and mind was slowly getting blurry.. Something within her was indicating Something is wrong... with Maan..

" babaji...Maan ko..kuch mat ho ne dena..." she cried...

She stood to her feet and scurried down...

On her way she met the driver... When inquired..he told her that Maan baba was angry and he took car towards...the main road...

She suppressed her cries and...ran outside...like a maniac...

Her legs...took long steps...and nor did once her eyes stopped crying..

Geet paused finally after running on the roads...like crazy... Her body gave up and she fell on the ground...she couldn't find maan...and now she was desperate...

Her heart constantly praying for maan...asking her babaji to keep him safe..

She opened her eyes...bracing herself...thats when her eyes fell on the car...parked on the other side...

"Maaan..ki gaadi" geet shrieked up and ran towards the car.. The breath got caught in her throat as she faced the car's condition.. it was a damaged...

" maaan" she screeehed..loudly... cries...sputtered through her lips...

" babaji..nai mere maan ko kuch nai hogaa" She checked the car and sighed since there was no one...

Once again she decided to find him...and started running ahead...

Almost after 20 mins she paused at a dargah... Helpless and defeated...she decided to visit the dargah to calm herself...

She stepped inside the dargah after covering her head with the dupatta...

" mujhe mera maan wapas kar do...pleaseee..."

With that she opened her eyes ...

All of a sudden there was a gush of positivity...around her... Her heart felt restless...like feelings him around

preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi

ho gayi main matwaari

She spun...and tried to follow her instincts ...

bal bal jaaun apane piya ko

he main jaaun vaari vaari

She started...walking towards the left hand side corner...restlessly

mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki

yeh toh jaane duniya saari

" beta...yaha tumhara jaana mana hai " A aldy tried stopping her as she was about to enter the male zone...

She pryed off her hand...and continued walking...ahead as if in trance

bebas aur laachar phiru main

Her steps...paused...on their own,...and tear fell down..embracing a beautiful smile on her lips... As she glimpsed him..

haari main dil haari - 2

tere naam se jee loon - 2

tere naam se marr jaaun -

there was maan sitting there with closed eyes...

She gasped...and smiled..widely... as if seeing him for the first time..

eri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Her heart was blooming with happiness...to have found her... As if he heard her smile...his eyes opened...and he turned his face sideways...

"geeet" he whispered...when he spotted her ..all lost...

ho ji ha ji ho gayi main

teri deewani deewani-

She smiled...experiencing a pure bliss to hear his voice take her name...

Maan got up ...and took a step towards her...not breaking the eye contact...

une kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ji ha ji ho gayi main

She too stepped closer...

Her eyes were hypnotized...and he was..trying to read thm..

But the lady came in between and stopped her... She held her arm...and dragged her...towards the female section...

Her eyes panicked immediately...and he became restless...watching them panic...

Her heart did not like...her being away from him... It was clearly seen in her eyes...

ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2

haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

She closed her eyes... and held the maannat ka thread in her hand...

She walked...towards the wall... to tie the daga...feeling overwhelmed...with her emotions...

Her hands were accompanied by his... he helped her typing the daga...

yahi ishq di marzi hain

yahi rab di marzi hain

yahi ishq di marzi hain

yahi rab di marzi hain

She found his touch as a pure ecstasy ...

Her eyes were downcasted... loving the moment..of togetherness...

" babaji... yeh... Kya iska matalb yeh hai.. Ki mere dil ne joh kaha..wahi...aapko bhi maazoor hai.." a tear tickled down her cheek... Before it dribbled down... He came ahead...and wiped it with his forefinger...

tere bin jeena kaisa

haan khudgarzi hai

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ji ha ji ho gayi main

teri deewani deewan

She stopped breathing... as he cupped her face...titling it upwards...

Her eyes opened on their own...and met his..

he main rang rangeeli deewani - 2

ke main albeli main mastani

gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun

he main deen dhram se begaani

ke main deewani main deewani

His eyes had so many questions..in them.. But yet she could find her answer... In them.. " I m there for you " she read it loudly in her mind...

ere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun - 2

tere jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

teri deewani deewani

At that moment that was all she could ask for... Without any further thoughts she...wrapped her hands around him...engulfing the feeling she denied ...

teri deewani deewani

teri deewani deewani

teri deewani deewani...

Maan reciprocated her hug...tightly... Enduring the merriment she felt...

She smiled...hiding herself...in his arms... Today she found herself... the deewani she was for him... was finally bared... In front of her real self... and she cherished...it dearly...


Edited by lakspriya - 9 years ago

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