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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


Itna pump marne ki zarurat nahi hai😆
Will update soon

Thanks for reading!


Lol I m not joking.. Aap sachi me r a good writer. N readers ka karma hi hota hai writers ko machine marna😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: crazydream


Lol I m not joking.. Aap sachi me r a good writer. N readers ka karma hi hota hai writers ko machine marna😆😉


Ek baat tho pakki h
Mai tho pakka diabetes se hi marungi🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


Ek baat tho pakki h
Mai tho pakka diabetes se hi marungi🤣


Hehe.
writers ko makkhan lagana likha tha. autocorrect ne sab kuch badal dala. Uff pareshan ho gayi. Machine marna lol. Mei aapko kabhi nahi maarne wali. Update kaun dega fir. Air fir sabhi readers mere piche ho jayenge.😛😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazydream


Hehe.
writers ko makkhan lagana likha tha. autocorrect ne sab kuch badal dala. Uff pareshan ho gayi. Machine marna lol. Mei aapko kabhi nahi maarne wali. Update kaun dega fir. Air fir sabhi readers mere piche ho jayenge.😛😆😆


My readers are more my friends dhund lenge even if i become atmaa🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Part #1


Do u know how I felt at situations like this when everything in my life is going wrong almost exact opposite to what I expected when I scored less in my exams or couldn't reach upto the expectations of my parents. .. I hmm let it be ... will share it later now getting back to the story!

It was almost dinner time when he reached his house... n every one from his family was seated in the hall n chatting happily... dadi n his little brother engrossed in an argument while dad was discussing something serious with maa to which his brother was giving input now n then... he didn't know how long he stood there until his mother noticed him

Maan!!

Every head turned towards him with a surprised smile n slowly he was now as much a part of the discussion as he was always...

After a while he left to his room to freshen up n join for the dinner... Being with family gives a different feel altogether... u almost forget ur worries when maa creases ur head affectionately... n ur brother has a world full of things to share with u..

Seated on the dining table he recalled how much he missed homemade food n sharing a happy talk with his family. ..

Sighing he picked up the roti to serve him self when his dad's question brought him back to the real world!!

So maan how many days this time...

Forever dad he tried to keep his voice as low as possible but now that there was complete silence everybody heard him quite clearly

What!!

Maan beta what do u mean??

Dadi wo... actually I'm not going back again...

Maan??

I...I'm suspended! he blurted out closing his eyes tightly

What the hell are u talking maan! Is this some kind of joke. ..

Dad...

Enough maan... not a word we'll talk about it in the morning... I'm done. ..

After dad every one slowly got up n left leaving him with his now dry roti in his plate n hands still holding the bite... suddenly all his apatite was lost n he felt choked with emotions. .. it was true he was starving for past one week or so since he heard of his news... but now when he was home n every thing was in front of him all he wanted to do was push all the dishes to the ground n scream at his helplessness!!

Washing his hands he wiped the lone tear that escaped his eyes which wasn't coz of his hunger but was coz of becoming the reason his whole family went to bed empty stomach!

The day after wasn't any better every one was behaving like they were hit with a storm. ..

When he was back from his jogging he found his maa n dad in a deep discussion. .. when they saw me coming in he gestured me to come near

Maan what do u plan to do now...

Dad wo...

So u didn't have anything in ur mind. ..

Umm...no..

Okay fine then! Jaya where's Vicky??

He left early today as there are some interviews going on in the office I suppose. ..

Hmmm well then maan u are joining the office from today!

But listen to h...

Shh... let me complete. .. maan we agreed when u told us about your interest right... now it's our turn...

Yes dad I'm ok with it. ..

But. ..

Maa it's ok ... dad is right. .. I think I should leave. ...

He left to his room... silently... picking up his certificates he made sure he was at least presentable... he would give his first official interview that too in his own company well if this is what dad wants then so be it!!

He has disappointed his father a lot many times now at least he could try n mend things!!

When he reached the office building all his confidence drained out of his system... what if he couldn't get through the interview how will he face his mom this time... what will he say that he couldn't get through a simple interview on their own company!!

Aree chill yaar it's Geet Handa u r talking about. .. n this interview n things are too silly stuff to worry about!!

Ok fine i'll have my lunch from the nearby restaurant n if possible watch that latest release before reaching home...

He he he... I know I know... I'm like that u can't help it!

He was alone with her in the same lift... when she entered n stood facing the door not even bothered about the other person in the same lift lost in her own world. ..

Cutting the call she pulled out a little mirror n corrected her hair n started chatting with her friends. ..

Excuse me...

Hmmm...

Clearing his throat he tried a little louder this time...

Excuse me...

Then she looked up from her mobile batting her lashes which were decked up maskara kajal n what not... she surely appeared to be some model. .. n she on the other hand was lost in him...

He cleared his throat bringing her back to the real world. ..

Could you please make a way I've to get down on the next floor. .. he asked rising an eyebrow

She simply nodded her head giving him space. .. when the lift came to a halt he disappeared into the office not even sparing her a glance...

Hello pinky. ..

Yaar how dare he ignore geet handa...

Who...

Tu ruk... I mean giving me attitude. ..

Geet?? What are u talking. .. u went to attend interview only right!!

Oh... shit yep... got to go... but by the way pinks that guy was super hot!!

Only he would be ur jiju!!

Geet u are mad!!

I know darling... will catch up later its my turn




To be continued. ..


Now since this has been typed n been with me for more than a week. ..will post the next sooon maybe tonight😃

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Yupiee... Me first for the first time in ur thread.😎
Aapka pecha nahi chodungi. Where ever I see u post what aa sati hu🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
superb part.. maan was going to attend interview in his own company..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Nice update
Love it
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
he is back home and felt a little better being with the family though he knew what storm is about to come..but then he did not hid it either..like a true army man..
so this time he has prove himself working with their own company...and he is not confident enough from the earlier experience..but why was he suspended from army?
isn't Geet the same girl whom he helped a day before?
if she is, then her entry in the office is in a totally different avatar..
looks like some reason behind this as well..
waiting for the next..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

he is back home and felt a little better being with the family though he knew what storm is about to come..but then he did not hid it either..like a true army man..
so this time he has prove himself working with their own company...and he is not confident enough from the earlier experience..but why was he suspended from army?
isn't Geet the same girl whom he helped a day before?
if she is, then her entry in the office is in a totally different avatar..
looks like some reason behind this as well..
waiting for the next..


Don't know about u but this story I'm sure would enjoy writing🤣

Hint k tor pe...

Plz don't stress so much. ..

Thanks for reading!

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