HORIZON - Page 3

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

congo 4 new story lovely start our hero saved our heroine n he is a suspended army office nice start glad that u will update other stories

Originally posted by: neetr91

Nice start and also beautiful concept. ...loved it...curious as to why maan was suspended from army!!??

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

nice start

maan as suspended army officer and saved a girl

waiting for first part

decided to follow you from this story.

will read slowly slowly other stories

😊

Originally posted by: aparna3011

interesting

Originally posted by: crazydream

Congrats on new story.

I really like they way u write. This is my second ff of urs n I must say u r a creative writer and our new found gem.

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Finally I am here to comment..😃

Someone clap for me..

Fine if not any one I will clap for myself..👏😆

Okay now coming to update

Yeh kya spoorthi.. Shuru mein hi sad sad hogaya mera Maan!!

Suspension se itna depressed hogaya..

Jaldi se koi pyaari si ladki bhejo uski life who will be like some lightness in his darkened life..

okay itna darkened bhi nahi hai but atleast he feel so na..

aur yeh kya mud kar ek baar bhi nahi dekha us ladki and she desperately wants to thank him..

bechara itna doob gaya apni pareshaniyon mein..

well lets see what is in store for him..

Aur what is the reason for his suspension dear?!

I have one reason in my mind but I will let u know only wen u reveal the actual reason...

Tab tak waiting to know what is the actual reason for maan's failure..

and also waiting for next update...