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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

NICE

So Maan's suspended, kyun?

Geet injured, kyun?

He wants his parents and siblings to be proud of him like any other individual really, hope he can make it. Don't worry Maan, I'm with you 😆😆

She thinks she's unlucky, interesting but I'm sure with the introduction of Maan in her life that luck would be the only factor in her life 😉

Do Continue but let me warn you I'm not much of a fan of army based stories, the only one I read is Rescuing Heaven/Searing heaven which has a similar plot but revolving around politics. BUT since its Spoorthi, I don't mind so you'll see me around

Good luck and cant wait for this story to begin, ARMY STYLE 😆😆

Edited by sophiexx - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

congrats on the new story! interesting start! Maan a suspend army officer saves Geet! update soon

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

beautiful start..specially the whole mood that was set and the title..
"Every day brings a new opportunity to go beyond the horizon" (mera nahi online quote hai!)
hope Maan also finds a one, which will make himself proud about it, setting an example to others..

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sophiexx
NICE

So Maan's suspended, kyun?

Geet injured, kyun?

He wants his parents and siblings to be proud of him like any other individual really, hope he can make it. Don't worry Maan, I'm with you 😆😆

She thinks she's unlucky, interesting but I'm sure with the introduction of Maan in her life that luck would be the only factor in her life 😉

Do Continue but let me warn you I'm not much of a fan of army based stories, the only one I read is Rescuing Heaven/Searing heaven which has a similar plot but revolving around politics. BUT since its Spoorthi, I don't mind so you'll see me around

Good luck and cant wait for this story to begin, ARMY STYLE 😆😆

Yaar its just the intro n it isn't anywhere related to army or politics😆

N rescuing Heaven I can't even imagine writing something like that!!

That one story is beyond perfection for me... n my favourite too of u don't know!😊

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
congrats on the new story! interesting start! Maan a suspend army officer saves Geet! update soon

Thanks for reading! 😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
beautiful start..specially the whole mood that was set and the title..
"Every day brings a new opportunity to go beyond the horizon" (mera nahi online quote hai!)
hope Maan also finds a one, which will make himself proud about it, setting an example to others..

Glad u liked it! 😃

And the quote. .. maine bhi dekha 😆

N there is one more jo I'll use in the story!!

See now I feel I'm perfectly alright. .. I was so blank from the past month or so that I couldn't come up with a new story😲

Ab post kardiya tho neend bhi achi ayi😃

Thanks for being here

Glad u liked it!