Maneet OS Shaam , Complete ,Part 2 page 4 , updated! - Page 2

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thanks for so much encouragement
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im really glad you liked it : )

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nice story...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

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thank you for such encouraging comments
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Hi guys... I hope you like this ... This is a next part of this os i hope you like it and if you dud..then please hit like and leave your precious comments .

Last part

It was 9 .30 ... And the rain slowly got more heavier...and the peacefulr monsoon night was turned into a stormy night.

Geet opened her eyes... She couldnt sleep as this kind of wheather reminded her of that night when she left her village and all the goons were behind her... And a very kind hearted man... Maan ... Saved her... Their first meeting... Geet tried to sleep closing her eyes and embracing maan more tightly... But she couldnt...maan noticed that geet wasnt asleep... And he opened his eyes... To see her beautiful wife staring at him lovingly

G. Maan... I cant sleep..

M. Well... Actually its quite early to sleep now... Its just 9.35...

G. Humm... Yore right...

And maan sat on the bed... Geet got up as well ... And hugged him from behind... Resting her head on his shouler... her hands were on his bare chest... Maan softly carresed her hands. After few minutes, Geet walked on her knees on the bed and sat on the bed next to him

maan entwined his fingers with hers...and kissed her hand ... And they had an eyelock... Without breaking the eyelock...

G. Im feeling hungry... Ill go to the kitchen...

M.ok... ( and he cupps her face and kisses her forehead)

Geet leaves from there... And ...after picking an apple and a pear and putting it on the plate ... she was bringing the plate in the hall and ... She slipped...fortunately... She fell on maan... With her hands on his bare chest... In that moment geet got lost in his eyes... Those dark brown eyes... And the same happened with maan... Staring at those beautiful light brown eyes... And his hands went to to stop on her waist ...

M. Are you ok geet? R u hurt??

G. How can i get hurt if you r here ??? I fell on you... But...wait a minute.. R u hurt??

M. Na...

And he smirked after saying this... And maan tightened his grip on her ...

M. Waise... Mujhe koi problem nahi hai... Par... Yaha r...aise rehna ka urada hai kya?? Aise Comfortable hai na ??( and he smirked after sayimg this)

geet smiled after hearing that, and got up... Maan also got up.. and picked the fruit ...kept it on the plate after washing them... And then he took the knife in orfer to cut the fruit...geet was looking at him ... Lovingly...

M. Today... I will cut the fruit my sweet wife ...

G. Alright...

And then... both left to their room..

Geet couldn't take her eyes off maan.. who was cutting the fruit... and .. when maan was done cutting.. he took the slice of apple and fed it to geet... who was just spellbound by her loving husband... even after a tiring day .. cut and even fed her fruit... those moments were the best for her... moments to cherish... with her beloved husband. This was the most beautiful evening of her life.


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Thanks im glad that u liked it :)
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Beautiful!! Loved it completely.😊
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superb update! well written! wonderful end!
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Thanks a lot!!!!! I cant tell im so happy that you enjoyed!
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Awesum os. Thanks for sharing dear...

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