Maneet OS Shaam , Complete ,Part 2 page 4 , updated!

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hey guys... im new to this forum.. but a huge huge huge fan of maneet ... so.. thought of writing an os on them... hope you like it and please hit like adn leave your feedback.. and tell me if i should continue writing . Well enjoy

Shaam

It was sunday evening of July ... and Geet was standing In their bedroom... ... Near the window... Facing it and ... admiring the beautiful evening ...it was cloudy.. as if in few minutes is going to rain... suddenly .. she felt ... A pair of strong muscular arms held her And pulled her towards him... Her back hit his bare chest... cold chest ... and a bit wet ... he had just taken shower... she could feel his male cologne ... ... She turned around ... being locked in his arms ... to see her husband ... Mr maan singh khurana standing there . ... lost in the beauty of his wife...

Geet rested her head on his bare chest ... and embracing him... he tightened his grip on her waist... and in a while... hugged her back... he felt like heaven whenever he feels her body close to his... he feels like evry problem is gone...

Geet broke the hug...

G. go dry yourself and wear sth otherwise youre going to catch a cold...

M. na... today i want to...

And saying this .. he pushes geet to the bed... With him above her. ... And maan got close to her and kissed her cheek... geet was shocked at this .. but then ... she understood that today.. maan was in no mood of being serious...

Geet softly caresses his cheeks ... and places a wet kiss on his cheek... and then on his forehead... maan turned over... getting geet on him... and tightening his grip on her waist...

M. my geet... my beautiful geet
G. just let me go .. ill come in a minute ( she says trying to gt up )
M. but...
G. just a minute
M. ok...

And he releases her ... she goes to the cupboard and take s out a towel... and ... sits on the bed... maan sits on the bed as well... and geet stsarts tapping dry his chest... maan gets lost in geets eyes... those eyes.. in which he found so much ... and unconditional love for him... geet touched his back.. indicating him to incline ... and he did. he leaned towards her .. and geet patted dry his back... maan rested his chin on geets shoulder ...

G. done...
M . thanks a lot
G. oh. ... please ... maan... dont say thank you...

And she got up to keep the towel on the chair... she came back... and rested on the bed... both maan and geet were about to sleep... but... it started raining heavily ... and .. geet turned to see maan... who was stuggling as well to sleep...

G. maan.. maan
M. what happened geet? is everything alright?
G. how can it be alright ? its raing and i cant sleep...
M. but why? you like rain right?
G. yes .. but not this much hard...

At that moment .. tyhey heard a strong noise .. it was the thunder... and geet got really afraid and hugged maan... very tightly...

G. .. oh.. my god... i think its a storm...
M. relax geet... dont worry.. im with you..

and he carreses her hair.. and places a kiss on her head... and then he broke the hug...

m. dont worry... evrything will be alright.. acha .. look.. talk to me... in some time.. the storm will end .. hopefully and then well sleep... anyhow ., its quite early to sleep...

G. talk?????""!!! now??!
M. are geet .. look. a cockroach!
G. uhhh!!! whre ?????

And this time... she huggs him even more tighter... maan smirks... and hugs her back... placing a soft and gentle kiss on her neck...

M. oho my wife...!!!! there isnt any cockroach in here ! i was just trying to divert your attention! ...

G. ,maan!!! you cant do this!
M. why cant i .. everything is fair in love and war.! and look.. no thunder now... its only raining .. and that too. softly...

G. thanks maan...
m. for this.. no need to thank me...
G. not for this ... i mean.. not only for this.. but for coming into my life...
M. no geet... thsnk you... youre the one who gave a reason to live... and to dream... i love you geet...
G. i love you too maan..

And she kisses his cheek... and hides her face in the crook of his neck... and embracing him... maan brojke the hug.. but only to ... kiss her .. very lightly on her forehead... and embracing her again.


I hope hyou guys liked it... please if you liked it .. hit the like button and comment .. good or bad all r welcome!

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thanks im glad you liked it!
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hi congrats on the OS! lovely OS! superbly written!
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thanks for such encouraging comments!
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That was a Lovely and Sweet OS

both Geet and Geet already married and he tries to divert his wife mind from the raging storm that is just awesome

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Thanks very very very much for the lovely comments
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Thanks for the lovely comments!
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Hmmm very nice hun.. Maaneet romantic.. Sooo sweet.. Is there a next part? I would pove another part..
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ill post another part as the response is really good
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Congrats fr writing.. Very sweet os... Hope to read more.

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