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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

I came, I saw...you conquered!

I read I giggled, I blushed. I had aww moments and I had issh moments.

But in all I loved😃

You tube fans huh?😆

You betcha!!😛

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Hi Nishu ji 😆

HP Maan 😉

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Susegad
I came, I saw...you conquered!
I read I giggled, I blushed. I had aww moments and I had issh moments.
But in all I loved😃

You tube fans huh?😆

You betcha!!😛

Thankoo😃

glad u got to read it🤗

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC
Hi Nishu ji 😆

HP Maan 😉

haiye!

my fav

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: dqno1
haiye!

my fav

Yeh dekhte hi, I instantly reminded of u 😃😳

HP Maan 😉

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Yeh dekhte hi, I instantly reminded of u😃😳
HP Maan😉

baal ko kya kiya is pic mein? 😆

though the expression is pure khadus MSK

mujhe purple shirt, Onir ka fav, wala bhi pasand hai with Geet in white Anarkali 😃

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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979861

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Avi ...
What an entertaining piece!!!! Enjoyed it to the core.
Very beautiful !
The ambience that created with your words and the song. I could feel every emotion. His restlessness ,jealousy,impatience and her pure love.
There certain lines in your story that sends a message. If you want you can grasp it and implement in your life.
Beautiful n only beautiful is the word i can come up with now.
I m lost in that snow world.
Thankyou for writing.
Keep writing!!!
You are a precious gem of our forum.
Zada phul mat jaana...
AUR haan write short stories more often. 😊

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Just saw the banner...
Its beautiful ❤️

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

A beautiful OS Avi 👏

A lot like love and entertainment. [;) Loved how you mixed and matched the reality with the reel world and made a wonderful story with all the drama included.

The orange blobs 😡 😡 here too 😆

Meera's narration 😉 Aise kaise miss kiya usne ... I guess sirf bola ki nahi dekh rahi... but actrually chup chup ke dekha hoga 😆

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: dqno1

baal ko kya kiya is pic mein? 😆

though the expression is pure khadus MSK

mujhe purple shirt, Onir ka fav, wala bhi pasand hai with Geet in white Anarkali 😃

Hayee.. marjawah!!

Me loves purple 😳 😳 😳